drew an analogy/made a comparison between between an essay and a sandwich

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Angliholic  #453307  Sat, 15 Dec 07 02:19 AM

The teacher drew an analogy between an essay and a sandwich to teach students how to organize their writing.

The teacher made a comparisoon between ...

Do both of the above sound right and mean about the same? Thanks.

  
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CalifJim  #453345  Sat, 15 Dec 07 05:08 AM
Either one makes sense on its own, but, though very similar, they are not exactly the same.

When you draw an analogy you are doing more than just making a comparison.  An analogy is more detailed.  You have the phenomenon to be explained with parts A, B, C, D, E.  The analogous phenomenon has parts a, b, c, d, e.  You show how the relationships among a, b, c, d, e are present in what you are trying to explain -- in the form of the relationships between A, B, C, D, E.  I would call an analogy an extended, complex comparison.  Analogies often occur between very dissimilar systems of relationships.  On the other hand, comparisons are usually made in a simpler way between two individual things that are generally in the same category of things.  Essays and sandwiches are very dissimilar, to my mind, so I believe that the better word is analogy in your example.

CJ

  
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Angliholic  #453384  Sat, 15 Dec 07 09:21 AM

Thanks, Jim, for the elaborate explanation.

I've read many times to get it.

Roger!

  
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