Does the below make sense?!

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Andyw12345  #474853  Sat, 09 Feb 08 01:08 PM

Hi everybody,

Does the below make sense:

The concept will be of greater value to organisations who...

Thanks in advance for your help!

  
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Many thanks, Andy
Andyw12345  #474865  Sat, 09 Feb 08 01:38 PM
Cany anybody help? :-)
  
Slacker11  #474874  Sat, 09 Feb 08 02:07 PM

It sounds fine to me,

however I'd replace "who" by "that"

  
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Maple  #474881  Sat, 09 Feb 08 02:32 PM
It makes sense to me.
  
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Andyw12345  #474884  Sat, 09 Feb 08 02:39 PM
Thanks guys - much appreciated!
  
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