how to explain the usage of the ergative verb?

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Marius Hancu  #504946  Thu, 24 Apr 08 06:40 PM
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 The usage "turnover was increased" doesn't sound right because it suggests there is an agent actively involved in increasing turnover, which is what companies try to avoid

 

OK, yes, this is the only reason to avoid that in this context

It's not valid for increasing other parameters.  

  
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ganesh77  #504948  Thu, 24 Apr 08 06:48 PM
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A thousand thank yous for affirming that this usage doesn't work because of the particular context it is embedded in. That's something tangible to explain to the trainees. 

  
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Goodman  #504950  Thu, 24 Apr 08 06:58 PM
Hi Ganesh77,
<<>>  The sentence "Last year, turnover was increased by 20%" is called a 'common mistake' in my course book.

I just need to throw in my 2 cents….

As already explained “turnover” (as in employee turnover) is a noun. If a company for some unknown reasons was unable to retain the employees it has hired, that’s commonly known as a “turnover” in the US. I see nothing wrong in this passive sentence. I know, you insist that its “passive status” is wrong.  But in my opinion, it’s perfectly grammatically and legally correct. (nod) Nodding

  
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ganesh77  #504952  Thu, 24 Apr 08 07:06 PM
 Yet I can't imagine a situation in which two managers are sitting down having a coffee and one turns to the other and says, "you know, last year turnover was increased by 20%".  I can imagine someone saying, "you know, last year turnover increased by 20%".
  
Avangi  #504956  Thu, 24 Apr 08 07:30 PM

Hi again ganesh,

I urge you to look at

http://www.flinders.edu.au/SLC/Brochures/active_passive.pdf

Look at page 2, Middle Voice

This seems to be at odds with what you're telling us your textbook says, and seems to suggest a source of the confusion about the  "no agent accepted" controversy.

I'm sure there's more pertinent stuff available out there, but as I said previously, this is new to me.

Best wishes,  - A.

  
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Grammar Geek  #504959  Thu, 24 Apr 08 07:37 PM

Okay, several points here.

Yes, employee turnover is something we try to avoid. If you recall, one of the reasons to use the passive is when you don't want to identify the agent - in other words, stupid management decisions. Avangi's example was perfect.

Next, while employee turnover is a bad thing, inventory turnover is a good thing!

Through an aggressive marketing program and retailer incentives, inventory turnover was increased by 20%.

There's nothing wrong with that.

I think the "rule" in your grammar book is wrong, and you can say simply that your conversations with native speakers affirmed your belief in that. What they need to work on instead is understand the difference between the transitive and ergative aspects of some of these verbs, and make sure they are using them the right way for their intended meaning.

 

  
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Avangi  #504967  Thu, 24 Apr 08 08:09 PM

Here I go beating a dead horse one more time.

When you approach the ergative verb issue from the point of view of active voice, passive voice and middle voice  (instead of transitive verb and intransitive verb) you come face to face with the "agent" business. 

active  I broke the window   (I am the agent who broke the window)

passive   The window was broken by me  (I am the agent)

passive    The window was broken  (the agent is somebody  -  unspecified but clearly implied)

"middle voice"   The window broke  (there is no agent, nor is one implied, nor may one be accepted)   designed to please management? ?

"middle voice"   The window broke by me  (this version is not possible   -   it's wrong   -   it's incorrect  -  nobody would ever say it)    management is still safe

ganesh  -   Would you entertain the possibility that the discussion of agents in your class book may have had something to do with this, rather than agents conspiring to make workers leave?

Very best wishes  - A.

  
Goodman  #504970  Thu, 24 Apr 08 08:16 PM

Ganesh77,
This is quite an interesting discussion. Your reference book obviously either steered you wrong or somewhere there is a misinterpretaion.(:)) Smile
<<<>>>I can imagine someone saying, "you know,
last year turnover increased by 20%".

Yes, you can! Let’s look at this sentence structure from a different angle.

Last week, the price of gas jumped 20 % from a week before. From glancing at it, it looks almost the same as your example. However, this is a valid active structure which is completely different than your.  You may have attempted to make it an active sentence but it just does not work the way you had it.  GG made a very good point, in passive structure, we don’t have to have an agent, like “stupid management”. So ‘was increased” implied an unspoken cause. But if you omit "was", the structure is invalid.

 

  
Marius Hancu  #504978  Thu, 24 Apr 08 08:27 PM

 > Next, while employee turnover is a bad thing, inventory turnover is a good thing!

GG is absolutely right here. 
  
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