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#591456 Sun, 23 Nov 08 07:15 AM

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The Cold War was an arms race and power struggle between the Union of Soviet Socialist Republics (USSR) and the United States that threatened the ideology of government and democracy of both nations, and lasted over forty-five years

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Mister Micawber

#591604 Sun, 23 Nov 08 10:06 AM

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Almost. ' Democracy' seems lost in there. Perhaps:

The Cold War was an arms race and power struggle between the Union of Soviet Socialist Republics (USSR) and the United States that threatened the political ideologies of both nations and lasted over forty-five years.
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