Difficult question for any man to answer: To follow his dreams no matter what, or give in slowly and let life lead him where it will. The further I get, the less sure I am of anything. Who know what is good for a man in this life? And who can tell a man what shall be after him under the sun?

Yankee

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Though your text is rather philosophical (thus lending itself to sentences that might require some work for interpretation), I still find the last sentence odd/oddly worded. I don't know whether you are talking about what will come next at any given point in someone's life or whether you are referring to what happens or comes to life after a man dies. And, of course, "be after someone" can also mean "pursue someone".

In addition, you should write "Who knows". ”

Jackson6612

“I don't think you should take a certain sentence as oddly worded if it is open to multiple interpretations.”

I strongly disagree with that. I purposely acknowledged the fact that I realized your text was rather philosophical in the hope that you would better understand just how oddly worded I found that sentence to be. To me, it only seems like a poorly written attempt at a philosophical statement.

Of course, that's only my personal and professional opinion.

I was disagreeing with the fact that you seemed to be saying that it is "wrong" to view a sentence as being oddly or poorly written if the sentence is intended to be philosophical. I think philosophical sentences ought to be well-written too.