Does the below make sense?!

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	Andyw12345  #474853  Sat, 09 Feb 08 01:08 PM Hi everybody, Does the below make sense: The concept will be of greater value to organisations who... Thanks in advance for your help!    Andyw12345 Joined on Thu, Jan 31 2008 Full Member (282) Many thanks, Andy

	Andyw12345  #474865  Sat, 09 Feb 08 01:38 PM Cany anybody help? :-)    Andyw12345

	Slacker11  #474874  Sat, 09 Feb 08 02:07 PM It sounds fine to me, however I'd replace "who" by "that"    Slacker11 Joined on Fri, Feb 1 2008 Brazil New Member (16) Whether you believe you can do a thing or not, you're right. Henry Ford

	Maple  #474881  Sat, 09 Feb 08 02:32 PM It makes sense to me.    Maple Joined on Tue, Jul 11 2006 An ESL student in China Contributing Member (1,110)

	Andyw12345  #474884  Sat, 09 Feb 08 02:39 PM Thanks guys - much appreciated!    Andyw12345