It wasn't easy for me to do this project because of the following reasons:

First of all, it was quite an issue for me to choose the most appropriate and most relevant materials.

Furthermore, it was hard for me to divide our work load equally, because the project is quite big. We thought that everyone would do a half of the sun-topics for each part.

Second, when I chose the articles the language was really complicated and it wasn't easy for me to understand all the words and to choose the key sentences.

BeginStudent

Hi ,
I have a little part to check from the project before I will give it tomorrow to my teacher.

This one paragraph  (Summary of the project):

 

It wasn't easy for me to do this project because of the following reasons: 

First of all, it was quite an issue for me to choose the most appropriate and most relevant materials. Furthermore, it was hard for me to divide our work load equally, because the project is quite big. We thought that everyone would do a half of the sun-topics for each part.  [You start with "me" and then refer to "we" - is there a previous reference to a group doing this research together?]

 Second, when I chose the articles the language was really complicated and it wasn't easy for me to understand all the words and to choose the key sentence. While doing this project the most interesting part for me was the reading because we didn't have to write a lot and all the printed material seemed rather interesting. Reading a lot of authentic English articles helped me a lot. I improved my writing skills and my vocabulary extended.

Second paragraph is :

3)How do peope spread heroin?

 

 

Heroin is being trafficked all over the world.The biggest producer is Afghanistan.According  to research, 87% of heroin is being produced in Afghanistan.Heroin is very easily distribute around the world because it can be compactly packed and easily concealed. Heroin is also being spread all over the world because People can swallow it [the small packages of heroin] like pills and during 24 hours [ 24 hours later] they can puke[vomit it up] easily  .

Those unfortunate people who swallow the "pills" may die because of it .The "pills" are little bit bigger than the normal size pills and it they can get stuck in the throat or it [the packets] may be torn inside the stomach and cause death, even without using the heroin as a drug .

 In conclusion, the heroin may be spread all over the world easily, but the consequences may be shocking .

paragraph  three is :

4)What is the history of heroin ?

 

 

Heroin was first discovered in 1847 1874 by C.R Alder Wright, a British chemist from London, by mixing different substances [what substances? and why?] together. Another scientist was Felix Hoffman.He [who also] created the heroin, not as a drug but as medicine to cure people. And he invented the heroin only two days after he discovered the aspirin.

 In 1914 , in the USA , the Harrison Narcotics Tax Act was passed to limit the production of heroin all over the country to reduce the number of users.By this law, heroin could be sold to consumers such as addicts that may lie to the seller.As we see, the law didn't reduce the number of users but; it just increased that number. In the UK, even though the heroin is considered as an 'A' class drug, it is still available on prescription.The heroin is as a painkiller drug .

In conclusion, we see that the history of heroin is a long term history and far back at the time [not particularly far back - heroin was only discovered in 1874] we can see that this drug has been used not just for addicted people but as a medicine as well.

What can you check i really  appraiser it .
Thanks.

 

HAve you said anywhere what heroin derives from? You also need to say that it was originally produced as a painkilling medicine, before its addictive nature was recognised. 

Hi,

You posted section 3 in another thread in the Forum. I edited it there.

Please don't post the same text in different places, OK?

Clive