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In formal letters addressed to several men and women in a company, is it correct to use Messieurs/Mesdames as salutation?
 
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Here is the letter. Dear Jan 1) I hope you are all well, and that you’ve recovered from the busy Christmas period. 2) I’m writing to ask you a favor. 3) I’m coming down to London at the end of the month to go to a conference. 4) It’s the 22nd – 24th January. 5) Could you put me up for a few days? 6) I don’t mind where you put me. 7) I’ll sleep anywhere! 8) There is something else I’d like to ask you. 9) Could I have a bite to eat when I arrive? 10) Just a sandwich will do. 11) I hope that’s all right. Write soon and let me know. Best wishes Chris I'm not quite sure about the right order of the sentences, especially with the number 2. At first I put it in the beginning of the letter but then I thought that starting your letter with a direct request is not very nice. Am I mistaken here? Thanks for your help!
 
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Hi, I'm planning to sent email to a Porfessor to ask if he would accept me as a PhD candidate in his lab. Could any one please read my this letter and correct me if I'm wrong somewhere. Thanks a lot in advance. Dear Dr. , I am a Master student in Mathematics at ... University in Germany and am working with Dr. ... I also have a bachelor degree in Computer Science from .. University of in India where, the undergraduate admission is limited to the top 1 percent of students who pass the national entrance exam. Tentatively I would be finishing my Master by end of October. I am interested in finding out if there are available PhD vacancies at your lab in the near future. My main areas of research interest are Computational Neuroscience such as statistical analysis of Neuronal data, Neural networks, Graph theory, non-linear dynamical systems and time series analysis. Through out my Master I have been mostly working on statistical analysis of spike trains and I wrote my thesis on ... However, I'm also very interested in Graph theory and its application in analysis of changes in brain structural and functional connectivity in Alzheimer's disease, Schizophrenia, Autism and etc… Having said about my main areas of research interest, I should also mention that above all of these, what fascinates me most is to have a specific question in my mind and try to solve it. Honestly, the topic of the question is not my first concern. I'd simply enjoy tackling with a question/problem days and nights (and even sometimes dream of it at night) until I'll find the answer . I am attaching my CV and Master's thesis to this email. I would be really happy if you will consider me for a PhD candidate at your lab. Please feel free to contact me if you need some other information. I am eagerly looking forward to hear from you. Warmest Regards,
 
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Hi, I am not an English speaker and I really need help for my Phd application cover letter. I appreciate any instruction. Dear Dr. xxx, It is with great pleasure that I submit my application for PhD program in the Department of Geography at xxxx. I will graduate in December and am looking for 2014 fall admission under your supervision. I was very excited when I saw your webpage and research interest in October and contacted you immediately. During undergraduate studies, my courses have covered software programming and fundamentals in GIS. Then in master degree, I continued GIS study in Geography and Geology department in xxx University supervised by Dr. xxx. For the past two years, I worked as GIS technician and application developer in xxx, where I developed several GIS web applications in a multi-tasking environment. The development experiences greatly extended my programming skills and provided me valuable understanding of GIS toolsets and technologies. I found my interest in web-based GIS decision analysis after two years of hands-on working in GIS. By providing innovative application, I believe WebGIS-based application can enhance public participation and equity of access, and thus bridge the gap between experts and the public for planning and decision-making issue. For my graduation thesis, therefore, I am conducting an independent research on a web based decision support application for local community planning. My expectation for this project is to enhance my GIS and programming skills and, more importantly, prepare me for future research in this area of study. I am confident that I have the capability and potential to pursue PhD degree at Western. I am looking forward to talking to you about my future program study and possible research project. Please also find my writing sample and resume. Thank you for your consideration. Sincerely, xxxx
 
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Hi all and AlpheccaStars: thank you for you comment in last session. I revised my cover letter and here goes again. Dear Dr. xx, It is with great pleasure that I submit my application for PhD program in the Department of Geography at xxx. I believe my background and experience are well suited for your research interest and I would like to apply for 2014 fall admission under your supervision. My graduate study in xxx University is supervised by Dr. xxx and I will earn the Master’s degree in December. The curriculum of my course study has covered a wide range of topics in GIS analysis. For the past two years, I worked as GIS technician and application developer in xxx, where I developed several web mapping applications. The development experiences greatly extended my programming skills and provided me valuable understanding of GIS toolset and technology. I found my research interest in WebGIS-based spatial decision analysis after two years of practice. The ideas, that through Internet GIS decision analysis can become more accessible to public and spatial decision-making can be more democratized, always motivate me to build innovative web-based GIS tools. Therefore, my current research project for graduation thesis focuses on a WebGIS-based decision support application for community land use planning. Results of this project should discuss the WebGIS character in planning and decision-making process. An application system design and a prototype are also expected. Being experienced with both GIS analysis and programming, I am confident that I have the capability and potential to conduct research on WebGIS-based multicriteria analysis for urban planning which you mentioned in the email. I am looking forward to talking to you about my future study. Please also find my writing sample and resume. Thank you for your consideration. Sincerely, xxxx
By Zhang Terry  
 
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I am not an English speaker and I really need help for my phd application cover letter. Any instruction would be appreciated. Dear Dr. xxx, It is with great pleasure that I submit my application for PhD program in the Department of Geography at xxx. I will graduate in December and am looking for 2014 fall admission under your supervision. I was very excited when I saw your webpage and research interest in October and contacted you immediately . During undergraduate studies, my courses have covered software programming and fundamentals in GIS. Then in master degree, I continued GIS study in Geography and Geology department in xxx University supervised by Dr.xxx. For the past two years, I worked as GIS technician and application developer in xxxx , where I developed several GIS web applications in a multi-tasking environment. The development experiences greatly extended my programming skills and provided me valuable understanding of GIS toolsets and technologies. I found my interest in web-based GIS decision analysis after two years of hands-on working in GIS. By providing innovative application, I believe WebGIS-based application can enhance public participation and equity of access, and thus bridge the gap between experts and the public for planning and decision-making issue. For my graduation thesis, therefore, I am conducting an independent research on a web based decision support application for local community planning. My expectation for this project is to enhance my GIS and programming skills and, more importantly, prepare me for future research in this area of study. I am confident that I have the capability and potential to pursue PhD degree at xxx. I am looking forward to talking to you about my future program study and possible research project. Please also find my writing sample and resume. Thank you for your consideration. Sincerely, xxx...
By Zhang Terry  
 
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Dear Jeff, I recently recieved your letter in which you express an interest in participating a rock-climbing trip with me. I would be more than happy to join you! I did not see you for ages! It was nice of you to invite me, but I would appreciate it if you could send me some additional information about which trip are you interested in. I would also be interested in the price and the lenght of this trip. How could I say no to this? Rock climbing is amazing and dangerous at the same time. I mean, it would be wise to consider the condition of the equipment first. I hope we will have a gorgeous weather! Furthermore, I would like to develop my climbing skills by this trip. I want to you join you, we should make an appointment to disguss the details. I look forward to hearing from you soon! Yours sincerely, Bálint Turáncsics
 
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Dear all, first of all I would like to thank all members (and ´guests) for the possibility of this forum. I found it by chance and got many useful tips for the writing of a CV or letter of motivation. Thank you. As I am applying for an internship / practical training in the US, I have to write a letter of motivation. I kindly ask you to check it and give me some useful advise how to improve it---I guess, it is not very good... Waiting to hear from you - thank you and greeting from Germany, Julia Dear Sir / Madam, (the application will be given to several companies...) With this letter I would like to explain my motivation for an employent at your company and apply for a practical training. I graduated in Economis from the University of Applied Sciences, Konstanz, Germany in September 2004 where I obtained a degree in Management / Controlling. After my graduation from High School in 1999, I was working as an intern for a jewellery company in my hometown, Pforzheim where I was allowed to find out more about the practical part of economics before studying economics. The internship gave me the opportunity to understand more about business. After this time, I was fascinated by economics and its daily challenges. My decision to study economics was confirmed. Part of my studies at a University of Applied Sciences are two practical terms, where students work in a company of their own choice to gain practical experience. For 6 months I was working in Munich at the Hotel Bayerischer Hof, member of the “Leading hotels of the world” at the sales and F&B department. My duties included organizing events for groups, handling booking requests and the booking itself for important clients, groups as well as daily office duties. This work was very challenging because of the projects and sometimes extraordinary client requests. In 2002 / 2003, I worked as an intern for the automotive company Porsche AG in Stuttgart in the marketing services department for another 6 months. This department organizes driving courses on european ormula one race tracks like Imola, Spa and Hockenheim Ring. The employment included the organisation of booking requests, bookings of the participants, hotel rooms and capacity as well as the organisation on the race track itself. Beeing a big fan of automobiles, especially sports cars, this internship was one of the most interesting employment. Furthermore I was able to learn ortganising and handling the most different people, events and challenges. After graduation in autum 2004, I started another internship at a pharmaceutical company, Favodent Karl Huber GmbH, where I will be working until February 2005. My duties include the coordination of marketing events, market research and supportive work for the planned market entry in Brasil and Russia. Furthermore I supported the export management in their daily business, calculating prices, offering our products to foreign clients, checking delivery notes and invoices and the shipment itself. Due to the different freight forwarding and custom regulations, I learned to cooperate with diffent parties and matters. The opportunity to work with several clients within Europe and the U.S., confirmed my decision to work abroad. As I am very interested in other countries, people and the way they are doing business, I am very curious to work in the U.S. and learn more about american economy and culture. As I have spend many vacations with my grandparents, who are living in Florida, I am fascinated by the “american way of living” and would be pleased to be given the opportunity to experience living a longer period in the U.S.. Especially in todays time, it is very important to improve the own personal skills and work experience abroad. Due to my work experience in different companies and employment with the most different personalities, I can offer my extended language skills, profound organisation skills as well as my ability to get easiliy used to new projects to my future employee. Furthermore, I am highly motivated to work in another country and in another language as I am ambitious to learn more every day. Aditionally, I learnde the values of teamwork and commitment as well as working hard and focus on given goals. My ability to structure my time and fit my activities into my schedule helped my to complete given projects succesfully. The preferred field of employment would be in the marketing department or organisation of events. Besides that I would like to work closely together with clients. As I have learned and prooved working on my own before, my employment would does not need extended supersision. Furthermore, I would like you to know that the accomondation will be organized by Interswop, Germany, as well as work permit , visa and custom matters. Thank you very much for your time and considering my request, I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerly, Julia
 
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I apologize for asking so many questions about punctuation, but I really want to learn it, so I can type flawlessly. Here's an email I sent out today; I hope it is correct. "Dear Dr Xxxxx, I have read an article, at www.Telegraph.co.uk, about disc hernia treatments, and your name came up in the article. The patient was very happy with the treatment because you used a "new method" called "Keyhole Spine Surgery". I am contacting you at the behest of my aunt, who is suffering with severe back-pains at present. Please note that I do not actually know if she suffers with "disc herniation", or what the appropriate diagnosis is, as I have non been given the diagnosis from her local hospital. Nevertheless, she is located in Xxxx and would be willing to undergo the surgery in your hospital, in London. I am going to provide you with X-ray pictures, please find attached, of her back, so you can diagnose the problem. I would be most grateful if you could respond to me with diagnosis, treatment and cost. Sincerely, Xxx Xxxxxxxx"
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Hello. I am a Master student in International Law and a graduate in European Law. Yesterday I found out about a PhD position for which I would like to apply. In order to apply I must write a motivation letter. However, the deadline is today and there is nobody who can help me to revise my motivation letter. I therefore turn to all of you and would kindly like to ask you for help. I would be eternally grateful for anyone who can devote some of his or hers precious time to help me! Below is the current draft of my letter. I realize that this version needs a lot of improvement and I am not asking anyone to write a motivation letter for me. However, I would sincerely appreciate any feedback, suggestions and other forms of help as I really want to obtain this position. Dear dr. XXX, I am writing to express my great interest in applying for the PhD position at the Faculty of Law, University of XXX, for the project on Marital Captivity and Human Rights. I am a MA European Law School graduate and a motivated student of the Human Rights Track of the Master Globalization and Law at the University of XXX, expected to graduate in October 2013. With my educational background and a research interest in the area of the human rights of women , I strongly believe my work can contribute to improving the position of women with regard to marital rights. Throughout the course of my education I have developed a special interest for the role of the rule of law in multicultural societies, where social issues constantly call for new solutions. My aim is to be part of a meaningful research project that can contribute to solving problems of contemporary societies through the use of legal instruments. During the Globalization and Law Master I developed a special interest for the human rights of women, which led me to writing my thesis about the status of the human rights of women in Afghanistan. In this work I examined the inherent tensions between sharia-based family law and women’s human rights in Afghanistan. In particular, I addressed a state’s obligation under international human rights law to take measures to eliminate violence and discrimination against women. It is my dream to continue conducting research on the gap between religious practices and women’s human rights in order to contribute to a better understanding of the methods that can reduce gender inequalities. Beyond my research experience in the field of women’s human rights I have been fortunate to gain good knowledge of other areas of law at the University of Maastricht. In particular, I have gained insight in migration law through the course Migration and Citizenship Law, which was graded with a nine. I am very interested in Dutch Migration and Aliens law as well and have written my thesis of the European Law School Master about the compatibility of the Dutch family reunification rules with European migration law. This work was graded with a nine and evidences my good research and academic skills. In 2012 I obtained an internship position at the Dutch Ministry of Economic Affairs. My main task was examining relevant European Union legal provisions and their scope of application and pursuing Dutch governmental institutions to adhere to these obligations, thereby securing the rights of citizens. My ability to conduct individual research, while being part of a team has been highly appreciated by my supervisor in his internship report. Thank you for considering my application. Yours sincerely, XXX
 
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Hi, could you please help me getting this job by correcting my cover letter? Thanks Dear Sandeman's, I am interested in the "potential guides without experience" job as advertised in [link] I was born in Barcelona and have paid for being a legal freelancer freelancing (autónomo) for the past few years. I consider myself an easy-going and enthusiast person and I am very passionate about things. I think i fit the profile for being a successful tour guide. Working with you is an exciting opportunity and I look forward to speaking to you in detail about my education and work experience. I am readily available at the phone number or email provided in my attached cv. Thank you in advance for your time and consideration. Sincerely, Me Phone: xxxx
By Miguel Munoz  
 
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Hi, Below is my mail to my new company manager mentioning my delay in joining. kindly suggest. Hope this mail reaches you in good spirits. Based on my discussion with my current organization Project team for early release, I have got oral commitment of my release for on or before October 18. I am still trying as much as possible to be relieved in order to start work with your organization on October 21, Wherein case my official notice ends on November 4 and my joining date is November 5. I promise there will be no further delay.
 
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i would like to help me to corect this motivation letter either in grammar mistakes or the writing structure. it is required for the aplication proccess of student visa in embasy Dear Sir or Madame, I have been very fortunate to have been accepted at Berlin University to continue my studies in Master of Business Administration programme. I am writing to give the reasons why I chose this university, and this degree program, and to request approval for a student visa for (dates). The reason I applied in Berlin University is that I greatly admire the German university system. German universities are internationally renowned and are the largest university systems in Europe and they are leaders in research and teaching, so their programs are structured in a way that directly links theory with practice. German universities are famous for their first-class service for international students and services are in place to help students feel immediately at home, comfortable and familiar with the German way of life. The reason that I selected Berlin University is that it, of all German institutions, offers a specialized MBA programme that is appealing to me. Also its great faculty and perfect facilities are a fitting place to perform studies. During my post educational years I studied Business Administration with specialization in International Business & European Affairs at the American College of Barcelona I developed a sound and very broad business knowledge. The sector of Business Administration has captured my interest and i have decided to specialize in this field. I found the MBA program to be very suiting and i am sure i would strongly enrich my future plans and help me in my prospective career. The international approach also suits my previous studies of International Business. I have gathered experience abroad as I lived, studied and worked for 10 years in Spain, and worked for 2 years in Skopia . Each experience made it easier for me to adopt to a totally new situation. To increase my international experience I have chosen to continue my studies at Berlin University. I am positive that i will be a successful prospective graduate. Due to my previous education and work experience i have a solid background to build upon. My international experience made me very adaptable at all kinds of situations. I am fluent in English and Spanish and my native language is Macedonian. I also plan to increase German knowledge intensively . I am married to a Spanish citizen that is living in Berlin and other family. As well I have spent considerable time in X city as e turist. Also not only am I familiar with the city, but I also adore it. Furthermore, I know the university has an excellent reputation in Business Administration. The knowledge and experience I plan to gain at Frankfurt University will help me to achieve my goals in my future career. Thank you for considering my request. Sincerely,
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Hi, i am poor as a rat these days and I really need this job... could you please help me getting it by correcting my cover letter? Thanks Dear Sandeman's, I am interested in the "potential guides without experience" job as advertised in [link] I was born in Barcelona and have paid for being a legal freelancer freelancing (autónomo) for the past few years. I consider myself an easy-going and enthusiast person and I am very passionate about things. I think i fit the profile for being a successful tour guide. Working with you is an exciting opportunity and I look forward to speaking to you in detail about my education and work experience. I am readily available at the phone number or email provided in my attached cv. Thank you in advance for your time and consideration. Sincerely, Me Phone: xxxx
 
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I graduated from earth science department of Shiraz University (Pahlavi University).I receive my M.S. degree in Tectonics(earth science) in 2009 under supervision of Dr.Ahmad Zamani .My project was about Morphotectonic indices and GIS analysis. I got my B.S. degree from shiraz University too on 2005. I am very interested in knowing about the rate of tectonic activity with the aid of quantitative morphotectonic analysis and computer programs such as GIS. I read your articles and It was very fascinating for me that your feild of interest projects are compeletly match with mine.I am very interested in your projects and it is my pleasure to work under your supervision to enhance my knowledge in Tectonics and earth science.I appreciate for your time and consideration and I hope you can give me the privilege of joinig your team.
 
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Dear Mr. Mi, Nice to hear from you again. According to what informed in our latest discussions, I hope to could help you and your Inc. in Sales Policy and to benefit our group (ODBL) by your support. As we discussed before we can collaborate regarding to your INC's Short-term goals Long-term goals. for your short-term goals, I can arrange for seminars and workshops for introducing your product in I. for your Medium-term objectives and Long-term goals I can train bio-medical Engineers to use your product in future. for this case I need your help and strong support. regarding to The development process I., having Good relationships with people active in the field, I think our collaboration could be helpful and positive for both side. if there are an agreement about what raised, we could arrange a time for a meeting over the phone and discussing the details. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely Yours A. B.
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can somebody proof-read this motivation letter and suggest any possible corrections/additions. Dear Prof. I wish to apply to the PhD project “ABC” in your lab for the DEF International Doctoral Program. I believe that this doctoral degree would be a stepping stone to fulfil my ultimate goal, which is to delve into research, which would provide pragmatic solutions to societal problems. I am a pre-final year postgraduate student at the Indian Institute of Technology (IIT) Guwahati, one of the premier institutes for engineering and applied sciences in India. I am pursuing two year Master of Technology (M.Tech.) programme in the Department of Biotechnology. I expect to complete my degree in May, 2014. Presently, I am working on my thesis in Structural Biology and Molecular Biology laboratories under the supervision of Dr. X and Dr. Y. The objective of this project is to study the structural mechanism of inhibition of proteinX by drugY. I did Docking and Molecular Dynamics simulations to elucidate the kinetics behind inhibition of proteinX by drugY. Now I am trying to clone the proteinX gene and consequently express the protein. Post expression, I would attempt to purify the protein and co-crystallize it with drugY. The structure will be corroborated with the computational data and used to study the underlying molecular mechanism of inhibition. My experience over the past one year has inculcated in me a great interest in Structural Biology and I would ideally like to pursue this in a PhD program. I am particularly interested in this project because of its relevance to medical conditions. I firmly believe that while clinicians have the opportunity to help people directly, they cannot do so without scientists and researchers. The quality of the faculty, flexibility of the graduate program, the diverse areas of ongoing research, the carefully designed depth and breadth of courses, cultural diversity in Institut Pasteur along with world-class equipments and facilities, seem to me as the right ambience to nurture my research interests and work towards my goal. It would be a matter of great pride for me to be a part of this rich interdisciplinary interface. It would aid in my intellectual growth and academic development. The institute will offer me a very conducive atmosphere for research and development. Following my PhD, I hope to be part of a reputable research university where I will continue my research and endeavour to perpetuate my enthusiasm for science by motivating my students. Thank you for considering my application, and I look forward to your acceptance. Sincerely yours, XYZ.
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I am from India and I want to apply for masters to an english university in Holland, which necessitates writing a motivation letter. I am unsure about the content, the writing skill and the grammar that I have used. I really do not want to miss this opportunity to get into this university and so I am posting my letter here so that I can get some suggestions as to what more improvements should I make. I would really appreciate your help. = letter = MOTIVATION LETTER Scientific research has stepped into a new domain with advancements in translational research bringing the new feats from benchside to bedside. This requires knowledge and experience in research as well as clinical studies. Unlike the conventional mode of treatment - which was to treat the disease symptomatically; amalgamation of research and clinical studies focuses on finding newer ways to eliminate the disease right from its root cause. Having known this, I want to exploit the fundamentals of genetic mechanisms through research and make a significant contribution to medical fraternity. During my graduate study I excelled in courses like Molecular and Cell Biology, Cancer Biology, Stem Cell Biology, Biostatistics, Animal and Pharmaceutical Biotechnology, Genetics engineering, Genetics and Medical Biotechnology. With presentations and seminars incorporated into the curriculum I presented a seminar on “Congenital Heart Defects – Atrial and Ventricular Septal Defects”. This seminar inspired me in a very intense way because I realised that cardiovascular diseases cause highest mortality rates annually. Also, during the study of Stem Cell Biology, I came across different research works regarding the regeneration of heart cells for heart valve replacement surgeries and other diseases. I was amazed by the potential the regenerative medicine hides in it and the way in which it can be harvested to treat diseases like myocardial infarction, stenosis and others. While learning about the basics of heart diseases, regeneration and other therapies, I was mesmerized with the efforts to bring in modern therapeutics in cardiology and I made a resolution to contribute in the development of newer means of healing cardiac ailments and help the patients with their sufferings. It was not much later that my father-a professional badminton player, endured a massive heart attack without any previous medical history. The doctors were unable to answer my questions as to why such a physically fit person could have suffered such an attack. This incident made my intention of pursuing research in cardiology elevate tremendously. The M.Sc. Biomedical Science course at Maastricht University gives a very brilliant opportunity to study the aspects of health and diseases that I am unaware of and hence improve my understanding of diseases. Also the various course modules that focus on modern approaches towards diagnosis and treatment of diseases, along with the detailed study about the integration of various methodologies that should be used for diagnosis and treatment, would increase my wealth of knowledge regarding the various molecular as well as clinical aspects of diseases. This in turn will help me to move a step closer in achieving my goal of resolving cardiac patient related problems in medicine through the specialization in cardiovascular sciences in the second year of the program. Looking to my interest and dedication towards research I was accepted as a trainee in the research lab of one of my professors from biomedical division under whose guidance I wrote and presented a review article on “Gene Therapy-application and potential role of Neprilysin and Insulin Degrading Enzyme (IDE) in Alzheimer’s Disease (AD)” in 2nd International Conference on Science, Engineering and Technology, held in VIT University (2011). I also wrote and presented a research paper on “Effect of Biomolecules on Solid Tumor” in the 3rd International Conference on Science, Engineering and Technology, held at VIT University (2011). I gained hands-on experience for various techniques like Western blotting and histopathological examinations of H&E stained tumor sections along with the dissection of mice for animal studies. For my M.Sc. dissertation I got accepted into one of India’s leading cancer hospitals and worked on Large Genomic Rearrangements in the dissertation titled “Study of Germline BRCA1/2 Mutations in Indian Hereditary Breast and Ovarian Cancer (HBOC) Families”, a retrospective study, using the quantitative technique of MLPA. I also gained hands-on experience in molecular techniques like RFLP, PCR, PAGE, DNA Isolation and purification and Blood separation. I took part in various conferences and symposiums like: “Silver Jubilee International Conference on Biotechnological Solutions for Environmental Sustainability”, VIT University, India (2009), “Symposium on Genetics in Clinical Practice: Diagnosis to Therapeutics”, Ahmedabad, India (2010) and “An AACR International Conference on New Horizons in Cancer Research: Biology to Prevention to Therapy”, New Delhi, India (2011), where I had the chance to view and understand the advanced work of scientists in various fields from all over the world. I underwent training in “Preliminary Study in Diagnostics of Genetic Disorders” at a premier cytogenetic laboratory, an (ISO/IEC 17025 Accredited Laboratory), Surat, India and in clinical genetics on “Mutation Probability Models - Comparative Study of BRCAPRO, BOADICEA, and Myriad Models” at TATA Cancer Hospital, Mumbai, India. My goal is to work for patients with heart disease and develop methods that could be successfully implemented into clinical practice to alleviate the sufferings of cardiac patients. The M.Sc. Biomedical Science program at Maastricht University would provide me with a platform to reach towards my aim because the course modules listed are very applicative and the thesis project in cardiovascular sciences would also give me a chance to work for diseases like myocardial infarction, ischemia, angiogenesis and regenerative therapies. So M.Sc. Biomedical Sciences program, at Maastricht University would be a very appropriate place for catering my interest because it brings me the opportunity to interact and learn from renowned clinicians and researchers. I have also represented my state and University in Badminton at National level, winning awards and scholarships for the same. I was awarded the “Best outgoing sportswoman of the Year” award in 2012. Managing between studies and sports has taught me to organize time efficiently and sports have instilled in me the spirit for team work and leadership qualities. Though being culturally different I assure you that this fact would never hinder my effort to prove my worth. I will work with utmost dedication and strive to attain my goal. Thanking you, Yours Sincerely, xyz Masters Applicant
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please guide me how to write a leave application to my principal of special school for three month 8th of may to 31st may... thanks
 
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I got admission in x university. ‘‘I would like to do project in Indian literature ’’. Basically I am an Indian origin. I would like to know more about Indian literature. This research will motivate me to know in deep about Indian literature. To do project with you will help me to know deep in English literature and Indian literature. I am interested in "poesie romantique" also. My goal is to become a teacher or a good translator. I hope that you accepted me to do research work with you. If u have any ideas kindly suggest me. I am willing to do research work with you.
 
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Hello there! this is Bayram Erdem. I accept that I am encroaching upon your free time, and am aware that this letter is beyond normal procedure. For this I am truly sorry. I have just learnt that my bosom friend Dhall, who is male, got sick and I immidiately wrote a get well letter to him. But I suppose I do need your help. Could you posssibly have a look at the text below I have written down and 'translate' the paragraphs into an acceptabe form at your leisure? I wanted to keep my letter honest and humorous to lift his spirits. Please feel free to rewrite the text in its entirety, correcting superficial errors of spelling, word choice, collocation, and morphology, recasting complete sentences if necessary, and even moving whole sentences around so as to produce a more coherent text. You don't need to explain the rationale underlying each change when you're finished with it, I only want to learn what is the way YOU WOULD SAY IT, for I am unable to hunt for better ways of expressing the below intentions. I am looking forward to seeing your reply. Here is the text: Hello Dhall, How are you feeling buddy? (even though I know for me I don't like to tell many people how I'm really feeling even my best friends, I just offer a listening ear and understanding if that’s gonna make you feel better not worse ) I am sorry to hear that you don’t feel very well . You must have dragged your feet all day and been unexplainably tired. Perhaps, you are having too many visitors now, or you just need to nap? I will keep you in my thoughts. Blankets, new pajamas, slippers, new lotions, soaps, or a soft pillow are all for you (just tell me your favorite candy or snack) All I can do is praying for YOU to be healed and that the doctors and nurses be guided to give you the best care they can. And now I can’t think of anything to talk more about . . . , I love you, I care you and I am here for you if you need me. Feel free to write to me any time if you want to talk Sincerely, Bayram
 
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PLease re-draft my below letter: Dear Sir, How are you and everyone at office? Hope everything is going fine and well. I am also doing well and have almost recovered from the ear surgery. I have resumed working at " Pramodkumar Dad & Associates, Ahmedabad ". But i miss the time spent at your office and work done in your guidance. I miss the Saturday discussions and the way you motivated me to stay happy in whatever i do. I would like to thank you sincerely for all your support and help during my articleship. I pray for your and your family's good health and wish happiness always knocks your door. Hope to be in touch!! Yours sincerely, Anshul Ajmera
 
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Hi everybody! I am thankful to all people who helping to other people with their problems with English. Please help me to write a letter to a customer which is not satisfied with her vacation. She is comlpaining about bad service, auwful room and nois outsite the hotel she stayed. She wants full (or partial) reimbursement. I have to write her a letter and refuse the reimbursement in a very polite form. Any help would be greatly appreciated. Thanx. Laura
 
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Dear all! I am going to apply for MA in International realtions. Can you revise me SoP and orrect if it has mistakes? Today the world is getting more and more globalised and facing more challenges then years ago. Understanding the issues of today’s world is more important than 100 years ago because now is the era of information and diplomacy rather than conflicts and wars. Nowadays there is no country that can stay aside the processes going on in the world, times of bipolar system when USA and USSR were main dominants in the international politics are behind and now everyone should be aware of what is happening around them, in their country and around the globe. Recent events and changes in international politics and economy have proved these words. Economic depression of 2008 followed by economic crisis in Europe that couldn’t be dealt till now, political instability in some Arab countries should force us to be more aware of everything. As I have graduated from the University of World Economy and Diplomacy in Tashkent international relations were always interesting for me. Last year of study I spent at the Ministry of Foreign Affairs as an intern and was able to improve my practical and theoretical knowledge in the field of international relations. I was involved in decision making processes on very important sociopolitical issues, took part in preparing and writing diplomatic notes to the embassies and representatives of foreign countries on cultural, social and political matters. Currently I am working for a nationwide project initiated by the ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ. This project was considered by many international organizations as very effective one and in 2011 Asian Development Bank decided to participate in it by giving preferential loan. Main objective of the project is to build new and affordable houses in rural areas and enhance rural infrastructure. The main reason I have chosen the course International Relations in XXXXXXXXXX University is that this university gives unique opportunity to get world class education. On the other site, studying International Relations course in YYYYYYYYY the country that has the strongest influence in development of current political system in Europe and in the world as a whole is the lifetime dream of everyone who is interested in politics. In the future I want to continue my studies on International relations by studying offered modules at the London Metropolitan University and to do the work where I feel myself maximally confident and comfortable. In achieving this goal study at XXXXXXXXXXX University will be great asset and international experience will be gained during study in YYYYYYYYYYY will enhance my view to the current political and economical processes in the world. I am sure that my academic background and work experience in international relations will help me to become one of the outstanding students of the University.
 
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fee concession application from father to school princple due to low income ?
 
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