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When people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the customs of the new country. Others prefer to keep their own customs. Compare these two choices. Which one do you prefer? Support your answer with specific details. >>
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When immigrants, emigrating from their own countries to another country, prefer preserving their original cultural heritage to changing the ways of life, such as ideas, religion, or beliefs, I don’t agree with this assertion. Now that people decide to leave their own motherland and settle in other countries permanently, they had better integrate themselves into a new society whose culture is so different from their own, helping them adapt to a new milieu. However, if they don’t give up their original customs, it will be difficult for them to become real members of a country where they move to.
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It is some immigrants who don’t follow the customs of a new country that preserve their own traditional cultures. chemas-microsoft-com:office![Tongue Tied [:S]](/emoticons/emotion-7.gif)
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It is immigrants who integrate themselves into a new social culture that melt into a new environment, enabling them to enjoy and enrich their life. What is the best way of adapting to a new environment is to follow their customs, in terms of the celebration of holidays and festivals. My aunt can serve as good example. When she moved to lace>Americalace>, she started to change her attitude toward identifying American cultures. She gradually abandoned the customs of lace>Taiwanlace> and spent lots of time studying lace>Americalace> culture in order to improve the understanding of the real lace>Americalace>. She took the initiative to participate in the celebration of festivals including Thanksgiving Day, Christmas Eve and Christmas Day. The time when she is immersed in the American customs helps her cut into the American culture. Only when immigrants overcome culture shock and adapt to the new cultural recognition do they become members of the new country. >>
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While some people prefer protecting their original cultural recognition to following the customs of a new country where they move to, I choose to differ. As is known, there are a variety of motivations for people to emigrate from their own nation to other countries, some of whom are eager to pursue wealth, some of whom purely change the way they live, and some of whom are in pursuit of knowledge. As a matter of fact, to pursue a life full of excitement and enjoyment, I claim that immigrants ought to follow the customs of a new country rather than insist on the importance of their original cultural heritage.