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Many writers still seems unable to sell, that is the reality I see. I need to approach few people on LinkedIn using InMail and write them an introduction letter. I have got this written but to me it seems like good ads but not introduction letter. Any ideas how to make it better and powerful so much that people will gladly respond? For me this looks like addressed to thousands not to individual. I would not respond to it. Subject: Technology Support You Can Count On Hi personally address the potential client by name , Are you looking for a highly skilled IT professional capable of immediately handling all of your Linux and KVM network and support needs without breaking the bank? Rather than keep an expert on staff or sacrifice quality and local service by using someone remote, I am your solution. I offer the quality you can expect from an expert in the UK with reasonable rates. After 10 years of working as an IT Administrator for various local and international corporations in the UK , I decided to take the skills I learned and relocate to Prague to launch my business. I now have a few select clients, such as yourself, that I am able to offer outstanding customer service and professional expertise at the costs of a remote technician, yet still close enough to respond within the hour during normal business hours or hop the next flight and be there before the start of the next business day. Whether you are in need of scheduled technical maintenance, on-site emergency support, network concerns or phone consultations, my experience doing remote support using new technologies such as service processors and remote PDUs make me valuable asset for you team . I can work on small projects as easily as I can work on larger projects that require additional support hours. If you are still unsure how my services can be of use to you, please take advantage of my limited time offer for a free one hour consultation. You can contact me via Skype at *** or UK phone ***. Use this opportunity to troubleshoot your most reason glitch or find out more about my references and professional background. Either way I am confident you will be interested the service I provide. If you’ve made it this far, I am looking forward to hearing from you; however, if you are still undecided simply tell me why and I will send you a voucher good for one hour IT support that expires December 31, 2014. Best Wishes, -- Martin
 
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Hello, could somebody have a look at my motivation letter? I am mostly afraid of some gramatical mistakes since it is not my mother language but all comments will be appreaciated Dir Sie or Madame I am writing to explain my motivation for applying to the Erasmus Mendus master of computer science even before I graduate from high-school I was passionate about computer science and the field of web, and I decided to make it my career field by applying to the University of Science and Technology Houari Boumediene, where I discovered my passion for algorithms and complex problems and I received a Bachelor in the engineering of information systems and softwares. I decided to apply for the Master’s Program in France as the culture and lifestyle of this country appeal to me strongly. I am impressed with the high education level and demanding programs, as well as the professional approach to modern technologies and an economic and professional environment that offers higher chances to stand out and accomplish great things. Thank you very much for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response. Yours truthfully, my name
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Check this application please and sort out the mistakes.. I prepare it for exams. Subject: Fee Concession It is humbly stated that I am a student of BS third semester of mathematics. I belong to a poor family. My father is a salaried person with a family of four children to support. It is very difficult for my father to meet my educational expenses from his income. I have an excellent academic record. I got A grade in the BS(1st semester) examination. I request you to give me the full fee concession so that I easily continue our studies without being the burden on my father…
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hey Im applying for the students exchange program hopefuly get accepted to the university of granda. im requierd to write a Motivation letter and i honestly have no idea how to do it. so i wrote something and i would really appriciate it if u read it and let me know wut u think thanks a lot in advence Shalom, my name is Itay, I am 25 years old and I am a first year student of industrial Engineering and Management in Shenkar College, Ramat Gan, Israel. For a living I work as a security guard for the Ministry of Defence. At the moment I share an apartment with my best friend near my College but I was born and raised in a nice small city named Rechovot, 25 minutes south of Tel Aviv. I have two older brothers, one older sister and two adorable nephews. I love playing the guitar, and I am Futsal player in the College team. After graduating high-school at the age of 18 I enlisted to the army and served three years as a combat infantry in a small recon unit, there I have met some people that are my best friends up to this day (one of them is my roommate now). After the service I worked for a year, saved money and flew to spend most of the year of 2011 backpacking in South America. This trip has changed my life. It has changed the way I think, the way I act, and way I observe the world. I went out for the purpose of knowing not only the views and the touristic places but mainly to really get to know the people that live there and there culture, and in order to do that I had to overcome a great barrier (besides money) – the language barrier, so I studied Spanish, starting from the basic grammar and I can honestly say that that was the best decision of my life after, of course choosing South America as a trip destination. I can go on and on about the things I have discovered there and the unforgettable generosity of the "locals" but I only have one and a half pages, so I will only say that what the people there had taught me about the Latin culture and the Latin way of life has really gotten into me. After ten unbelievable months in South America I returned to Israel determined to preserve the things I have learned and of course the level of Spanish I have reached after 7 months of mainly speaking Spanish (3 out of the ten months I spoke Portuguese in Brazil), so in order to do that, me and two of my friends have started organizing Language-Exchange groups in a local bar in Tel Aviv where people can drink beer and have a nice conversation in any language they wish to learn. Right now we have groups of Portuguese, French, English and of course Spanish and the number of participants is only rising!!! Also in January I went on a trip as a "local" with a group of young Jewish Brazilians throughout Israel for 5 days, on behalf of project Taglit which is a project that finance an eleven days trip to Israel for Jewish youngsters from all over the world in order to introduce them to the Israeli state and culture. More than that, after my return to Israel I have decided to travel in Spain, but more accurate I have decided to travel in the southern side, Andalucía. Charmed by my favorite book "The Alchemist" (Paulo Coelho), I have dreamed of knowing this fascinating region with all its cultural wealth and nature, so you can only imagine how thrilled I was when I heard that there is a possibility of studying in Granada. Professionally speaking, I am certain that studying abroad has great benefits to my future career, mainly because I am planning on having an international career after I graduate, and also learning that particular profession by lecturers that are not Israelis can only develop me more and enrich my knowledge. I am really excited and thankful for having this opportunity of applying to the university of Granada and I am hopeful you will accept my application. Sincerely yours Itay
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to receive further information about xxx High School's University Acceptance Rate. Please do excuse me from my poor English,I am from Hong Kong and English is like a third language for me...I hope you would not mind so.I am originally considering to let my daughter transfer to xxx next year, but unfortunately I got stuck when I was browsing the high school profile. I am expecting my daughter to acquire good universities like NYU or more likely, UCLA in the future. However, the college choices' list provided on the high school profile page was not detail enough which kind of confused me. Therefore, the first thing I would like to know is which are the top 5 Universities that most of the xxx's (past) students got in, again with the exact number of the students. Could you also tell me more details on the school life in xxx's High?For example the tests,subject choices as well as college enrollment. Although I know that the school website has already provided almost everything that I have just asked, but in consideration of my daughter's future studies in Taiwan, I do think it is necessary to ask for more details. I would like to thank you in advance for this information.I await your prompt reply in great interest. Yours faithfully, Ms Liu
 
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Dear all, I am glad to post my own motivation letter here which has been revised under the instruction of Mountainhiker. Thanks a million for his big help. He is really a good guy, who is patient, efficient and ready to help others. You can see from the posts of the forum that he gives wise advice to those who need help and makes tailor-made suggestions for the revision of motivation letters. This letter is finished with his dedicated help as well. Hope it will be of little help to you. Your name Your address Your email Date The name of the university The address of the university Dear Sir or Madam, I wish to apply to the Master of XX program at XX University for the 2011 autumn term. This program is a concrete step towards my future career as a businessperson who understands and appreciates science and technology. My ultimate career objective is to hold a management position in banking or a consulting company in XX. In 2010, I earned a bachelor degree with a specialization in industrial engineering from XX University in XX. Benefiting from the broad nature of industrial engineering, I have been exposed to a wide range of subjects from business to technology. Having studied the specialized courses, I have acquired the basic skills of systematic research, analytical thinking and information evaluation. Most importantly, they provided me with insight into business management combining with engineering science. I was typically among the top three students in my classes. Furthermore, I was honoured to be the only student of my department who won the Excellent Bachelor Thesis of XX University. I studied handling technology innovation of XX Port, which is the world's largest coal export. While writing my thesis, I personally went to the loading and unloading locations to collect the data. In my thesis, I referred to more than sixty key technical articles. After my thorough and creative analysis, I recommended a novel solution resulting in increasing valuable production time of about one hour per day. After graduating, I was selected as an Erasmus Mundus exchange student at the postgraduate programme XX. By studying at the programme, I became conversant with standard business practices and gained a deeper appreciation of the investment framework in the EU. I especially enjoyed Professor XX's lectures because they strengthened my understanding on economic analysis. After six months of intensive study, I passed all my twelve exams, with a grade of 20/20 in tax law and the highest mark in the other two courses. Aside from the favourable learning environment of XX University, I most enjoyed its academic freedoms and active pluralism. With permission, I attended some management courses. These courses broadened my view of techniques of managerial accounting and management strategy. Moreover, I attended many academic activities, such as lectures and debates, which served to further my interest in business and economics. Equally important, I had the opportunity to raise challenging questions to internationally known scholars. Apart from my studies, I acted as a student leader at our student union and volunteered in other activities such as Beijing Olympic Games. Also, I worked as a teaching assistant to Professor XX and assistant of manager in the summer internship at XX Company. Through these experiences, I strengthened my interpersonal skills by working with fellow team members and others. There are four key reasons why I want to study at this program. First, I selected your program because of its primary focus on business with the expectation that students already possess a strong understanding of science. Second, Mr. XX, a fellow student of the program, has provided me with his thoughts about the program. From our conversations, I became excited to learn about the courses such as advanced marketing. Third, I wish to grow to be a manager who can combine the science of technology with the art of management. And last, Professor XX, who is the teacher of my mentor XX, encouraged me to study at XX Univeristy, where he has worked for ten years. I am thankful for his thoughtfulness and friendship. Thank you for your attention and consideration. I look forward to your acceptance. Yours sincerely, XX
 
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Hi everyone, I have a motivation letter and a revised it a few times, sp can you read and tell me your feedbacks please ? thank you ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ To whom may it concern, The purpose of this letter to show my intention to do my MSc at Consumer Affairs at Technische Universität München which begins(takes place ?) in October 2014. I currently am studying Business Adiministration at Anadolu University,Turkey and expect to graduate by the end of the June 2014. I have 3.12 GPA over 4.00 and until now I have been in top 10% students at my faculty and as a prize, I was exempted from paying tuition for one term. Furthermore, I was honoured with certificate many times because my GPA was over than 3.00. Business Administration is a multi disciplined department and since begining my bachelors, I have always been interested in Marketing and paid my attention (on? ) to it. In addition to my studies, I have worked in student organizations for one year. I have worked in two different student organizations that arranged panel discussions,seminars and workshops attendance with people from business world. In both clubs, I have been volunteer student and I worked at introduction stands as promoter with my collaguages and made field marketing and distributed flyers. Personally, I learnt there how to communicate and convince to people and approach to them and understood the vitality of taking responsibility and being a team member. Besides, I had got right to attend Erasmus programme when I was in my third year and went to Czech Republic,Prague. I studied there for 4 months and improved my english capabilities also met so many people from around the world and gained there an international mind. Moreover, I took there the courses related with economics, marketing and management. At the end of a course there which was Marketing in Automotive Industry, I was included to a final presentation there which was about opening a public campaign for Skoda cars and outlining customer profile of it. The result was appreciated by my lecturer and friends which I helped to them to build up their own duties. Meanwhile, I had succeeded to found some business contacts there and met an Uzbek and Czech young entrepreneurs and arranged an internship related with customer care for the next term after my erasmus semester, however I had to resigned after a while because the work conditions was not provided that had been compromised before. After I had come back to Turkey again, I worked as volunteer again in a youth project which organized by Anna Lindh Foundation and Project was getting together the youngsters from the mediterranean countries. We made workshops there about cultural diversity, sustainability of the environment and sources,so it was a valuable international experience for me.After all those, it was time to concern about the future of academical life (daha iyi bir cümle aklıma gelmedi) and I decided to do my master at Germany after strong advices and having some facts about German Universities' quality,seriousness and validity of its diplomas that had been told me by a German friend of mine. While my courses still going on, I developed my German at Goethe Institut and by the way got the IELTS exam and had IELTS 6.5 Academic score in the frame of my aims. Currently, I still do my internship in Istanbul at a Social Media Marketing Agency. I have chance here to apply my theoritical knowledges in to real life such as search engine optimization and tracking customer feedbacks on twitter and facebook then analysing and reporting them to my seniors. Consumer Affairs department prepares its students to meet the new demands of new type of customers by focusing of the structure, behaviour of it. Customer behaviour research, Organizational Psychology and Gender Studies, Advanced Technology and Innovation Management and Consumer history are the courses which I am into in so much and they are also appreciated by my marketing lecturer at my university. Another point that appeals me is doing project works in practice with other students in reality and wide variety job and internship opportunities of Munich. My professional target is after working at the international companies that is possible both in Turkey and Germany, getting involved with marketing more and consumer researchs in an academical environment. I am aware that the harsh requirement conditions and qualifications that is expected from applicants and I hope that my ambitiousness, self-confidence and enthusiasm is enough to get an acception from your instuition. I would like to thank you to consider me and look forward to your positive feedback. Best Regards,
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Hello! Could anyone help me with this motivation letter? Grammar, sentence formation, punctuations, quotation marks etc. Please. Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to you to express my intrest in applying for Master’s Programme of ‘Project Management’ at University of Santiago de Compostela scheduled to commence in September 2014. Currently, I am studying Construction Technology & Management at NIT Warangal. In my pursuit to master’s I have gained a profound academic profile and hope to continue even in a better way. My professional goal is to build a set up which would practice an excellent management in all the projects it undertakes. Also, I concieve to endorse ‘Sustainable Development’ through this set up. Your programme will ensure turning my passion into profession. For this reason I would like to take advantage of this priceless opportunity. It would be a privilege to enlighten under your fine guidance. The first time I realised my passion for construction management was when I assisted my father at his construction site in managing resources, controlling activities and monitoring quality of work during my graduation years. I percieved how an effective management plays life-line to any project. It triggered a keen intrest into me towards construction management. This urge eventually brought home the bacon in the form of top score in first semester of my master’s. Also, I have been organizing events and trips in my undergraduation and received significant praise for my ability to solve problems intellactually and to decide sagely in unforeseen situations. An another reason which makes me more suitable for this programme is my love towards languages. I remained a scorer in the languages during academics. Due to the grasp in English I was selected as a member of Editorial Committee in my undergraduate and graduate institutions. Award for Proficiency in English makes it even more evident. I have known Spain by it’s bull fighting, football, food, ‘La Tomatina’ and acquainted with it’s geography, culture through cinema which I would like to experience live. Music stimulated an inceptive liking for Spanish and I will take every opportunity to learn Spanish and Galician. Living, studying and having enjoyment with international scholars would broaden my horizons and will help me to forward culture and customs to our continent. I would be very grateful if you consider my application and give me a chance to learn under your expertise which would mark my professional and personal development. Thank You. Yours Sincerely, Kunal Mangal
 
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Hello guys, I'm applying for the Near East And South Asia Undergraduate Exchange Program. It's similar to Global UGRAD exchange program. They asked me to write a 450 words personal statement. Please give me your feedback because I'm in great rush because my due date is January 16. Thanks in advance. Personal Statement Questions: Please describe why you would like to study in the U.S. What past experiences, interests, or personal traits have given you this motivation? How will studying in the NESA UGRAD Program help you learn about America? How will learning about the U.S. influence your personal and professional goals? Personal Statement for NESA Undergraduate Exchange Program I've always seen myself as a seeker. I seek new experiences, and what's a better than experiencing life in America? I was always fond of the language and culture of the U.S. I grew up in a community where being different isn't always accepted, but I never tried to fit in; instead I saw my uniqueness as God's gift for me, and I valued it. Studying in the U.S will give the chance to discover new sides of myself, as well as having quality education. My major is Microbiology which requires lots of practical work; but most of what we learn at my university is theoretical, which doesn't prepare us well for our future careers. Besides, the teaching methods in the U.S. develop skills like communication, collaborating and critical thinking. I've lived in Saudi Arabia for 3 years; there I met people from different countries. I adapted and interacted with them easily. I believe I'm open-minded and can accept people for who they are. Therefore, the culture diversity of the U.S would be no trouble for me. Writing and Graphic Design are two of my greatest passions. Although I majored in Microbiology, that didn't stop me from enjoying these two fields. Last summer, I took a Graphics Diploma and I learned how to use the latest versions of Adobe programs. I'm now selling my art online, this made me independent and more mature. As for writing, I own a blog where I write short stories. In college, I joined the Literature Club which publishes a monthly literary magazine. Recently I became a staff writer for a web magazine called PopWrapped, where I learned how the system of magazines works and how to work under deadline pressure. For the past 2 years, I worked with several charity organizations, one of them teaches illiterate people and children how to write and read; this made me appreciate my education even more, and it gave me great pleasure to be able to help those in need and give back to my community. My wish is to combine between my interest in science and writing, that's why I'd like to pursue my year as an exchange student in the University of Michigan-Ann Arbor, because it's known for its great biological sciences and writing programs. I'm also interested in a course called "Writing in the Sciences" launched by Stanford University. Likewise, it serves my desire to get the best of both fields. I'd consider myself a fortunate student if I was chosen to become part of the NESA UGRAD Exchange Program. I believe I could improve myself and benefit my host university, and surely contribute to my country with the profits I gained when I return. ...
 
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Hi all I love a girl I have written a letter to her just let me know how is it .. You are free to edit it and make it perfect.. Dear ..... I have composed several mails last few days....but never sent you... Each of the mails represents my thoughts ... They say the greatest slavery is the slavery of thoughts... Hence I decided let not my thoughts be slave of my will so I am sending this email a representation of my thoughts.... Name you are out of my sight but not out my thoughts....you rule my thoughts bcoz of Your innocent feminine personality ,your childish characteristics..yes I have felt your childish behavior through your magnificent eyes ,they speak to me and your shy smile which makes time stand still and the cute thing you do with your open hair...I love your curly black hair ...The best thing that makes you perfect is your simplicity... You are unique ... Last six month was the most beautiful period of my life... Each morning I would wait for you... I never knew I would ever meet someone so special someone whose mere presence would make me so happy...you made me to feel the real meaning of life.. As a student I was busy with my studies and my sport activities (volleyball) entered into professional life busy in building carrier ...you showed me there exist other part of life where one doesn't live for oneself but for the other half .... You gave a new meaning to my life a new purpose to live... Thank you dear for it... The last I saw you was on 30th December Monday... you were busy in texting,the bus came and stopped at your stop but you didn't board it... I never knew that its the last time I am seeing you....and now when I miss you each and every morning I remember those beautiful moments when I made eye contacts with you... I know you are aware of my thoughts and my desire to be your special friend... But you seem to be silent on it....and I wanted to make you comfortable as I am in no hurry to make a place in your heart...I want to earn you ... I have many fancy friends to make my weekend blasting...but friendship with you should be beyond that level.... I want to wait till the point you feel I am worth such friendship... You are worth waiting ... You are precious ... I miss you and your beautiful angel eyes... Love thee Angel eyes ..You are mine... Bye take care and be safe much love to you ... Keep me in your thoughts Love...
 
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I am writing an informal letter - sking a friend for help. I do not know the exact theme yet so I only have introductory and the end but I would like to know if it is written correctly and if the grammar is right......This is the letter: Dear Jack, How are you doing? I've heard your parents got divorced. I'm very sorry about that. I hope you're not too upset. The weather is pretty bad here at the moment. It's really cold and it just won't stop raining so I decided to take the opportunity and write you now since I have nothing else to do. (now comes the part where I talk about the specific problem which I don't know about yet so I'll just write some exaples of asking for help) I'm writing to ask for your advice. I'm going through some serious problems and I could really use some help. I'd really appreciate it if you could give me some advice. Please let me know about what I should do. I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Give my regards to your family and I also hope to see you soon. With love, your good friend xxxxx
 
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i am updating my resume.but have no idea how to tell that i am a Building Surveyor but currently i am looking for job which is not involve travelling since i have baby and other fam commitment (officework). But i would give consideration to travel within area. If possible, i preffer 5days work a week. Please help..thank you so much
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Hello, this is a cover letter for an internship at the HR in an Embassy. Please check for any grammatical / phrasal / articles error and let me know ASAP. THANX. ************************************************************************************************************************************************** MY ADDRESS _________ December 24, 2013 THEIR ADDRESS __________________ Dir Sir or Madam at the HR Department, I have a strong interest in pursuing the internship position in Human Resources Office at the____Embassy. I was informed of this because it was listed through the Career Services Office , at the Faculty of Law – University of ___ I graduated from the Faculty of Law in 2010 and this year, in 2013, I was granted another academic degree, Master’s Degree (LLM) in European Business Law . As a current legal expert/adviser, at the “ HR Department” in the Turkish Post Office , I was immediately drawn to this internship position as an opportunity to provide technical support and assistance to your office. Given my related experience in this field, I would appreciate your consideration for allowing me to become part of this rare opportunity. I’m of the opinion that my skills match with this position, not only for the job that I currently do but also for the fact that I’ve been a lifetime and dedicated researcher in English language. In addition, I’m having a teaching experience in the field of Legal English , at the American School of Foreign Languages “_ _____ ” , here in ____. I teach students of excellence from the Faculty of Law and provide them with further information regarding the U.S / U.K / legal systems. Although I’m not a student anymore, I am certain that I fulfill all the rest of the requirements and qualifications in compliance with the job duties described in the announcement. I am confident that I have the necessary skills, attributes and professional demeanor to perform at a high level in the position, because I believe that my unconditional passion for English language, combined with my administrative work in the office and positive attitude, would be of value to you as well as to me. This internship would provide me with the ideal opportunity to assist at your office and to expand my organizational skills. If you feel there is a mutual interest, I would welcome the opportunity to meet with you to learn more about the department, the requirements of the position, and how my qualifications could be a good fit. For your review, enclosed you will find my CV and other related documents/certificates. If I can provide you with further information on my background, please let me know. I’m closing this letter with the desire to meet for an interview and I will follow up with you in a few days to check on the status of my application. I appreciate your taking the time to review my credentials and experience and I thank you for your consideration. Kind regards, _______ ...
 
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Hello, I have to write a motivational letter for my master aplication. I've read a lot of stuff that was written here and started to type my own. You'll maybe recognize that it is inspired by several previous post. I would like to ask you to help with the grammar and choice of words. Please help me with the following: I am applying to your Master program of "XXX" starting in September XXXX. This program is a concrete step to my future career ambition to become a doctor in the XXX field. My first exposure to XXX was at the time when I was trained as a surgical assistant. Working in the hospital gave me insights into the everyday working life in the hospital, but although I learned a lot, the training could not suffice my thirst for deeper medical knowledge. Therefore I decided to study molecular medicine at the University of XXX. My college studies had a duration of three years, where I learned all basic medical subjects, with emphasis on practical laboratory work. In June 2014 I will graduate with a Bachelor of Science degree with an expected above-average grade of XXX. Given my past history, I am confident that the scope of the masters program at XXX aligns with my personal aspiration to further specialize in the field of biomedicine. In several internships during my studies I had the chance to gather practical experience. While working at the Dpt. of XXX and XXX XXX I took responsibility of a project in which I tried to find new markers for primordial germ stem-cells. In order to achieve this goal I had to plan a lot of experiments in a well thought out manner. Enjoying the aspect of being a manager, pushing projects towards their goals, I can clearly see myself someday in a leading position. During my practical at the Dpt. of XX XXX was not only asked to determine the affinity of antibodies to several proteins but also to give a weekly presentation about my newest findings. I realized that good grades and experimental experience, though important, are not the only indicators of one’s researchers potential. In addition to that it is crucial to be able to communicate one’s ideas, either in written or spoken form. To enhance my communication skills I took courses in college in which students were asked to present new scientific literature. During my work as a research assistant in the Dpt. of XXX XXX I had the chance to broaden my knowledge in statistics and bioinformatics. Here I had the to work with statistical software like R and SAS. I came to the conclusion that open-mindedness towards methods coming from divergent sources can help to improve scientific work significantly, thus I am constantly trying to look out for new innovative ways to overcome problems. I want to study at XXX because it would allow me to enter a community of renomated scientists. The XXX offers the widest range of medical education in XXX, therefore it will provide me with an unique intellectual stimulus and the latest knowledge coming from experts at the forefront of discovery. Moreover, the large focus on gathering practical work experience and communication skills will give me opportunity to extend my abilities as a scientist. Through my solid academic and experimental background and my strong determination to reach my professional goals I consider myself as a good candidate for program.
 
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Letter of motivation Dear Sir, Madam, With this letter I would like to show my interest in application for Master’s Programme in Water Resources and Environmental Management for winter semester 2014/2015 in Germany. In this case I have chosen three suitable programme for me, such as Master Program in “Water Resources and Environmental Management – WATENV” at Leibniz University of Hannover. I am currently pursuing my Bachelor’s Degree (Alumni) in Water Supply and Sewage (Water Management and Water Technologies Department) at Ural Federal University named after the first President of Russia B.N. Yeltsin with an anticipated graduation date of June 2014. I rather believe that Master’s Degree at Leibniz University will help me to achieve my goal to become high quality engineer of Water Management, according to the fact that water quality and availability are increasingly threatened by societal and environmental change and sustainable development in all areas Water Resources Management, such as Water Supply, Waste Water Treatment, Solid Waste Management and Sanitary Engineering is therefore essential for both present and future generations. I would like to work in the Water Treatment field and take a part in the supporting the technologies for Water Resources protecting due to obtaining interdisciplinary knowledge and key qualifications in the field of sustainable water resources management. During my studying at Ural Federal University I had summer internships (professional practice) in different construction companies, where I was able to plan and design overall schemes, such as sewer improvement schemes or flood defense programmes and associated structures (pumping stations, pipework and earthworks). Being interested in Water Treatment technologies I decided to make my Diploma on the topic: Water Treatment Plant for countryside”, which is the most actual direction into Residentional Building in Russia, according to the wide using the water sources with the low quality. Currently I’m Water Treatment specialist working for a local engineering company, which provides various solutions for water cleaning processes, especially for industrial plants and residential buildings. My functions consist of planning suitable technology to achieve required quality of drinking water and to determine necessary equipment, according to the customer budget. After only three months of employment, I am provided the opportunity to completely manage multiple projects that included the evaluation of remedial strategies on a model equipment and project correspondence with clients and environmental regulators. With this responsibility, I became interested in the analytical chemical data and analysis procedures, and how I can correct the quality of supply water related to its purpose. My 5 year Civil Engineering (Water Supply and Sewage) degree is specialized in Hydrology of Waterside Structure, Applied Chemistry of Water, Theoretical Basis of the Mechanical Treatment of Water, Waste Water Treatment and Sanitary equipment of buildings. Under the ERASMUS Programme I lived and studied in Finland for 5 months. This studying allowed me to gain knowledge in Building Service Engineering, especially in Water Supply and Sewage. Moreover, I had the opportunity to meet people from different countries around the world, travel and explore other cultures with new relationships. Furthermore, a lot of friends of mine had pleasure to spend spring vacations in Germany, what made me interested in this country. From my studying at Leibniz University I expect to obtain knowledge through this Master’s Degree programme provides interdisciplinary solutions in a market-based economy due to integrated management of water, wastewater, solid wastes, and air pollutants. Industrial production has an enormous impact on environment and society’s awareness of such effects is constantly growing. Studying the courses included in this Master Programme will let me understand how to accurately use water resources due to as research planning, scientific communication, and theories and methods of research and how to be a successful Environmental Engineer. Of an exceptional motivation, I strongly imply myself in my academic and professional activities to carry out my objectives. My international experience and working in Engineering Company attest of my capacity of integration and adaptation. I had the pleasure to meet varied cultures and to affirm my intrapersonal ease. Opened to others, speaking English language in addition to my I have a very strong desire to pursue a career in international Engineering company, thus allowing my blooming on the personal level as well as professional. Therefore, my goal is to develop my aptitudes and improve on them to a degree that would allow me to better understand the subtleties of Environmental Engineering. I would very much like to achieve this through studying and following the Master´s Degree Programme in Water Resources and Environmental Management. Thank you very much for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response. Sincerely yours, Alena Lepilova
 
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Dear Professor H, With this letter, I am expressing my interest in studying for the Master of Science in Electronic Engineering specializing in Embedded Systems from the prestigious University of Duisburg-Essen. I have a Bachelors of Electrical Engineering degree from the U in XX (2005), where I learnt core electrical subjects such as electric machines, power electronics, electric circuits, field electromagnetics, as well as electronics subjects including digital design, C programming and microprocessors. I am also currently enrolled in a Masters of Science (M.Sc.) in M at the U, where I took subjects in analog circuit design, embedded systems and signal integrity. When I was in my bachelor's, I found the concepts of Fields and Waves, Device physics, common-gate/emitter/collector (and then common-source/drain/gate) configurations, operational and operational transconductance amplifiers alien. This experience was different from my bachelor's in Calculus, where I accepted the abstractness of partial differential equations and solving Bessel's/Cauchy's equations. It was compounded by not knowing the right answers to all the exercises I had done in my electronics subjects, as I did not have the instructor's manual and answers. I feel I have been fooling myself into thinking I understand a subject, which is a dangerous condition for both my academic and career life. I was still dissatisfied with my Masters of Science course, hence I am enrolling again to your school. I am positive I will gain hands-on experience, do a lot of practical work, have access to state-of-the-art resources such as CAD licenses and high-technology laboratories, and get the right answer. Every point there is very important to me. In Math tutorials, despite it being as hard as Engineering subjects, the answers and hours of practice always reinforce students with the concepts they try to teach. In my previous 2-semester Masters, which had a 70% research composition, I was required to propose and produce my own research dissertation. I worked on an engineering problem in my company, and searched available literature for a solution that I didn't know would come in what shape. Eventually, after entering many blind alleys, I finally found a solution, and sent an invitation to the author of the paper I was interested to implement. I was very fortunate that the author was happy to collaborate with me. The resulting solution I found was feasible but, to me, incomplete as a fully implementable solution (due solely on my part to my misjudgement of how large the project was, and that I worked on the CAD flow alone). I found this research both enlightening yet frightening, so I still prefer the breadth and regularity of taught-courses. In my career, I have delved into silicon characterization and pre-silicon verification. I enjoy debugging and proposing solutions. I have spent many long hours into the wee hours of dawn collecting results in a lab, analyzing them and recollecting them. When I did simulation verification, I did the same. I like delving into latest techniques for verification, hence I learnt SystemVerilog on my own, and started to read UVM methodologies, transaction-based modeling, functional prototyping and assertions-based design. I want to explore integrated circuit (IC) design next, and build an embedded system based on a protocol, either optical-, communications- or network-based. When I write scripts in Perl, I also look at finding the neatest and advanced technique of doing what I need. This takes longer for me to complete my task, but it makes me learn something different. My interest to study Embedded Systems is buoyed by two reasons – One, to gain expertise particularly in VHDL digital design, and Two, to work with my husband providing training and design services, who is also applying to enrol in your school with me. I hope to become an accomplished IC Design frontend or backend engineer, able to solve CAD problems and deliver high-performance or low-power solutions. I am determined to excel within the German engineering educational system, which I know will be tough for foreigners who are not accustomed to the German learning syllabus. My aptitude is in verification and debug, and on semiconductor technology, SoC design and microelectronics. I hope to learn and use design, layout and wafer fabrication tools. I hope that you will consider my application favourably. Yours faithfully,
 
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This the first draft of my motivation letter.If someone could give some advice i would be glad to hear!:-) Dear Sir/ Madam, “If you start by promising what you don't even have yet, you'll lose your desire to work towards getting it.” -Paulo Coelho “Everything Should Be Made as Simple as Possible, But Not Simpler” Albert Einstein ---------------------------------------------------------- I am applying to your Fast-track PhD program held by the ------------------------------------------------------------; I believe my academic background and experience are well suited for the needs of this endeavour. This two quotes reflect firstly what I consider to be the right way to achieve goals in life, and secondly how research should be conducted. As regards my education to date, I am about to receive an academic multi-faceted four year Degree in Biology from the Aristotle University of Thessaloniki (AUTH). I expect to formally graduate June 2014 with an anticipated average score above 85 percent . My first exposure to neuroscience came early during the first four semesters of compulsory courses, with both practical and theoretical approach to subjects such as:zoology of invertebrates and vertebrates, physiology of animals, biochemistry and molecular biology.The elective and compulsory courses combined( the undergraduate study program) helped me gain multi factional knowledge and the tools to a) comprehend the evolution of life and its complexity b) understand in depth how a stimuli is processed in a organism and then is translated into action. What I think has defined my academic course so far is the experience of conducting my dissertation thesis and practical internship at the ------------------------------------------------------------ in Athens, Greece. It was an unusual decision not to choose a lab from my school but I think that this decision points out a crucial aspect of my character . I wanted to get involved in the field of neuroscience at one of the best neuroscientific labs in my country as soon as possible,considering the fact that I did not have that option somewhere near my hometown. I had the good fortune to be recruited, with the help of my Professor Dr.---------, to the lab of cellular and developmental biology with ------------ as a Principle investigator. For one year I acquired a degree of expertise in the field of behavioural neurobiology and proteomics, with the guidance and help of brilliant scientists from around the world. It is an example of the tenacity that characterizes me, choosing the right pathways to fulfill my goals and keeping working despite the difficulties. Working hard and sticking to a goal it is not a simplistic way of describing some of the prerequisites of research. I find the ability to be persistent a valuable allay in times that stressful situations trigger, and also the ability to act in a structured way. From the first time of my dissertation thesis I had to cope with immense stress as the project I had been assigned was highly demanding regarding my level, and a set of unpredicted problems came up. Despite that I managed to solve a series of problems, learn step by step the experimental procedure and finally contribute to the lab in terms of time efficiency. Working from an early age as a waiter taught me from a different point of view how important is to be efficient, organized, and capable to work and communicate in a stressful enviroment in order to be productive in a thriving enterprise. Complementing my strong academic performance are my advanced skills in leadership and communication. In every lab course of my school we work in groups with other students and usually we held out tasks that require coaction of distinct people. In several of the projects during my studies, I was the team leader responsible for building and leading our project team. Playing the role of the coordinator and most of the times having to set the boundaries and the guidelines of our actions , what I find of great importance is my efficiency in communicating by ameliorating the friction between colleagues. During the one year of my dissertation thesis I accomplished to formalize a fruitful dialogue and a prosperous ongoing relationship that contributed to my success. My working experience outside the academic circle allowed a gradual development of communication skills, as a consequence I am capable of cooperating efficiently no matter what the working enviroment may be. I also find myself capable when organizing things and managing to reach certain goals. In fact it is one of the most important characteristic I could point out as it can be found in every aspect of my life. As far as my academic performance is concerned I think organizing my time was of the utmost importance especially within a project during my dissertation thesis. Because of the specificity of the project I would need approximately two months in order to execute one experiment. In parallel other tasks were under my supervision and I managed not only to maintain a regular pace at my experimental work, but also not to neglect my student obligations despite the one year physical absence from the University. Finally, during my previous job I made significant changes in the way the staff was organised and the way in which their tasks were ordered, as a result we succeed in maximizing the efficiency of customer service. “If various mental processes can be localized, what rules relate the anatomy and physiology of a region to its specific function? Can these rules be understood better by examining the regions as whole or by studying its individual nerve cells?”-Essentials of neural science & Behavior. From my perspective the answer to a variety of questions concerning how our brain works in general can emerge from a multifaceted approach to brain research. I want to study at ------------ University because of the professionalism that your educational system exudes, your excellent facilities and your ground-breaking research achievements. The opportunity to enroll at your Fast track PhD program will provide me with the opportunity to fulfill my ambitions of getting a deeper insight and clearer understanding of how we perceive reality. A clearer perception of our complex brain I am sure will aid to a more personalized treatment of a series of brain-disorders too. Especially it is clear that the systemic way that you choose of pursuing truth, gives the opportunity to students, select from a wide range of reasearch fields and push a step farther the boundaries of the current perception. Given my past history of commitment to high goals, I am confident that I will be able to bring a high level of energy and enthusiasm to your program. I endeavor to exceed your expectations, implementing both my academic and interpersonal skills, as well as the experience gained from my internship. I aim enrich the program by enabling fellow students and professors to benefit from my ambitious and open nature. Furthermore, with my interdisciplinary education and multifarious character I hope to add to diversity to your program. Thank you for considering my application, and I look forward to hearing from you.  Yours faithfully, Konstantinos Koukoutselos
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'm from Palestine . I'm new here and this first time for me to write a motivation letter to apply for a scholarship since my English is not good enough. I hope to get revision on my letter and also I need to get advise regarding the best place in the letter for writing my address and university address too. Thanks brothers and sisters for helping --------------------------------------------- I would like to apply for your master's scholarship program at your university for the autumn of 2014. My interesting is to pursue the management because I'm specialized in this field and I believe strongly pursuing this degree will prepare me to achieve my long-term objectives. After earning my undergraduate degree in business administration from the Islamic University in Gaza, in 2001, I worked for various places. Over 10 years of working in trading companies as administrator then as manager, I have gained and improved my skills. Firstly, I worked for father's business. I remember his exciting feeling when he saw results of management implementation I had engendered in his organization. I was able to manage perfectly his office and improve the quality of his business after decades in random behaviors and administrative chaos. Also, I was responsible for planning, organizing tasks effectively in other companies, and was able to achieve all administrative responsibilities that facilitated the smooth running of the office. Moreover, I was responsible for communicating and coordinating between different activities. My jobs were good opportunity to improve skills and enhance knowledge and determine the priorities. Nowadays, my hope is to be a professional teacher and a sophisticated trainer in business administration and international management .it was my desire since studding at the university. I love much this field. As a student I struggled to understand how to manage myself and organize people around me. During my study and experience, I learned much more than an abstract theory. Practicing management taught me to believe in myself and build confidence into others. I become able to participate opinions and experience with others proudly .Furthermore, making decision carefully in addition to take responsibility. Besides, I learned the value of hard work and how to deal with problems at risk levels. I'm sure that I have ability to achieve my goals and believe that the joy one can experiences in helping others and serve my country. My desire for learning and education didn't stop there. I have also completed other certificates and course to complement my skills and knowledge. As to my personality, I am very sociable and I love meeting new people .In reality, I enjoy getting into new cultures and learning languages. I believe learning Swedish language as new language for me will be a great challenge and I would love to perfect my English. Thus, I am looking forward to getting to know Sweden more thoroughly than I do now. I'm sure that Studying in Sweden will be a great opportunity because Swedish educational system has very high standards of education and will increase my knowledge wider than I have now. I would be fortunate to study management in the Lund University which is highly ranked in many international comparisons of higher education and has been consistently placed in the world's top 100 universities in recent years. Thank you for considering my application, and I look forward to your encouraging reply
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I would be grateful if any of you proof read following application. Request for Financial Aid I would like to apply to apply for “Full Scholarship” offered by institution or “ABC Scholarship” to support my study at “XYZ institute ’. To be honest I came from a typical middle class family of a third world country like AB. The tuition fee and living cost in a city like GG cannot be afforded neither by me nor my family. My father worked in AB Air force and retired in 1993 as Warrant Officer (It is the first Junior Commissioned Officers (JCO) rank of AB Air Force.). The salary of government employee is not competitive in my country. So he had not able manage savings from his salary and small amount of pension is the main source of his income. One of the most unfortunate parts of my life is that my father died on 13-03-2013, the date known as unlucky thirteen became extremely unfortunate for me. My mother is alive and she owned a small house and renting out flat is the single source of her income. She gets about 37,000 Taka each month from house rent by which she bears her living expenditure. At present she lives in a small flat together with my sister in capital city. She is not in a position to provide me financial help to carry out my study in GG. I did full-time job for 2 years in entry level position in country AB and I have not taken any money from my family since January, 2010 and bearing my own cost along with giving financial support to my family. Therefore, I do not have any personal savings to provide financial support to continue my tertiary education in GG. Presently I am pursuing my Education at University of BB where there is no tuition fee for student and I am receiving financial support from ‘State Educational Loan Fund’ under ‘QQ scheme’ to cover my living expenses. The Funding Body decision on education support 2013-14 is enclosed herewith for your kind perusal where you will find the details description of financial support. It is noteworthy that I also received the same amount of grant for 2012-13 academic years and financial grant was extended for 2013-14 due to my successful completion of first year with very satisfactory grade. I have tried to describe my current financial situation and I cordially ask you to consider my application for financial assistance.
 
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I would like to apply for your master's scholarship program at your university for the autumn of 2014. My interesting is to pursue the management because I'm specialized in this field and I believe strongly pursuing this degree will prepare me to achieve my long-term objectives. After earning my undergraduate degree in business administration from the Islamic University in Gaza, in 2001, I worked for various places. Over 10 years of working in trading companies as administrator then as manager, I have gained and improved my skills. Firstly, I worked for father's business. I remember his exciting feeling when he saw results of management implementation I had engendered in his organization. I was able to manage perfectly his office and improve the quality of his business after decades in random behaviors and administrative chaos. Also, I was responsible for planning, organizing tasks effectively in other companies, and was able to achieve all administrative responsibilities that facilitated the smooth running of the office. Moreover, I was responsible for communicating and coordinating between different activities. My jobs were good opportunity to improve skills and enhance knowledge and determine the priorities. Nowadays, my hope is to be a professional teacher and a sophisticated trainer in business administration and international management .it was my desire since studding at the university. I love much this field. As a student I struggled to understand how to manage myself and organize people around me. During my study and experience, I learned much more than an abstract theory. Practicing management taught me to believe in myself and build confidence into others. I become able to participate opinions and experience with others proudly .Furthermore, making decision carefully in addition to take responsibility. Besides, I learned the value of hard work and how to deal with problems at risk levels. I'm sure that I have ability to achieve my goals and believe that the joy one can experiences in helping others and serve my country. My desire for learning and education didn't stop there. I have also completed other certificates and course to complement my skills and knowledge. As to my personality, I am very sociable and I love meeting new people .In reality, I enjoy getting into new cultures and learning languages. I believe learning Swedish language as new language for me will be a great challenge and I would love to perfect my English. Thus, I am looking forward to getting to know Sweden more thoroughly than I do now. I'm sure that Studying in Sweden will be a great opportunity because Swedish educational system has very high standards of education and will increase my knowledge wider than I have now. I would be fortunate to study management in the Lund University which is highly ranked in many international comparisons of higher education and has been consistently placed in the world's top 100 universities in recent years. Thank you for considering my application, and I look forward to your encouraging reply.
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Hi everyone, I'm new to this forum. I'm working on this letter to a neighbour whose birds are causing a noise disturbance. I'm still thinking hard on expressing how bad the noise is affecting my family and how I could express the letter in a way the neighbour would be receptive. I would very much welcome your comments. * * * * * Dear Neighbour, Thank you for sparing some time to read this letter. I wonder if you could help me and my family on something that has been distressing us since the start of this year. I understand that you are a lover of birds and have kept some in a room of your unit. Please understand that I fully respect your hobby. I have however been regularly losing sleep because I am woken up by the sounds of the birds each morning, mostly from 6 to 7.30am. The sounds continue off and on throughout the day. As I also need to study at home, I also have trouble concentrating because of the sounds. My family members are similarly troubled throughout the day. May I offer a suggestion? I wonder if you would be kind enough to keep the sound in by closing the windows. My family and I would be very grateful if you could help us as we have been very distressed every day. Thank you. Sincerely, * * * * *
 
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Dear Sir/Madam I am applying for your Bachelors program of Physiotherapy starting in September 2014. I recently graduated from Midlands Christian College here in X with my GCE A level and IGSCE O Level certificates. I studied Maths, Chemistry and Biology in my last two years of high school. My ambition is to graduate as a fully fledged Physiotherapist and to go on to specialize in neurological physical therapy. My first exposure to Physical Therapy was three years ago after I injured my knee during a volleyball match. The pain was so unbearable i thought it would never stop. Amazingly after a week of deep tissue massage, cold compresses and stretching and strengthening exercises to reduce the pain and swelling my knee was much better. I was back to playing volleyball again. It was from this experience that I cultivated a keen interest in the study and practice of Physiotherapy. In January 2012 I got the chance to have a 2 week long work experience at Claybank Clinic here in my home town X. During this time I realized that physical therapy was much more than just dealing with sports-related injuries, people with asthma, back pains, stroke victims and Parkinson’s disease came in to the clinic for therapy. With each of the patients I noticed that the physiotherapist set goals and objectives that were measurable and achievable within the scope of the condition of the patient. This showed me that this field of Physical therapy required gentle care and assertive methods to help the patient plus great patients as you work with patients of all ages. The work experience enabled me to attain a concise insight into the work ethics and opportunities in the profession. I have read through the testimonials and student reviews of the university and I am more than certain that Saxion University is the place for me. The outstanding facilities and educational system at the university will equip me fully with knowledge and techniques to take back home to X. No education is complete without experience, getting the opportunity to study abroad gives me a chance that I have never gotten before to learn and interact with people from all around the world, learning new cultures and languages. Accompanying my academics is my developed skills in leadership. I was the Vice Head girl and Vice President of the Toastmasters society at my previous high school. I am currently part of the City’s Junior Council. In the Council I am part of the team that is in charge of fundraising for the different causes e.g. school fees for less privileged children, buying supplies for the orphanages and more. It is fun and innovative way for the youth to give back to the community. I am confident that I will bring a high level of commitment, energy and leadership to the program and to the school, enriching others with my Xculture and zeal for life. Thank you for considering my application, I look forward to your acceptance. Yours Sincerely
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Please can some one help me write a follow up letter for a quotation given?? PLEASE
 
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Hello everybody! My name is Nastia. I am applying for Erasmus Mundus scholarship Masters course in Education Technologies http://www.euromime.org/en/home/the-euromime-master. For this I need to answer some questions in the application form. I'd very thankful if you could proofread them and say what are my chances to get it with these answers. The deadline is on January 6 th 2014 Motivation/ Personal statement What are your learning goals and objectives? I was inspired by the "Summerhill School" of A. Neil and the life of Maria Montessori when doing my research in Pedagogics and later on by Sir Ken Robinson speeches and the way how schools work in Singapore. For this reason I am now working as a teacher of English and a pedagogue in the Youth Club turning my views on education into ideas and trying them out in my work but I can clearly see that I lack the knowledge that I can get observing the studying process of the teachers who work with the techniques of experimental pedagogics. I feel like I am trying to invent a bicycle after only seeing the picture of it once. I want to learn more about the ICT in education. I have read articles on this topic including the UNESCO guide but I did not have a chance to see applied as long as in Eastern Europe they are just starting using elements of it in few public schools and some private ones.This program can give me a unique opportunity to see how education system and different work in different countries and make a research under supervision of professionals. When teaching I am trying to make my lessons interesting to my students and relevant to their needs although I can clearly see that I lack knowledge and experience. What is your career plan? (what field would you like to work in? What company (or institution) would you like to work for? What position would you be looking for?) My life dream is to create a modern school corresponding all the requirements for teaching contemporary children of XXI century that my architect friend has projected as a student. In the future, after coming back with clearer vision of my school having international experience and more knowledge I want to work in the places where they tell how the education has to work in the country or in my city. These are Ministry of Education or local Department of Education. I realise that I will not be able to get this job right the moment I come back home so untill get it I plan to continue working as an ordinary teacher of English and probably come back to work in the NGO where I'm doing internship now or do internship in private schools with author's techniques of teaching like Waldorf and Montessori. Another thing I know for sure I am going to do on coming back is sharing my knowledge and experience with people holding lectures and seminars for beginning teachers, education students as well as to all other interested in education looking for likeminded people. What topic have you chosen for your thesis/dissertation? Your answer will enable moderators to assess your degree of conceptualisation) What is your research question? (major focus, line of argument) I want to compare average public schools and author techniques schools in order to find out whether the author techniques schools really give the necessary life skills for the XXI century` to the schoolchildren and to what extent. So far it seems to me that mostly public schools do not provide the children with necessary knowledge and skills for living in the digital era What is the theoretical framework for your research? I hope to shed light on the following questions through my research: 1) what are the skills and knowledge needed to live in the XXI century? 2) do the average public schools provide these skills and knowledge ? What kind of schools? To what extent do they provide them? a) what kind of methods and tools are used? b) what is needed to for the public schools to succeed in providing the children with necessary XXI century skills? 3) Do the author techniques' schools provide these skills and knowledge? What kind of schools? To what extent do they provide them? a) what kind of methods and tools are used? b) what is needed to for the author techniques' schools to succeed in providing the children with necessary XXI century skills? What research methodology are you planning to use? My research requires field study in order to collect necessary data, analyze the material and to compare the studying and learning processes in the schools. I plan to use descriptive and action research for the reason that I want to observe and examine the studying process in the schools. Multiple interviews are planned with schoolchildren, their teachers and parents as well as school graduates, their professors and employers in order to provide more in-depth data collection and opportunities for follow-up. The goal is to interview approximately 20 people connected to 3 schools in different localities. This project will utilize both quantitative and qualitative data collection tools, but is rooted in a qualitative epistemological position that recognizes the importance of locating the research within a particular social, cultural, and historical context. It also takes seriously the social construction of these contexts and the identities participants construct within them. A qualitative evaluation shall be utilized for this research project leveraging subjective methods such as interviews and observations to collect substantive and relevant data. I will work with faculty at the local Research Centers to identify potential participants. I will also ask teachers to respond to a series of journal prompts over the course of the project that allow them to provide a more detailed and longitudinal view of their daily lives as teachers—their experiences, reactions, beliefs, and ideas about their roles and responsibilities as educators. This is the unique opportunity for me to implement by intercultural education expertise within foreign country and assist the recognized universities in developing a ground-breaking and vital research project....
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Hi guys, my letter is almost finish. Can you please help me completing this paragraph? i feel like i should rephrase it: Studying biology is my obvious choice. My life experiences and interests have led me in that direction. I feel empowered being a biology student as I begin to understand and unravel the essence of life In addition, I have diversified fields of interest, including pottery, drawing, photography and, quite differently, computer science. I hope to be in a position to combine biology with some of these fields in the future. Thanks you!
 
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