Hey guys and girls.
This is the first time I post something here. I've seen you guys help a lot of people and it would be great if you could just read through this bit of text to see what you think.
Tekst (without my name, ...):
Concerning any current or
future employment as a First Officer at Brussels Airlines.
Dear Mr./Ms.
…,
I have
great aspirations for the future of Brussels Airlines and would love to be part
of the story. Ever since I was a few months old and made a first flight I forged
a connection with aviation. I would love to share this passion with Brussels
Airlines.
It is rare
to find a leading European establishment that provides the prospects of a long
interesting career and the dynamics of a young firm. The diverse fleet and
varied destinations across Europe and Africa are
very appealing to me. Contributing to a group that drives toward the further
success of the company dominating Brussels
Airport - the heart of
the E.U. – will always be a dream of mine. (I'm not sure if the reason is visible in here, what do you guys think?)
I chose Sabena Flight
Academy because they
force you to go beyond what is required from a JAA pilot. Through their high
level of experience I hope to offer the best of skills. This learning event, in
combination with: my strong sense of responsibility, team spirit, flexibility,
loyalty, and assertiveness could be of added value to Brussels Airlines.
In support
of my application, I eagerly await your feedback. (I need something to say that i need to meet face to face in here)
Yours
sincerely,
name
Thanks a lot
P.S.: I know it needs improving :-)