Hi,
I've done my best to imporve this, although in someplaces I am not sure what you are trying to say.
Dear [name deleted by mod],:
I would like to appeal to you to give me a second chance to renew my contract that is soon to expire, on May 19, 2008.
Briefly, I was given the opportunity to become part of the IPAMs family in February,2006. I was last interviewed for the position of Nurse, to be deployed in Texas, USA . I passed the screening that time and was interested in the employment package offered by IPAMS.
Being part of the program, i was able to follow some of the instructions given by the office at that time to have my nclex review, which I did. To give you an insight into what happened to me during my two year contract with IPAMS, I courageously took IELTS at least three times, although I failed. In between my obligations, i got pregnant and, sad to say, I had a miscarriage.
I do not want to end my involvement with the program, although I would rather concentrate on reviewing for my nclex exam. I' am still trying to fulfill my dream of passing this
by studying more. Even though I have not yet [asses IELTS, I am glad that I still have support from the IPAMS family.
I hope I have made mys situation clear. I look forward to hearing from you.
Respectfully yours,
Best wishes, Clive