There are some very serious flaws with organization, facts, clarity of though, and grammar. I can see no relationship between adoption and the rest of what you talk about.
Single Parent Adoption How does this relate to single-parent adoption?
Part 1
You don't have an introduction statement. What is this about?
The trends of married couples today in taking care of their children are hiring a wet nurse or single-parent adoption. Is it seriously a trend where you live to hire a "wet nurse"? You realize that it means hiring another woman to breast feed the baby? I don't understand what single-parent adoption has to do with the trends of married couples.
In model life, married couples are following physical life and living in the less sentiment life. I'm very sorry, but this makes absolutely no sense at all. What do you mean?
Therefore, many couples are breaking to pieces -- do you mean "divorcing"? -- and their children will be under the influence of this failure.
Many researches have shown that taking care of children constantly by mum and dad from birth is increasing opportunity for children to develop all of their potentialities and ensure their health for growing up. Research has shown that having both parents involved in the child's care correlates to children who develop to their full potential and have the best health. [Really? You need to be able to cite these studies.]
Mum and dad are together taking care of their children constantly help to develop all of their potentiality. Both parents taking care of the child together will help children reach their full potential.
For example, a child is growing in a happy family will become a self-confident and powerful child. This is not a "for example." It's "That is to say," -- You seem to assume that every household with both parents is a happy household. It also seems to assume that if the parents don't live together they are not happy. And lastly, the entire statement is simply not true - a lot of children from "happy homes" have problems. You can say it's "more likely" but you can't say "will"
Living in with happy parents creates assistance provides support for the child to do anything.
In addition, when the child is a failure I would say "fails at a task" - if you say "is a failure" it says the entire life is a mess or obstructed by obstacles, he will know how to accept the situations or self-controlled have better self control? to find out the solution for problems if he is educated by his parents. "Parents can teach their children how to find solutions to problems when they are unsuccessful at completing a task or are confronted by obstacles." But what does this have to do with wether the parents are together or not? It's nonsense to say that only if the parents are together can they do this.
Ensuring children’s health for growing up is concerned by their nutrition. What? Proper nutrition helps ensure a growing child's good health, perhaps?
For example, when a baby at the breast is received the mother’s milk, he breast-fed babies will be inherited aborb antibodies from his parents their mothers which protect against diseases. In addition, a proper diet system for a child after the age of two years old is also important. Powdered milk or soy-bean milk provides is providing protein, sugar and vitamins for the child. Potato soup What an odd example! or baby foods is also providing also provides nitrogen, fiber and water water?? for the child. Therefore, a good care of nutrition is provided for children by parents are very important that help children’s growing up.This is completely redudant.
Your summary does not talk about what you actually talked about - you spent an entire paragraph on nutrition, but you don't mention it here.I have no idea what it has to do with adoption.
In summary, to ensure that children are growing up with good health and develop all of their potentialities, they must be took care by their parents. Child who will become success in future life is often living in a happy family has enough mum and dad. In model life, married couple relationships should be holds fast by society to guarantee a good parents adoption.