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3 -describing hometown

Hometown is the place that we living in and we grow up in this place. The places we live in express our cultures and habits. We usually affect from the place we live in. The people dress, the way they speak and the types of food they like. 

My neighborhood is fantastic. It is located around Barka suq near the beach. The environment in my neighborhood is excellent. For example, the weather is cold in the morning. It is cold because, it is near the beach. In addition, in my neighborhood several services are being offered. For instance, there are some petrol stations. There are two near AL-kafya shopping center and another one is in front of business firms, exactly behind Safeer shop. As well, there are several big shopping centers, where you can find what you need. There are some after Barka round-bouts and others across the Barka suq. There are two big mosques, one is next to the Halwa factory and another one is near the suq, behind the library shop. In my hometown, there many restaurants. There are some inside the suq and some near the houses. Furthermore, the system of transportation is reasonable. Roads are good as public transport. There two travel agencies. One is near the bank Muscat and another one is after Barka round-bouts, near the   cell shop. But unfortunately, the taxis services are dreadful. It is difficult to find taxi. In addition, my hometown characterize by peaceful. It is less polluted and less crime. There are not too much noise and few cars. Also, there are some wonderful places that tourists frequent them between period and another. Like, beach, fort and shopping centers. The most think that I like in my neighborhood is the people who live in. they are very friendly and helpful. They are always ready to help. They often help each other and share in all occasions together.

Finally, we have our good memories in our hometown and childhood friends are our nearer friends. It is imperative to develop warm convivial social relationship with our neighbors. We resort to them when we face problem, they share us in all type occasions. These are something about my hometown.  

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