essay topic: zoo

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Essay topic: if the the zoo has no useful purpose

Zoo serves as an attraction to people.Most of us enjoy watching different kinds of animals in the zoo.We are so amazed in looking and observing them.However we should consider if the zoo is beneficial ti people or harmful to animals.

Keepin the animals in the zoo has its benefits to people. most of us like viewing animals because it entertain and amuse us.We appreciate mor watching animals in variety compared as to looking at them in television. We can take a close look of how they look like for real. We are so curious how they behave, move and make sounds to communicate to their own species and to people as well.

In addition, zoo is utilized fro eduactional purposes such as field trips. Children are usually involved in this kind of activity to learn more about the animal kingdom.They will have the opportunity to see a variety of animals in different shapes and forms. Children will know their role in the environment.

Another use of the zoo is to keep wild animals from harming and killing people.Groups of animals can be seen in the forest and wandering in woods which can be very dangerous for people to come close to them.

On the other hand, there are some unfavorable us eof the zoo to animals. When animals stay in the zoo, people are dpriving them of freedom to live in a normal life in the forests and fields.Animals should stay in their normal habitat.We have the responsibilities to protect, nurture and preserving them in our environment.

Despite the fact that there are some disadvantages of having a zoo.I firmly believe that we still benefit more form it.Without the zoo observing the animals in real life is limited.

NOte.I will apreciate those people who will proof read my essay. Please let me know if there are errors.

If you still have any idea from this essay, I will be glad to know.

Thanks.
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The correct version is

Do zoos have a purpose?
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Help! Please let me know if there is any correction to be made in this topic.Thanks

Essay topic: do you agree that the zoo has no useful purpose? why or why not?

Zoo serves as an attraction to people.Most of us enjoy watching different kinds of animals in the zoo.We are so amazed in looking and observing them.However, we should consider if the zoo is beneficial to people or harmful to animals.

Keeping the animals in the zoo has its benefits to people. Most of us like viewing animals because it entertain and amuse us.We appreciate more watching animals in variety compared as to looking at them in television. We can take a closer look at them. We are so curious how they behave, move and make sounds to communicate to their own species and to people as well.

In addition, zoo is utilized for eduactional purposes such as field trips. Children are usually involved in this kind of activity to learn more about the animal kingdom.They will have the opportunity to see a variety of animals in different shapes and forms. Children will know their role in the environment.

Another use of the zoo is to keep wild animals from harming and killing people.Groups of animals can be seen in the forest and wandering in woods which can be very dangerous for people to come close to them.

On the other hand, there are some unfavorable use of the zoo to animals. When animals stay in the zoo, people are depriving them of freedom to live in a normal life in the forests and fields. Animals should stay in their normal habitat.We have the responsibilities to protect, nurture and preserving them in our environment.

Despite the fact that there are some disadvantages of having a zoo, I firmly believe that we still benefit more from it.Without the zoo observing the animals in real life is limited.

NOte.I will apreciate those people who will proof read my essay.

If you still have any idea from this essay, I will be glad to know.

Thanks.
yes thanks for correction.The question is like this.Do you agree/disagree that a zoo has purpose? Explain.
Hi! Thanks for correction.The whole question goes like this.Do you agree/disagree that a zoo has purpose? Explain.
Anonymous:
There are some grammar mistakes, but I think is a good essay. still I do not agree with the fact that you say that it is not cruel for animals to have them shut into little spaces just to show them off just to enjoy people
Anonymous:
you rote a nice eassy
thank you for that
Anonymous:
oh!your essay helped me a lot with my english comporition)
a lot of useful and cleaver information and thoughts!
thanks a lot!!
Anonymous:
there are some spellings error.

other ideas is that most peoplehave the chance to see endangered specis in our zoos
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