Hello to everybody,
I find this site very helpful and I used some tips and coments on other posts before writing my own motivation letter to university.
I'm not native english speaker, so can I ask your help in correcting this letter (words, grammar) or if something isn't really convenient to write, please comment.
Thank you in advance,
Here is letter:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to express my interest
for admission to a master program Cultural Economics and Cultural
Entrepreneurship within *** university.
I have completed four years of undergraduate
studies in Tourism and Hospitality management and after graduating I was
certain that I want to undertake a postgraduate study. During studies I became
very interested in the culture and its affect to tourism and sustainable
development of economics. My graduation paper was related to renovation of
cultural architectural objects and its impact for surrounding territory and
economics where I reviewed the problem of cultural heritage in ***country
and came to conclusion that culture can create the balance between material
world and society. (for me it seems unfinished here, but I was not able to make a "bridge")
Regarding my career aspirations working
in cultural industries and becoming a manager of cultural organization I want
to obtain Master's degree in cultural entrepreneurship. This knowledge will
allow me to understand specific management principles what is needed in creative
industries and I will be able to fully realize my professional goals.
I am confident that I have the
necessary combination of self-motivation, background, personality and academic
knowledge to succeed in the Master’s degree program. I hope that my experience
at Erasmus University will equip me to manage my
future well and also prepare me to make significant contributions to the
development of my country.
Should I write some "looking forward... " -like sentence at the end?
Yours faithfully,
Name Surname