Email- KIndly Chk Sentences for me :)

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happyhour123

#537572 Mon, 07 Jul 08 02:56 AM

Hi, Kindly chk the sentences for me, thks ..

Dear ***,

Refer to previous email , you’ve told us that you can commence your audit fieldwork in 1^st or 2^nd week of July. And this is to remind you again that Annual General Meeting (AGM) of our company is due on 31^st July 2008.
Ms ***

happyhour123

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Abil

#537627 Mon, 07 Jul 08 07:32 AM

Hi happyhour,

I would have added "your" after "Refer to".

Since it is a formal letter, you should write "you have informed us" instead of "told us" and "in the first or second week of " instead of "in 1st or 2nd week of".

This is my correction. I hope others will come by and go over it.

Abil

Joined on Wed, Jun 11 2008

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Yoong Liat

#544935 Tue, 22 Jul 08 11:40 AM

happyhour123
Dear ***,

Refer to previous email , you’ve told us that you can commence your audit fieldwork in 1^st or 2^nd week of July. And this is to remind you again that Annual General Meeting (AGM) of our company is due on 31^st July 2008.
Ms ***

Please refer to your previous email. You've infomred us that you can commence your audit fieldwork in the first or second of week of July. This is to remind you that the Annual General Meeting of our company will be held on 31^st July 2008.

Ms ***

Yoong Liat

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Yoong Liat

happyhour123

#545201 Wed, 23 Jul 08 01:59 AM

Hi, Thks for the late reply :-)

happyhour123

Yoong Liat

#545292 Wed, 23 Jul 08 04:50 AM

Sorry for the delay. I've about 500 posts not opened yet as I had been busy the past few days.

Yoong Liat

happyhour123

#545333 Wed, 23 Jul 08 08:08 AM

Is okie, this website is just for people these people who want to improve the english & . (part time only) Actually is not your duty and responsibili"ty must" reply our question :-)

happyhour123