Do I need to add 'but'?

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Chrismlangan

#448046 Fri, 30 Nov 07 04:18 AM

The teacher’s peremptory tone immediately silenced the once rowdy, [but?] now fearful, students

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CalifJim

#448068 Fri, 30 Nov 07 05:41 AM

No. You don't have to. But you can, and it might make the thought more clear for some readers. Your choice.

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