Hi there,
I am writing a content for my website. Do you think this phrases have the impact towards reader?
"If you are a Malaysia designers and looking for some extra pocket
money as a freelancer, look no further. Register and upload your
profile here for FREE!. The purpose of this website is to gather all
talented freelance Malaysia designers regardless of your design field.
I do believe Malaysia have a lot of talented designers who can produce
high quality world class work. Lets make us proud and show our talent
to the world.." - Founder - Dave
My website main objective is to attract Malaysia freelance designers (My beloved Country) to join and provide design services to the world. I want to make an impact with word to make designers feel proud to be Malaysian and feel that we do can provide Quality Design to the world.
Is there any suggestion to make this phrases more powerful and more impact?
Regards,
Dave