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Hi there! I'd appreciate it if someone could take a look at this informal letter asking for advice and tell me what should I correct. The situation is that my friend need visit other places so,Here's the letter: Dear Pat, Thanks for you letter it was great to hear from you. I haven't written for months, because I've been really busy with my job. I have to say that you've taken a good decision. The best time to come is during February , I will come pick you up at the Bogotá airport. First of all, I know you really like natural parks! So, how about we visit the forest reserve? Secondly, I have recommended visit to natural Park Tayrona, because this place it's beautiful for sightings of flora and fauna, especially birds in danger of extinction. Third,this national park has many activities, for example, natural swimming pool, bird watching this is great place! You can also go horseback riding, swimming or visiting the archaeological remains..It also has attractions such as the Archaeological Museum in Chairama Canaveral, Playa Reef. Here you can relax and others. If you have any question ,just ask me. I'm looking forward to your reply and to meeting you in February! Best Wishes, Lilian PS: Thank for correcting the letter.
 
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Is it possible that someone could correct my motivation letter for application to a Master Degree (english programm at a Dutch University). Please as soon as possible! Thanks! Dear Sir or Madam, With this letter I would like to apply for entrance to the Master European Studies: Identity and Integration at the University of Amsterdam. First and foremost I would like to introduce myself. My name is --- and I am from the Netherlands. My interest in culture and Europe started during my period at high school. After graduating I chose to improve my language skills by taking a multi-language year in England and Spain. First England, whereby I decided to go to Oxford because of its University, although I studied at an international language school with other international students, I was in contact with university students as well. This opportunity gave me the enhanced knowledge of English and thought me to be able to discuss at advanced levels as I was an elected as representative for the Cambridge exam classes at the institution. After three months in Oxford I went to Málaga in Spain where I studied Spanish, which I can speak, read, listen and write fluently at present. These nine months abroad thought me to be independent, speak another language than my native language, which in my opinion is inevitable in the contemporary world, as well as it gave me the opportunity to get to know other cultures and perspectives about international subjects. Back in the Netherlands I decided to study law, which was an interesting study, even though I wanted something more international after my period abroad. Whereupon I went to Spain again where I worked in several tourism organisations and got to know the Spanish culture and language, although my desire was to study where through I came back to Amsterdam. European Studies at the University of Amsterdam gave me the opportunity to learn about Europe, as well as law and languages which signified a study with all my ambitions in one. In my third year I’ve been abroad again with the Erasmus program where I studied several courses in literary and international relations. During my Bachelor I became enthusiastic about European integration, as well as culture and especially the European Union, therefore I would like to improve my academic skills and knowledge about Europe with a Master Degree. After reading the course catalogue of the several Maters in European Studies, my preference lies with Identity and Integration, first of all to receive classes and information from well know professionals in the European Studies sector, to be able to study with international students, though most important for me are the courses thought in this master which represents my interests about Europe. In conclusion I would like to say that my Bachelor thesis, finished by the first of July, is about gender equality in the European Union towards women in the European Parliament and Dutch national gender organisations, what connects with European identity and integration. I am prepared to obtain new experiences and in my opinion this Master is the best way to achieve a wide knowledge of European fields in relation to my interest, and give me the opportunity to have an excellent future in a European atmosphere. I am grateful considering my application and I look forward to a favourable reply. Sincerely,
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I would like to inform you that my sister is getting married on INSERT DATE. As I am the eldest in the family, most of the work related to marriage has to be completed by me. For this reason I would like to apply for the five day leave starting from DATE to DATE. I assure you that I will complete my pending work once I resume my duty again.
 
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How to write a letter to my boss regarding to get a loan for my marriage
 
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Hi, I am an international student. I would like to write a petition to drop a course I took long time ago. Could anybody please edit, correct my grammar, or make any suggestion?? "Dear Members of the Petition Committee: I would like to request approval to drop CHEM 1500 Introduction to Chemistry, which I took back in Fall 2007. I took this course in my first year, and I was not able to handle the academic transition from high school to University very well. Especially because I just moved to the new city and started living on my own for the first time, so I struggled transitioning to the new environment as well as balancing between my personal life and academic work. Also, Because of those circumstances, I was very confused and, was not able to figure out what study I was interested in or I was good at. but by taking this course, it made clear that science was not my strength or interest. After taking many different courses throughout 2years, I came to realize that I was very interested in Sociology, decided to change my major to Sociology, and I was very happy with my learnings. As a result of this situation, I would appreciate your approval of my petition. Thank you for your kind attention to this matter "
 
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Hello, I need some urgent help in writing a sponsorship letter for my sister in law who wishes to come here as my brother's dependant. I have tried writing one myself but it's not coming out as strong as i would like it. Can somebody please have a look at it below and make any necessary changes / corrections for me??? Dear Sir / Madam, REF: DEPENDANT VISA FOR XXX I, yyy, am writing this letter of sponsorship for xxx as my brother's dependant. My Brother zzz is currently studying (course) in (city). I am a Pharmacist by profession and a citizen of The United Kingdom. I provide boarding and lodging for my brother and shaila is more than welcome to live with us. I have attached recent bank statements (for the 3 months) to demonstrate that I have the funds to support xxx if the need arises. In regards to the accommodation, I own two properties and am currently residing with my Husband and My Brother. There is plenty of space for xxx. My home address is as follows: aaa aaa aaa In the event that you require further information about me and/or my Sponsorship for xxx, feel free to contact me on 66666 or by mail at my aforementioned address. Thank you in advance for taking the time to consider my letter of sponsorship. Respectfully, yyy ...
 
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Dear Sirs I need letter for my Son's School Admission. My son, 2.5 years old. Now this is time for school admission. So I need help for writting letter "School Admission Request letter to School Principal". Please Help me. Thanks YOURS S.R. PALANI
 
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Please help me... I need to submit a motivational letter to apply to RSM... Could someone check, just in case. Essays aren't exactly my thing. I'm not too sure about the language and formatting. My punctuation's a bit off too. Thank you in advance. : D Dear Sir or Madam, I am hereby applying for entrance for the International Business Administration programme at the Rotterdam School of Management for the 2014 fall term. In the following letter I will explain why I think that the RSM is the best university choice for me. First of all I’d like to start with my biography. I was born in Kazakhstan. When I was six years old, due to my dad’s job transfer we had to move to Holland. My first school years took place there. I used to study in Junior School Diamanthorst (JSD) in Den Haag. But in four years we had to move to Italy (Milan). It wasn’t my first time settling in, so there were no problems with that. I studied in one of the most prestigious British schools in Italy, Sir James Henderson School (SJHS). I enjoyed science and mathematics a lot and I also spent most of my time in the library. During my stay in Europe nearly every holiday we would travel. I’ve been to many places: UK, Belgium, Switzerland, Germany, France and many other countries, once we even flew to Egypt. But soon, two years after we moved to Italy, we had to move back to my home country – Kazakhstan. For one year I studied in a school at Kazakh American University (KAU). Due to the circumstances I was transferred to Gymnasium No.79, which I currently study in. One of the main reasons why I chose to engulf myself in the sphere of business is because of my aunt. She owns a business, it flourishes year by year. It slowly but gradually grows bigger and bigger. I always liked watching her conquer new heights and since I was a child I wanted to do something like that. I think it’s amazing that you start with nothing then one day it becomes something you always wished it would be. Business is an interesting sphere. In order it not to fail you ought to constantly work and work very hard. Every person and action counts. I’d like to learn how to help or guide a business that will change peoples lives, make it easier or more worth living. Since I was a child I was always surrounded by all sorts of nationalities. Kazakhstan is a multinational country, also JSD and SJHS were in some way international. One of the things I really liked about my schools in Holland and Italy is that by communicating with each other we could easily exchange knowledge about our countries, broadening our horizons and getting to know different cultures in a much interesting way. I really enjoyed being among my international classmates and I’m very thankful to them for all the information that I gained, but I’m not ready to stop yet. I want to get to know more cultures, traditions, opinions and thoughts and in order to do that my future must be closely entwined with people other nationalities. So it’s pretty obvious why I chose an international programme. After choosing what I wanted to do, came the hard part. Picking a university was not as easy as I though it was. It was hard to choose whether I should stay in Kazakhstan with my friends and family or go where I myself want to study. I missed Holland very much, so I made it quite clear that I’m leaving to follow my dreams. I contacted my friends, who still remain in Holland and asked them about the universities there. A lot of them mentioned RSM. Also my dad’s colleagues advised me to study there. After a little research, I figured that RSM is the perfect choice. It contained the bachelor programme that I was interested in, the cost was reasonable, the education’s language is English and other little details made RSM the best university choice for me. In conclusion what I’d like to say is that I’m an ambitious person, when I have my mind set to accomplish something, then I’ll definitely reach my goal. I don’t want to work because of my own selfish needs, I wish to help the world develop. I’m also eager to make new experiences, meet new people, grow as a person and fall in love for Christ’s sake, but that’s a totally different story... Anyways, applying to the right university is only the first step, a fundamental step that is crucial for my future. I’m applying to RSM because I’m more than sure that this university will guide me to the life that I wish to live.
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Please help me on how do i write increment letter.... i,m four years working in my company still i didn't get salary increment.... regards, manx
 
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I am not native speaker of english, I usually get confused with use of being , can someone please say which below one sentance is correct and why? Aamir had memory problem after being hit over his head at his fiance's house. Aamir had memory problem after he was hit over his head at his fiance's house.
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Hallo, ich veröffentliche hier mein Motivationsschreiben. Kann mir jemand sagen, was ich besser machen könnte oder wo ich Fehler habe? Danke! Simon I am a twenty-three year old student of Engineering and Management at University of (XXXX). I acquired a Bachelor’s degree with distinction from university of (XXXXXX) and I am now studying for a Master’s degree. My Interest in Studies at University of Pittsburgh My studies allow me to take various courses in the field of economics, Business Administration, Finance and Technology. I am especially interested in taking courses in engineering of plastics at University of Pittsburgh. If possible, I am going to write my Master thesis at the institute of polymer technology in Erlangen. In addition, the University of XXXX offers several courses of Business Administration which will be of interest for me. My skills and abilities I am a particularly ambitious student and my achievements in studies are above the average. During my Bachelor’s Degree, I took English courses for two years and passed the exams successfully with the best possible mark (1.0). I already prepared for the TOEFL and registered at their website, so I will be able to pass the test in short term. As I have already spoken to some of my fellow students who lived in the United States for a while, I am familiar with the costs and paperwork needed (Visa, insurance, vaccination, passport, flight and accommodation). My professional aims After my Master’s degree, or possibly my doctorate in Engineering, I am going to work for an international company as BASF or Bayer. That is why, besides achieving advanced skills in the English language, I need to get familiar with working in an international working environment. Besides gaining technical expertise and professional skills, studies abroad may widen my cultural horizons and broaden my personal skills.
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Hi all...I'm italian and i need help for tomorrow...I must do a letter to invite a my friend to my birthday...but i'm not good in writing... Someone can help me?
 
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Hello dear all, I have written a motivation letter and have it checked several times by myself. Still, I feel there is much to improve. I would be very grateful if you can give me some advice. Dear dr. Doe This letter is in response to the announcement posted on your webpage regarding the PhD position in [Engineering study] at the [Institute] of the [Some University]. I would like to apply for this position and I believe my academic background and experience are well suited for the needs of this endeavour. I have a Master's degree in [Engineering study] from [Some University]. The curriculum of my course modules has covered a wide range of topics in [engineering] and [more engineering] research. With my Bachelor's degree in [engineering] from [Some University] and course modules from my Master's I acquired good programming skills. I am very excited by [engineering] and [more engineering] and see [engineering] as one of the most promising areas. My research project focused on [engineering]. During this research project I gained profound knowledge in image processing as well as working experiences in an research environment at the [Institute] of the [Some University]. I am very excited about this opportunity and I am confident that my skills and experiences are a good match for this position. I look forward to hearing from you and having the opportunity to further discuss my qualifications. My resume is enclosed. Thank you for your time and consideration.
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I'm applying as an Software Engineering Intern for Apple this summer. It looks like they care a lot about the cover letter and English is my second language so I've had a hard time to come up with a good cover letter. Any feedback/advice is highly appreciated. Thanks in advance. Respected Sir/ Madam, I hope this letter finds you well. I would like to first take this opportunity to request your consideration for the position of Software Engineering Intern, which I saw listed on jobs.apple.com. Nowadays when you think Apple, you don't think of the fruit that grows on trees, but the driving force and pinnacle of technology; with sleek, stylish and well known designs coupled with its great hardware and software capabilities. It is for this reason that I want to work at Apple. As your company is looking for innovative partners, my engineering background would be a positive addition to your team. I have strong skills in C/C++ and Java programming, which I have expanded in the fields of information technologies and software engineering throughout my five-year studies. I also have extensive knowledge in Mac OS X, UNIX and Windows operating systems. The knowledge I have gained as a junior at University of Houston has enhanced my capacity to perform a job such as this one, and fostered a desire to apply my knowledge in a practical way. Working on the projects individually or as a team, before a given deadline, inculcated a sense of responsibility in me and taught me the art of managing time and resources to achieve the target in the best possible way. Adapting to various work cultures, identifying, resolving bottlenecks and prioritizing are the striking features of my work ethics. At the same time I like challenges which require innovation on my part. Developing new solutions with motto “if something doesn’t need to be there, it won’t be there” and coming out with ways that are not very common is what excites me. My curriculum has been influential in making me a team player and at the same time made me self-sufficient to be able to work on my own. During my internships, I am responsible for full lifecycle development of the company’s software, from initial requirement gathering to design, coding, testing, documentation and implementation. The combination of my education at University of Houston and the capability in coming out with successful solutions coupled with my technical knowledge has equipped me with skills necessary to be a successful intern at Apple. I ensure you that I will try my level best to assist your company by enhancing and implementing my programming skills. I would like to discuss my qualifications with you in person. I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your time and consideration.
 
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Please, Can you help me in this? I have to write a motivational letter to attend a master in law and I know that both my english and my letter in not much good. Could you help me to point my mistakes out and with some advises? Thank you so much for helping. Dear sir, madam, I have been asking myself the reasons because of my application and the choice of this master, the achievements and skills in order to show you how good I might be and why you should accept me. I will do it but let me first introduce myself, telling you a story of persistence. The future is not a gift, it is an achievement and I strongly believe so. I was born in a tough environment in -------, surrounded by drugs dealers, criminals but also by a lot of kind and honest people. Who do not live in Naples cannot understand how complicate can be to bring a child up and how difficult it is for the child himself to avoid the perils. Yes, the dangers are everywhere waiting for a moment of weakness to absorb you; my family and good luck handled to keep me away from troubles and I have been able to grow up in the right way; because of my education and my desire, since I was able to understand, I chose to support law and legacy in contrast with the rule of my territory. I attended my primary and secondary school with the needs of every child but the reality of poverty brought me on the earth. From the beginning my parents taught me the importance and the real value of the sacrifice, abnegation and the daily fight against the impediments because the life is not to be taken for granted. I started to work when I was kid with my father, a tradesman, in the local market to help my family, developing social skills due the necessity to deal with all kind of people since childhood because of unstable economic condition but I was happy: I was able to manage both studying and working until the end of high school, keeping me away from the pleasure of a young life but also from danger, evolving capabilities and abilities unknown by my peers through daily hard work. I always received the moral support of friends, girlfriend and relatives who pushed me not to give up and continue for my further education. They knew that my dream was to attend a Law School, and they encouraged me to do it. The university began, I studied all the evenings and night because I used to work mostly all day and I fell particularly in love for international subjects such as -----and ------law in which is included the study of -------and -------Law, ------ trying to expand as much as I could my acquaintance with extra lectures and extra books, supported by all people, friends and neighbors asking me for advices about law and financial matter. I worked harder than anyone else, taking time from my relationships, my girlfriend, my family, my pleasure until march 21th 2012 when I saw my dream coming true: a law degree from one of the most important law school in ----. Afterwards I realized that all I had accomplish when I was studying was not enough, because my education still needed something to be complete and also because I wanted to study in deep some subject such as t----- attending a master abroad. I decided to enrich my CV and my life leaving my country for an international experience. Unfortunately the importance of English in Italy is underestimated and to attend a LLM I needed both money and a good knowledge of language itself. Even though I was aware of the risks I moved to UK in september 2012 to be able to sustain a foreign university. I did. Without friends, few surviving sentences wrote down on my notebook and no contacts at all I travelled until -----,, after a random research on suitable cities, and luckily I fell in love for it. The excitement was high, and the fear even higher. In 1 month I was able to find a room, a job and a lot of friends. Since then I have been working hard, to increase my English, to help economically my family, to save every single pound I could just for this moment, just to pay my tuition fee and realize my international experience in your university. I worked 12 hours a day for minimum wage in reastaurants, shops ect, walking on the snow and under the rain, hoping just to reach this moment and I will tell you that: I am not a genius but a hard worker, I chose not to stand but jump and at the end of day the important thing is I am not complain. I am not complain at all. I have been living a fantastic life, I am loved by my family, my relatives, my italian and english friends and even if my efforts have been high it is nothing compared to million of unlucky people on the earth. I told you this story to make you understand that behind a face, behind a score, behind a title and a motivational letter there is a story and you must know the story before to “valuate” the person, even if the risk is to bother you. The reasons in choosing your program in ------ derive from the hunger to gain a international knowledge of the exact mechanisms behind the making and the application of ----, being sure that your teachings will enable me to get the right tools and information I was looking for my future job as -----. Moreover I found the teaching method based on ------ innovative and fascinating; the superb reputation of this university and its professors, with all modern supportive facilities to make everything easier and, in addition, the international environment with more than half of student population from all around the world makes this course even more exiting, I do hope that I will be accepted as an applicant to have the privilege to continue my studies at your institution. Thank you.
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I am writing to you to apply for admission to your team as a Ph.D. student for the next winter semester. Currently I am furthering my academic career through a master program in Usability Engineering at the Faculty of Communication and Environment at the Rhine-Waal University of Applied Sciences in Kamp-Lintfort. As part of my master thesis, I am in the process of analyzing product customization and 3D printer aided personal fabrication design from a user perspective. I have also worked on three applied research projects in the disciplines of Human Interaction Design, User Interface Design and Innovation Management during my master studies. The aim of the first project was to create a social networking platform for experience exchange among students. Users connect with each other based on skills they want to learn and skills they offer to teach. My main tasks were conducting interviews, defining personas, analyzing use cases, designing wireframes and applying formative testing taking place in the usability lab using Morae. The second project aimed at improving people’s everyday shopping experience. Shadowing and interviews laid the foundation for a concept of a smart shopping cart that provides various benefits to users such as nutrition display, cost calculation, product weighing, self-checkout and a navigation system within the store. We created sketches, wireframes and low/high-fidelity prototypes for the functionalities using Axure and conducted formative testing with pre-selected shoppers in the usability lab. As project leader, I coordinated the team, developed workload packages, distributed tasks and lead the technical research as well as the editorial design of the final deliverables. The third project was to create a concept of a head-mounted wearable computing device that combines elements from Google Glass, Oculus Rift, MYO armband and M4U headset. Interaction with augmented reality and legacy applications running on the device is performed by muscle and hand gestures. Configurable acoustic and visual filters of the device’s display and headset allow for selective immersion, blocking unwanted and emphasizing important signals from the user’s environment. As project leader, I conducted the technical research, competitor analysis, editorial design of final deliverables as well as evaluated the concept based on the expert review. In 2010, I acquired my bachelor degree in Software Engineering with a top 10% grade from the Faculty of Computer Science of the Ahram Canadian University in Cairo, Egypt. There I also established a student organization with the aim of spreading environmental awareness as well as improving the student’s campus experience. I launched various projects including the development of the university interactive library website and database. I also developed an online file sharing service for study materials and conducted user testing for this system. In 2002, I founded a design and development company together with my brother. I created a complete CMS and worked on various off-the-shelve CMS and e-commerce systems for over 400 clients worldwide. We have always accommodated latest technology and trends such as responsive design, which we believe improves user experience across multiple devices. My work helped me developing a strong ability to capture and fulfill design requirements and transform ideas into reality. My objective through pursing a doctoral degree is to develop my research and scientific writing skills with the long-term aim to achieve profound results and publications. My enduring ambition is to perform academic teaching and continue research so that I can share my knowledge and experience with others that are passionate about Usability Engineering. I thrive to research, identify and provide new approaches that go beyond just problem solving as the user’s benefit through efficiency, intuition and joy is one of my main ambitions. I have always been passionate about teaching since I started holding classes in our family owned school in Egypt and found great joy helping others to gain knowledge as this gives me a feeling of satisfaction and achievement. I first came across your research group during the work on my master thesis. I have read some of your publications and I was captivated with the projects they were based on. Especially those in the domains of to Personal Fabrication, Wearable Computing, User Interfaces and Multi-Touch Technology and Interaction were of particular interest to me. In addition, the mobile guide systems project grabbed my attention as I had a similar idea before. I see a great opportunity for achieving my goals at your university due to your leading role as Germanys’ best-published research group, versatile projects and resources. Given my record of relevant academic achievement, professional background and interest in your research topics, I am certain that I would be a valuable member of your team. I am enclosing my CV and my website below. Thank you for considering my application. I would be happy to get the possibility to visit your laboratory and to meet you in order to discuss available opportunities and possibilities working together. With best regards, Noha Nada
 
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how do i begin a motivational letter?
 
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I have seen an email where the sender ended his letter with Kinds Regard. I am not sure whether this is correct as most of time people will end their letters with kind regards, best regards but never seen with the "S" put on the "Kind" word. Could someone explain this to me?
 
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hello my name is williams eric, i have a very important question. my good friend wants to visit me in america and he has a passport and all he needs is a personal letter of invite i dont know how to do this. can u help me??? it is very urgent and needed soon, please i am begging help me. i really want to get him here he will be staying the most 2 months and i want to help him get here. he has all the funds and it is now up to me to get him here with the invite. he is in ghana. if u have any info plz contact me thank u sincerly williams eric
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I am confirming by e-mail an appointment for an interview and I would write something like this: I would like to confirm my attendance at the Skype interview scheduled for Wednesday 15 March 2014 at 12.00. My Skype name is.... . I am thankful for the opportunity given and look forward to seeing you. Kind Regards, XXX Is it ok?
 
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Please correct the below letter Dear sir I regret to express to inability to join your company, because I unable to get relived from current organization, they not ready to cancel my visa and asking huge amount. I feel for extremely sorry refusing your offer and inconvenience causes. Keep touch with me. Regards XYZ
 
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Can you please have a look at this letter of Authorization which I'll be using for a concert? I want to attend the show by the end of March but the tickets were bought by my cousin with HER credit card. (She will not be at the show though). I've heard that the ticket-collector should be authorized by the card holder to pick up the tickets at the box office. LETTER OF AUTHORIZATION To: The tickets venue/box office This is to certify that I, the undersigned (name surname) , with ID number _______, with billing address "_____, Albania" authorize ____________ with ID number .......... and Passport number: .........., with address “___________ ” and e-mail ______________to collect the VIP Platinum Package/ticket (Order #: ________) which was purchased using my credit card with the last 4 digits:________ These tickets can be used by ______ to attend the ______ concert and everything that is included in the VIP package, for the date 22.03.2014 in _______Belgium. The will-call name is under (name surname) *********** What do you think? THanks!
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I am required to type board meeting minutes, and I'm have a problem with capitalizing commen words within the minutes. The minutes are from a coopertive board of directors meeting When should board, directors, and cooperative be capitalized within the minutes? From what I have learned, these words are a generalization, a discription, but my fellow employee insists on capitalizing them.
 
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Dear Friends, Please can u help me in writing an application letter for getting vaction leave.
 
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