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Latest post Sun, Jan 23 2005 6:07 PM by the_mystic_dude. 4 replies.
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the_mystic_dude  +  69494 Sun, 23 Jan 05 06:07 PM
Hi! Please help me, I need to write a fan mail to a celebrity.

This was one of my sentences in my letter:

...
You always play your role with passion, commitment, and love. It is therefore sometimes hard for me to believe that the situations which you are portraying so awesomely and realistically are in fact not really taking place.
...


My questions are:

1) Can a "situation" "take place"? (happen and occur didn't sound good somehow)
2) Can one "portray" a "situation"?

and for another sentence:
3) What is the plural of "appendicitis"?


Thanks so much for your help!

Walt
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nona the brit  +  69715 Mon, 24 Jan 05 04:53 PM
1) Yes it sounds ok
2) Again, it sounds ok in this context, for an actor/actress

3)There is no plural for appendicitis, well, just appendicitis. I can't imagine a plural situation...multiple patients/sufferers yes, but not the actual disease.
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the_mystic_dude  +  69758 Mon, 24 Jan 05 08:43 PM
Great! Thanks a lot for your help!

You know, I'm a native speaker but sometimes I just can't think of the simplest things. Smile [:)]

Especially where letter-writing is concerned. I just wasn't sure if one can "portray a situation" or if the only correct form is to portray "a character."


Well, about the appendicitis thing, my sentence goes somehow like this.


....... you're not only a great actress, but you could also make use of the skills you learned in the hospital outside the ER, as in diagnosing appendicitis(es).

Clearly for any other words there should be the plural here, like "as in helping PEOPLE" or "as in diagnosing problemS"

Any ideas?

Thanks!

Walt
nona the brit  +  69786 Mon, 24 Jan 05 11:12 PM
No, it would be just plain old appendicitis.

Bit of a strange thing to say though, if you don't mind me commenting... fan mail is one thing, but don't go getting weird on her! The last thing you want to do is set off a 'stalker alert!'
the_mystic_dude  +  69951 Tue, 25 Jan 05 02:15 PM
lol thanks a lot. I'll leave appendicitis then.

No I don't mind your commenting, thanks, but you should know that she has talked about the whole appendicitis story quite often already on television, and my sentence (which is a bit different to what i posted) is supposed to be humorous, not stalkerish. I'm sure she'll understand it.Smile [:)]

Thank you so much for your help, what could I have done without you. I'll be printing and sending the letter tomorrow. I'm so glad somebody could help me with my three questions, I didn't want to send her a letter with grammatical mistakes.

thx again,

Walt
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