"equanimous nature"?

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Anonymous  #514642  Sat, 17 May 08 01:56 AM
"The cradle of life confronting man in an equanimous, steadfast, unrelated way."

Supposed that "nature" is seen poetical as a "living character", it can be "equanimous"?

  
Feebs11  #514653  Sat, 17 May 08 02:33 AM
 To be equanimous is to have a calm nature.
  
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Anonymous  #514844  Sat, 17 May 08 02:00 PM
Yes, but is it OK to use it in this context? 
  
Marius Hancu  #514896  Sat, 17 May 08 04:21 PM
 If this is your writing, I'd say it's too heavy and pretentious, but perhaps we need more context. Relax.
  
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Anonymous  #514917  Sat, 17 May 08 04:45 PM
Thanks. Then it's alright, because it's just the description of a dramatic instrumental song, the dark side of romanticism.
  
Avangi  #514920  Sat, 17 May 08 04:57 PM

Before you relax totally, your sentence needs a verb.  (unless its a line of verse)

I've never heard or seen this word before (only the noun version).  Thanks for a new experience.  Go for it!

--A.

  
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Anonymous  #514923  Sat, 17 May 08 05:04 PM
Hm, if "equanimous" is that rare, maybe "imperturbable" would fit as well?
  
Avangi  #514926  Sat, 17 May 08 05:11 PM

Hi, Anon,

I read your line five times before I realized your word is "unrelated."  I read it as "unrelenting," because of the context.  Do you really mean, "unrelated"??  It doesn't seem very "confrontational."

  - A.

  
Anonymous  #514972  Sat, 17 May 08 07:51 PM
Oh yes, "unrelenting" probably fits better than "unrelated", thanks! 
  
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