Dominik  +  632822 Tue, 06 Jan 09 07:34 PM  The wrong photo ha been sent to somebody and I would like to apology for that. Can you correct my mail?  Dear Mr Smith We are sorry about the mistake. Please accept our sincere apologies for the mistake. Please find attached a photo of the "TITLE" painting by Picasso. /  Please find attached the right photo. Yours sincerely Dominik Joined on Thu, Jun 1 2006 Poland Regular Member 585 "Start by doing what's necessary; then do what's possible; and suddenly you are doing the impossible." - St. Francis of Assisi... Yours Sincerely, Writing, Letters, Apologies, Mistakes, Arts

	Avangi  +  632834 Tue, 06 Jan 09 07:48 PM Your post sounds to me like you have a photo of a Picasso painting called "Title," or "The Title." I can't seem to confirm the existence of such a painting.  - A. Avangi Joined on Mon, Nov 19 2007 Veteran Member 8,180 ". . . le plaisir delicieux et toujours nouveau d'une occupation inutile." - Henri de Regnier Arts

	Dominik  +  632841 Tue, 06 Jan 09 08:02 PM TITLE means that I will put here the real title of the painting. The author (Picasso) is false.  Is the mail grammatically and  stylistically correct?  Dominik Arts

	Grammar Geek  +  632879 Tue, 06 Jan 09 08:40 PM  It's not good style to repeat a phrase twice in a row, and you don't say what the mistake actually was.   Dear Mr. Smith, As you know, we recently sent you the wrong photograph. We sincerely apologize for the error and any inconvenience it may have caused. Please find attached the correct photograph. Please let us know if there is anything else can help you with.  etc   Grammar Geek Joined on Tue, Jan 10 2006 Veteran Member 19,660 Barbara, who answers in American English. My housekeeping skills attest to the truth of the second law of thermodynamics: Left to themselves, things get more and more random! Styles, Mistakes

	Avangi  +  632947 Tue, 06 Jan 09 10:06 PM Dominik “TITLE means that I will put here the real title of the painting. ” Hi, My problem was with the article.  I probably would have said, "photo of the Picasso painting, TITLE," but I was wondering if it should be "The Title." Avangi Articles, Arts

	Dominik  +  632994 Tue, 06 Jan 09 11:08 PM Thak you very much for your replies. I understand that it should be  "correct photo" onstead of "right photo" What is a difference between "mistake" and "error"?  Dominik Difference Between, Mistakes

	Grammar Geek  +  633065 Wed, 07 Jan 09 12:40 AM  Very little. I chose to use "error." You can say "mistake."  It's a formal apology. Say "photograph" not "photo." Grammar Geek Mistakes

	cbsteh  +  633141 Wed, 07 Jan 09 02:06 AM The suggested correction is good EXCEPT: Delete "sincere" from "sincere apologies". Our apologies should be sincere and does not have to be stated explicitly so. A sincere reply by: Chris cbsteh Joined on Wed, Dec 17 2008 Full Member 408 "Extraordinary claims require extraordinary evidence" Apologies