employer's letter for visa application

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May you pleae proofread this letter for me, its for a visa application from an employer. thank you.

Dear Sir or Madam

We write on behalf of employee NAME, DOB whom we have offered a job as a parenterol nutrition pharmacist for our branch in Asia and needs to travel to the United States to complete a postgraduate course in Nutrition and food Management.

This course is a requirement for this position and is crucial to our company’s expansion into the parentorol nutrition field. She will spend a year in the United States at the University Of Texas studying for a master’s degree in Nutrition and Food Management after which she will be required to take up her position with the company. Miss M will not be undertaking any work whilst in United States and will return to Asia at the end of her studies.

Should you have any quiries or require any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me.

Thank you for your assistance

Sincerely,

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Hi jegedo3, and welcome to English Forums.

Your letter is in very good shape.

Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing on behalf of employee NAME, DOB, who will be working for our company, name of company, as a parenterol nutrition [note: are you sure this isn't "parenteral nutrition"?] for our branch in Asia. employee name needs to travel for the purpose of studying to the United States to complete a master's degree in Nutrition and Food Management.

This coursework is a requirement for this position and is crucial to our company’s expansion into the parentorol [check spelling] nutrition field. She will spend a year in the United States at the University of Texas studying for her master’s degree. Upon completing her studies, she will be assume her duties with name of company in country. Employee name will not be undertaking any paid work whilst in United States.

If you have any questions or require any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me.

Thank you for your assistance

Sincerely,
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