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NL888

#522363 Tue, 03 Jun 08 10:08 AM

Edit it please:

I like Clinton, who has told us a miracle from a common boy to the President of the United States, yet he remains the image of being an ordinary citizen.

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Marius Hancu

#522370 Tue, 03 Jun 08 10:47 AM

has told us a miracle

where did you get this from?

search Google Books for such critical patters before posting

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NL888

#522416 Tue, 03 Jun 08 01:33 PM

It is understandable that you dislike such kind of eulogizing.

I edit the sentence like this:

I like Clinton, who has told us a good story from a common boy growing up to be the President of the United States, yet he remains the image of being an ordinary citizen.

Do you agree with me, Marius Hancu?

NL888

Marius Hancu

#522425 Tue, 03 Jun 08 01:59 PM

Perhaps:

I like Clinton, who has told us the good story of a common boy growing up to be the President of the United States, yet he remains the image of being an ordinary citizen.

Marius Hancu