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Hello. I am a Master student in International Law and a graduate in European Law. Yesterday I found out about a PhD position for which I would like to apply. In order to apply I must write a motivation letter. However, the deadline is today and there is nobody who can help me to revise my motivation letter. I therefore turn to all of you and would kindly like to ask you for help. I would be eternally grateful for anyone who can devote some of his or hers precious time to help me! Below is the current draft of my letter. I realize that this version needs a lot of improvement and I am not asking anyone to write a motivation letter for me. However, I would sincerely appreciate any feedback, suggestions and other forms of help as I really want to obtain this position. Dear dr. XXX, I am writing to express my great interest in applying for the PhD position at the Faculty of Law, University of XXX, for the project on Marital Captivity and Human Rights. I am a MA European Law School graduate and a motivated student of the Human Rights Track of the Master Globalization and Law at the University of XXX, expected to graduate in October 2013. With my educational background and a research interest in the area of the human rights of women , I strongly believe my work can contribute to improving the position of women with regard to marital rights. Throughout the course of my education I have developed a special interest for the role of the rule of law in multicultural societies, where social issues constantly call for new solutions. My aim is to be part of a meaningful research project that can contribute to solving problems of contemporary societies through the use of legal instruments. During the Globalization and Law Master I developed a special interest for the human rights of women, which led me to writing my thesis about the status of the human rights of women in Afghanistan. In this work I examined the inherent tensions between sharia-based family law and women’s human rights in Afghanistan. In particular, I addressed a state’s obligation under international human rights law to take measures to eliminate violence and discrimination against women. It is my dream to continue conducting research on the gap between religious practices and women’s human rights in order to contribute to a better understanding of the methods that can reduce gender inequalities. Beyond my research experience in the field of women’s human rights I have been fortunate to gain good knowledge of other areas of law at the University of Maastricht. In particular, I have gained insight in migration law through the course Migration and Citizenship Law, which was graded with a nine. I am very interested in Dutch Migration and Aliens law as well and have written my thesis of the European Law School Master about the compatibility of the Dutch family reunification rules with European migration law. This work was graded with a nine and evidences my good research and academic skills. In 2012 I obtained an internship position at the Dutch Ministry of Economic Affairs. My main task was examining relevant European Union legal provisions and their scope of application and pursuing Dutch governmental institutions to adhere to these obligations, thereby securing the rights of citizens. My ability to conduct individual research, while being part of a team has been highly appreciated by my supervisor in his internship report. Thank you for considering my application. Yours sincerely, XXX
 
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Hi, could you please help me getting this job by correcting my cover letter? Thanks Dear Sandeman's, I am interested in the "potential guides without experience" job as advertised in [link] I was born in Barcelona and have paid for being a legal freelancer freelancing (autónomo) for the past few years. I consider myself an easy-going and enthusiast person and I am very passionate about things. I think i fit the profile for being a successful tour guide. Working with you is an exciting opportunity and I look forward to speaking to you in detail about my education and work experience. I am readily available at the phone number or email provided in my attached cv. Thank you in advance for your time and consideration. Sincerely, Me Phone: xxxx
By Miguel Munoz  
 
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Hi, Below is my mail to my new company manager mentioning my delay in joining. kindly suggest. Hope this mail reaches you in good spirits. Based on my discussion with my current organization Project team for early release, I have got oral commitment of my release for on or before October 18. I am still trying as much as possible to be relieved in order to start work with your organization on October 21, Wherein case my official notice ends on November 4 and my joining date is November 5. I promise there will be no further delay.
 
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i would like to help me to corect this motivation letter either in grammar mistakes or the writing structure. it is required for the aplication proccess of student visa in embasy Dear Sir or Madame, I have been very fortunate to have been accepted at Berlin University to continue my studies in Master of Business Administration programme. I am writing to give the reasons why I chose this university, and this degree program, and to request approval for a student visa for (dates). The reason I applied in Berlin University is that I greatly admire the German university system. German universities are internationally renowned and are the largest university systems in Europe and they are leaders in research and teaching, so their programs are structured in a way that directly links theory with practice. German universities are famous for their first-class service for international students and services are in place to help students feel immediately at home, comfortable and familiar with the German way of life. The reason that I selected Berlin University is that it, of all German institutions, offers a specialized MBA programme that is appealing to me. Also its great faculty and perfect facilities are a fitting place to perform studies. During my post educational years I studied Business Administration with specialization in International Business & European Affairs at the American College of Barcelona I developed a sound and very broad business knowledge. The sector of Business Administration has captured my interest and i have decided to specialize in this field. I found the MBA program to be very suiting and i am sure i would strongly enrich my future plans and help me in my prospective career. The international approach also suits my previous studies of International Business. I have gathered experience abroad as I lived, studied and worked for 10 years in Spain, and worked for 2 years in Skopia . Each experience made it easier for me to adopt to a totally new situation. To increase my international experience I have chosen to continue my studies at Berlin University. I am positive that i will be a successful prospective graduate. Due to my previous education and work experience i have a solid background to build upon. My international experience made me very adaptable at all kinds of situations. I am fluent in English and Spanish and my native language is Macedonian. I also plan to increase German knowledge intensively . I am married to a Spanish citizen that is living in Berlin and other family. As well I have spent considerable time in X city as e turist. Also not only am I familiar with the city, but I also adore it. Furthermore, I know the university has an excellent reputation in Business Administration. The knowledge and experience I plan to gain at Frankfurt University will help me to achieve my goals in my future career. Thank you for considering my request. Sincerely,
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Hi, i am poor as a rat these days and I really need this job... could you please help me getting it by correcting my cover letter? Thanks Dear Sandeman's, I am interested in the "potential guides without experience" job as advertised in [link] I was born in Barcelona and have paid for being a legal freelancer freelancing (autónomo) for the past few years. I consider myself an easy-going and enthusiast person and I am very passionate about things. I think i fit the profile for being a successful tour guide. Working with you is an exciting opportunity and I look forward to speaking to you in detail about my education and work experience. I am readily available at the phone number or email provided in my attached cv. Thank you in advance for your time and consideration. Sincerely, Me Phone: xxxx
 
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I graduated from earth science department of Shiraz University (Pahlavi University).I receive my M.S. degree in Tectonics(earth science) in 2009 under supervision of Dr.Ahmad Zamani .My project was about Morphotectonic indices and GIS analysis. I got my B.S. degree from shiraz University too on 2005. I am very interested in knowing about the rate of tectonic activity with the aid of quantitative morphotectonic analysis and computer programs such as GIS. I read your articles and It was very fascinating for me that your feild of interest projects are compeletly match with mine.I am very interested in your projects and it is my pleasure to work under your supervision to enhance my knowledge in Tectonics and earth science.I appreciate for your time and consideration and I hope you can give me the privilege of joinig your team.
 
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Dear Mr. Mi, Nice to hear from you again. According to what informed in our latest discussions, I hope to could help you and your Inc. in Sales Policy and to benefit our group (ODBL) by your support. As we discussed before we can collaborate regarding to your INC's Short-term goals Long-term goals. for your short-term goals, I can arrange for seminars and workshops for introducing your product in I. for your Medium-term objectives and Long-term goals I can train bio-medical Engineers to use your product in future. for this case I need your help and strong support. regarding to The development process I., having Good relationships with people active in the field, I think our collaboration could be helpful and positive for both side. if there are an agreement about what raised, we could arrange a time for a meeting over the phone and discussing the details. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely Yours A. B.
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can somebody proof-read this motivation letter and suggest any possible corrections/additions. Dear Prof. I wish to apply to the PhD project “ABC” in your lab for the DEF International Doctoral Program. I believe that this doctoral degree would be a stepping stone to fulfil my ultimate goal, which is to delve into research, which would provide pragmatic solutions to societal problems. I am a pre-final year postgraduate student at the Indian Institute of Technology (IIT) Guwahati, one of the premier institutes for engineering and applied sciences in India. I am pursuing two year Master of Technology (M.Tech.) programme in the Department of Biotechnology. I expect to complete my degree in May, 2014. Presently, I am working on my thesis in Structural Biology and Molecular Biology laboratories under the supervision of Dr. X and Dr. Y. The objective of this project is to study the structural mechanism of inhibition of proteinX by drugY. I did Docking and Molecular Dynamics simulations to elucidate the kinetics behind inhibition of proteinX by drugY. Now I am trying to clone the proteinX gene and consequently express the protein. Post expression, I would attempt to purify the protein and co-crystallize it with drugY. The structure will be corroborated with the computational data and used to study the underlying molecular mechanism of inhibition. My experience over the past one year has inculcated in me a great interest in Structural Biology and I would ideally like to pursue this in a PhD program. I am particularly interested in this project because of its relevance to medical conditions. I firmly believe that while clinicians have the opportunity to help people directly, they cannot do so without scientists and researchers. The quality of the faculty, flexibility of the graduate program, the diverse areas of ongoing research, the carefully designed depth and breadth of courses, cultural diversity in Institut Pasteur along with world-class equipments and facilities, seem to me as the right ambience to nurture my research interests and work towards my goal. It would be a matter of great pride for me to be a part of this rich interdisciplinary interface. It would aid in my intellectual growth and academic development. The institute will offer me a very conducive atmosphere for research and development. Following my PhD, I hope to be part of a reputable research university where I will continue my research and endeavour to perpetuate my enthusiasm for science by motivating my students. Thank you for considering my application, and I look forward to your acceptance. Sincerely yours, XYZ.
By shalinee21  
 
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I am from India and I want to apply for masters to an english university in Holland, which necessitates writing a motivation letter. I am unsure about the content, the writing skill and the grammar that I have used. I really do not want to miss this opportunity to get into this university and so I am posting my letter here so that I can get some suggestions as to what more improvements should I make. I would really appreciate your help. = letter = MOTIVATION LETTER Scientific research has stepped into a new domain with advancements in translational research bringing the new feats from benchside to bedside. This requires knowledge and experience in research as well as clinical studies. Unlike the conventional mode of treatment - which was to treat the disease symptomatically; amalgamation of research and clinical studies focuses on finding newer ways to eliminate the disease right from its root cause. Having known this, I want to exploit the fundamentals of genetic mechanisms through research and make a significant contribution to medical fraternity. During my graduate study I excelled in courses like Molecular and Cell Biology, Cancer Biology, Stem Cell Biology, Biostatistics, Animal and Pharmaceutical Biotechnology, Genetics engineering, Genetics and Medical Biotechnology. With presentations and seminars incorporated into the curriculum I presented a seminar on “Congenital Heart Defects – Atrial and Ventricular Septal Defects”. This seminar inspired me in a very intense way because I realised that cardiovascular diseases cause highest mortality rates annually. Also, during the study of Stem Cell Biology, I came across different research works regarding the regeneration of heart cells for heart valve replacement surgeries and other diseases. I was amazed by the potential the regenerative medicine hides in it and the way in which it can be harvested to treat diseases like myocardial infarction, stenosis and others. While learning about the basics of heart diseases, regeneration and other therapies, I was mesmerized with the efforts to bring in modern therapeutics in cardiology and I made a resolution to contribute in the development of newer means of healing cardiac ailments and help the patients with their sufferings. It was not much later that my father-a professional badminton player, endured a massive heart attack without any previous medical history. The doctors were unable to answer my questions as to why such a physically fit person could have suffered such an attack. This incident made my intention of pursuing research in cardiology elevate tremendously. The M.Sc. Biomedical Science course at Maastricht University gives a very brilliant opportunity to study the aspects of health and diseases that I am unaware of and hence improve my understanding of diseases. Also the various course modules that focus on modern approaches towards diagnosis and treatment of diseases, along with the detailed study about the integration of various methodologies that should be used for diagnosis and treatment, would increase my wealth of knowledge regarding the various molecular as well as clinical aspects of diseases. This in turn will help me to move a step closer in achieving my goal of resolving cardiac patient related problems in medicine through the specialization in cardiovascular sciences in the second year of the program. Looking to my interest and dedication towards research I was accepted as a trainee in the research lab of one of my professors from biomedical division under whose guidance I wrote and presented a review article on “Gene Therapy-application and potential role of Neprilysin and Insulin Degrading Enzyme (IDE) in Alzheimer’s Disease (AD)” in 2nd International Conference on Science, Engineering and Technology, held in VIT University (2011). I also wrote and presented a research paper on “Effect of Biomolecules on Solid Tumor” in the 3rd International Conference on Science, Engineering and Technology, held at VIT University (2011). I gained hands-on experience for various techniques like Western blotting and histopathological examinations of H&E stained tumor sections along with the dissection of mice for animal studies. For my M.Sc. dissertation I got accepted into one of India’s leading cancer hospitals and worked on Large Genomic Rearrangements in the dissertation titled “Study of Germline BRCA1/2 Mutations in Indian Hereditary Breast and Ovarian Cancer (HBOC) Families”, a retrospective study, using the quantitative technique of MLPA. I also gained hands-on experience in molecular techniques like RFLP, PCR, PAGE, DNA Isolation and purification and Blood separation. I took part in various conferences and symposiums like: “Silver Jubilee International Conference on Biotechnological Solutions for Environmental Sustainability”, VIT University, India (2009), “Symposium on Genetics in Clinical Practice: Diagnosis to Therapeutics”, Ahmedabad, India (2010) and “An AACR International Conference on New Horizons in Cancer Research: Biology to Prevention to Therapy”, New Delhi, India (2011), where I had the chance to view and understand the advanced work of scientists in various fields from all over the world. I underwent training in “Preliminary Study in Diagnostics of Genetic Disorders” at a premier cytogenetic laboratory, an (ISO/IEC 17025 Accredited Laboratory), Surat, India and in clinical genetics on “Mutation Probability Models - Comparative Study of BRCAPRO, BOADICEA, and Myriad Models” at TATA Cancer Hospital, Mumbai, India. My goal is to work for patients with heart disease and develop methods that could be successfully implemented into clinical practice to alleviate the sufferings of cardiac patients. The M.Sc. Biomedical Science program at Maastricht University would provide me with a platform to reach towards my aim because the course modules listed are very applicative and the thesis project in cardiovascular sciences would also give me a chance to work for diseases like myocardial infarction, ischemia, angiogenesis and regenerative therapies. So M.Sc. Biomedical Sciences program, at Maastricht University would be a very appropriate place for catering my interest because it brings me the opportunity to interact and learn from renowned clinicians and researchers. I have also represented my state and University in Badminton at National level, winning awards and scholarships for the same. I was awarded the “Best outgoing sportswoman of the Year” award in 2012. Managing between studies and sports has taught me to organize time efficiently and sports have instilled in me the spirit for team work and leadership qualities. Though being culturally different I assure you that this fact would never hinder my effort to prove my worth. I will work with utmost dedication and strive to attain my goal. Thanking you, Yours Sincerely, xyz Masters Applicant
By Anonymous  
 
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please guide me how to write a leave application to my principal of special school for three month 8th of may to 31st may... thanks
 
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I got admission in x university. ‘‘I would like to do project in Indian literature ’’. Basically I am an Indian origin. I would like to know more about Indian literature. This research will motivate me to know in deep about Indian literature. To do project with you will help me to know deep in English literature and Indian literature. I am interested in "poesie romantique" also. My goal is to become a teacher or a good translator. I hope that you accepted me to do research work with you. If u have any ideas kindly suggest me. I am willing to do research work with you.
 
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Hello there! this is Bayram Erdem. I accept that I am encroaching upon your free time, and am aware that this letter is beyond normal procedure. For this I am truly sorry. I have just learnt that my bosom friend Dhall, who is male, got sick and I immidiately wrote a get well letter to him. But I suppose I do need your help. Could you posssibly have a look at the text below I have written down and 'translate' the paragraphs into an acceptabe form at your leisure? I wanted to keep my letter honest and humorous to lift his spirits. Please feel free to rewrite the text in its entirety, correcting superficial errors of spelling, word choice, collocation, and morphology, recasting complete sentences if necessary, and even moving whole sentences around so as to produce a more coherent text. You don't need to explain the rationale underlying each change when you're finished with it, I only want to learn what is the way YOU WOULD SAY IT, for I am unable to hunt for better ways of expressing the below intentions. I am looking forward to seeing your reply. Here is the text: Hello Dhall, How are you feeling buddy? (even though I know for me I don't like to tell many people how I'm really feeling even my best friends, I just offer a listening ear and understanding if that’s gonna make you feel better not worse ) I am sorry to hear that you don’t feel very well . You must have dragged your feet all day and been unexplainably tired. Perhaps, you are having too many visitors now, or you just need to nap? I will keep you in my thoughts. Blankets, new pajamas, slippers, new lotions, soaps, or a soft pillow are all for you (just tell me your favorite candy or snack) All I can do is praying for YOU to be healed and that the doctors and nurses be guided to give you the best care they can. And now I can’t think of anything to talk more about . . . , I love you, I care you and I am here for you if you need me. Feel free to write to me any time if you want to talk Sincerely, Bayram
 
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PLease re-draft my below letter: Dear Sir, How are you and everyone at office? Hope everything is going fine and well. I am also doing well and have almost recovered from the ear surgery. I have resumed working at " Pramodkumar Dad & Associates, Ahmedabad ". But i miss the time spent at your office and work done in your guidance. I miss the Saturday discussions and the way you motivated me to stay happy in whatever i do. I would like to thank you sincerely for all your support and help during my articleship. I pray for your and your family's good health and wish happiness always knocks your door. Hope to be in touch!! Yours sincerely, Anshul Ajmera
 
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Hi everybody! I am thankful to all people who helping to other people with their problems with English. Please help me to write a letter to a customer which is not satisfied with her vacation. She is comlpaining about bad service, auwful room and nois outsite the hotel she stayed. She wants full (or partial) reimbursement. I have to write her a letter and refuse the reimbursement in a very polite form. Any help would be greatly appreciated. Thanx. Laura
 
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Dear all! I am going to apply for MA in International realtions. Can you revise me SoP and orrect if it has mistakes? Today the world is getting more and more globalised and facing more challenges then years ago. Understanding the issues of today’s world is more important than 100 years ago because now is the era of information and diplomacy rather than conflicts and wars. Nowadays there is no country that can stay aside the processes going on in the world, times of bipolar system when USA and USSR were main dominants in the international politics are behind and now everyone should be aware of what is happening around them, in their country and around the globe. Recent events and changes in international politics and economy have proved these words. Economic depression of 2008 followed by economic crisis in Europe that couldn’t be dealt till now, political instability in some Arab countries should force us to be more aware of everything. As I have graduated from the University of World Economy and Diplomacy in Tashkent international relations were always interesting for me. Last year of study I spent at the Ministry of Foreign Affairs as an intern and was able to improve my practical and theoretical knowledge in the field of international relations. I was involved in decision making processes on very important sociopolitical issues, took part in preparing and writing diplomatic notes to the embassies and representatives of foreign countries on cultural, social and political matters. Currently I am working for a nationwide project initiated by the ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ. This project was considered by many international organizations as very effective one and in 2011 Asian Development Bank decided to participate in it by giving preferential loan. Main objective of the project is to build new and affordable houses in rural areas and enhance rural infrastructure. The main reason I have chosen the course International Relations in XXXXXXXXXX University is that this university gives unique opportunity to get world class education. On the other site, studying International Relations course in YYYYYYYYY the country that has the strongest influence in development of current political system in Europe and in the world as a whole is the lifetime dream of everyone who is interested in politics. In the future I want to continue my studies on International relations by studying offered modules at the London Metropolitan University and to do the work where I feel myself maximally confident and comfortable. In achieving this goal study at XXXXXXXXXXX University will be great asset and international experience will be gained during study in YYYYYYYYYYY will enhance my view to the current political and economical processes in the world. I am sure that my academic background and work experience in international relations will help me to become one of the outstanding students of the University.
 
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fee concession application from father to school princple due to low income ?
 
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Hi everybody. I desperately need help for somebody to proofread my letter for graduate school. I also need feedback, if I need to add or remove an idea/sentence to make this into a better letter. Thank you for your support. P.S excuse me for the underlined/ highlighted words. Worry only about punctuation,grammar, ideas..etc. To whom it may concern, ( this is how they told me to address it) My name is xxxxxx and I am seeking admission to your Master’s Degree program in Human Movement and Sports, scheduled to start in January 2014. I am applying to this program because I believe my work experience and my well rounded academic background are the skills that make me into an ideal match for a career in the exercise sciences. Since my childhood I have always been involved in sports and dancing. However my greatest passion of all physical activities was gymnastics. I began doing gymnastics at the age of nine. By the time, I was in high school. I had joined my high schools’ varsity team for two years in a row and competed throughout southern California. During my junior year of high school, I focused strictly in Ballet. Dancing became not only a hobby, but also a tool that would later help me perfect my coaching skills. By the time I was in college I had trained in gymnastics for a total of eight years and had reached a level seven, which is an upper competitive level by the USA Gymnastics governing body. While studying in college, I obtained my first gymnastics coaching job working for two different YMCAs’ in Los Angeles, California. Three years later, I relocated to Arizona with a purpose to complete my bachelors’ degree. I was hire at a local dance studio known as The xxxxxx Arts Center in xxxxx, Arizona and was responsible to form a recreational gymnastics program for children. I had a lot of success and decided to also open up a Mexican folk dance class for children. I worked at this studio for a total of two years. After my college graduation I obtained an employment opportunity to work abroad. Since the spring of 2013 I have been living in xxxxxx, Switzerland. A useful skill that has helped me a lot in my coaching career has been my ability to speak more than one language. I grew up speaking English and Spanish at home. I also studied foreign languages in college. My goal was to learn a third language fluently. Thus I majored in German Studies and graduated with a Bachelor of Arts degree from the University of Arizona. My German language skills got me a position as a gymnastics trainer for the Swiss Federation of Gymnastics. This job opportunity lead me to pursue further training and uptake educational courses at the Swiss Olympic Training Center in xxxxxxxx, Switzerland. My experience training there was unforgettable. I had the chance to work closely with coaches who have trained elite gymnasts in many of the previous Olympic Games. However I not only wanted to continue to coaching competitive gymnastics for aspiring olympians, but also recreational gymnastics for children. In less than six months of having arrived to Switzerland, I have become the co-founder of a children’s recreational gymnastics program at an English-speaking pre-school known as xxxxxxxx in xxxxxx, Switzerland . With more than five years of coaching gymnastics I have acquired a lot of practical skills that are necessary to prepare talented gymnasts. My passion for coaching led to my interest in exercise sciences. I have coached many young athletes for many years, but I have been wanting to work with those who are at a disadvantage. My aim is to help children who suffer from obesity and cardiovascular diseases. The Masters in Human Performance and Sport program caught my interest because of the courses that are offered by the department. If I am given the opportunity to be part of your program, I would focus on gaining a strong foundation in stress testing, psychology for coaching, and pediatric physiology. My goal is to not only enhance my previous coaching skills to add to my work experience, but also begin a new career in becoming an academic researcher and an advocate to fight against childhood obesity through promoting sports and dance programs for the community. It is my firm belief that the University of xxxxxx in xxxxx is an ideal place to achieve my career goals. It offers its students a quality education from a reputable university. After doing some extensive research about the faculty at xxxxxx, I have found the professors to be excellent scholars and researchers in their respective fields of specialization. I look forward to working with Professor xxxxx and Professor xxxxxx, along with the rest of the faculty who are involved in the latest health issues that affect Americans. Thanks for considering my application. I look forward to hearing your acceptance and attending your program for this upcoming January of 2014. Sincerely yours, xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
 
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Dear Dr. Blank, My name is Travis Daniell, I just moved to Plano from Tyler, Texas to attend Collin County. My major is Biology and my goal is to only be at Collin County Community College to get my basics out of the way and then move on to hopefully SMU or possibly even North Texas. After that I plan on attending UT Southwestern medical school for Anesthesiology. I’m an extremely hard worker and I am very motivated to make my goals in life come true. I love to learn about Texas Government and the history of how it began so I am very excited to be a part of your class. There is nothing I love more than sports so athletics were always a huge part of school for me, but the one class I always looked forward to later in high school was Government. I see your class being a great way to learn so much more about how this great state work, and I am excited to see what I learn this semester in your class.
 
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Hey everyone! Im applying to study psychology on a bachelor level. This is my first motivation letter, so Im open for any critics, about how could I make this letter better.. Thanks alot! Motivation Letter After I graduated in my high school, I didn’t really know what my direction should be to study forward. So I decided that it is not the time to make that decision, and when the time comes Im going to know what to choose. So I wanted to get a taste of the adult world, and I really wanted to do a backpack travel in South America. I knew I will need money for that, and in my home country in Hungary would take a long while to reach that amount. So basicly I pointed on a map somewhere in western Europe, and that is how i got to live and work in Amsterdam. I worked there in an Irish Pub for a year to collect enought money for my journey. And after a year I was on a flight to Buenos Aires alone. It was important for me that I do it alone, independently. That way I can learn more about my boarders, about my limits, I hoped to learn how can I manage situations, on my own, and it did make me stronger. It gave me a stronger personality and a deeper trust in my inner sense, and a good Spanish knowledge. I spent there almost 9 months, i travelled trough 7 country's. I enjoyed the nature, the views, the food, the culture, and the people and the cultural differences, which made me think on behaviours between people in big city's, in towns and communities in the jungle. And I started to be really interested in how people act, the way they act. While I was travelling, I had a several backpackers, I been travelling with, sometimes for 1-2 months or weeks, or just a couple hours on the bus. They been all really different, interesting people then what Im use to in daily life, mostly between the age of 20-28 but also older ones,I will never forget the man age of 40, whos mission was to to play on a wooden flute on different mountain peaks. I have met with a lot of interesting life stories and experiences, ambitions, pasts which made them be who they are, and do what they been doing. So I realize, that I would like to know more about people minds, what makes them who they are, why they manage things the way they manage them, how it is they make decisions, whats going through person’s mind while they are acting the way they do. And theese experiences inspired me to study psychology. For me to study in English is necessary in order to have the knowledge in a world wide language, so in the future I will be able to use it different parts of the world, to try to help with it more people. Im choosing this University, because I believe that it can give me the right knowledge,the opportunity to have that knowledge, and I am aware of that a lot is depending on me. I believe that my past experiences and my future ambitions will aid me in the succession of my studies. uld I make this letter better!
 
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Here below is my job cover letter, Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to apply for Credit Analyst position in response to your advertisement in Jobabc.com. I have completed my master's degree in Business Administration (MBA) from Bensalli University which I have gained knowledge in financial and marketing fields as well as economic analysis. In addition, I was employed as a customer service representative in AB Bank. I was responsible for credit analysis in both consumer and commercial finance, credit proposals,worked in loan collections and maintained relationships with customers. During that time, I have gained knowledge of calculating consumer credit risk and proved myself as hard working and learnt how to work under pressure. I believe that my experience, analytical skills and business sense, along with understanding of risk management are excellent matches for the qualifications you require for this position. My resume is attached. An opportunity for a personal interview to discuss my abilities and skills and how I can be of value to your company would be most welcome. I appreciate your consideration and look forward to meeting you. Yours faithfully, Abpha Y.M. I would be appreciated for your all comments,
 
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I grew up in an environment where education was not taken seriously. No one ever stressed me to study, prepare for my exams etc.. My parents, most of my close uncles and other relatives are not very much educated. They went into business early and my parents thought of doing the same with me. Till grade four, I studied in an ordinary school but some family friends advised my parents to change my school. So they did change my school because they also felt that my current school was not up to the mark. I was only in that school because it was nearer to my house than other schools. When I got my school changed, I went to Resource Academia in grade five. It was not until grade seven that I started to take my education seriously and for once, my parents saw the importance of education. When I was in grade seven, my father suffered a huge loss in his business and we almost got bankrupt. That was a major turning point in my life; I did not know whether my father's business would even last or not. My parents and I knew that my future was not secured and we both realized that I could not just rely on their business for the rest of life. So I started taking education more seriously. I knew that I had to secure my future on my own. I started taking interest in my studies and excelled in it; I secured top position in computer studies in my school in 02. At that time, however, I had no aims; I did not know what I want to become in future. So I started "building up" my aims, my goals, what I want my life to be in future. I started to find myself, figured out which work I like doing the most. I had science subjects in my O and A levels and I liked doing Physics and Maths. This is the reason I took Further Maths in my A level. With these subjects I could pursue engineering as a career and I opted for electrical engineering because it is mostly Physics and Maths and also the fact that I wanted to choose a career which is well known in the world and ranks at top position. Electrical engineering fitted in all of my requirements and so I chose it as my future field. I want to choose a career in which in which I can excel the most. Electrical engineering is one the top engineering currently and so I chose this field because I want to secure my future, I do not want to dependant on anyone, not even to my father or to his business. I want to do something unique, extraordinary in my life, in the career I have chosen, I want to start a business in future related to telecommunication and expand it all over the world. I want to make my career different from others, better from others. My aim in life is to excel in my field and let no one cross me. I want to make a name which the world can remember for a long time. I did my O levels and got 3A*4A and 2B. I also appeared for AS level and got 2A and 1B. I also gave IELTS and got 6.5 band. Apart from my studies, I also did some extra-curricular activities in my school; I was part of the organizing committee for the school bake sale. I was also the part of the organizing committee for raising about RP 44000 in school for charity. I was also the vice house captain of yellow house and played several games. I played football and basketball matches but the game which I loved to play is cricket. I was the school cricket team captain. I lead my team in several inter-house cricket competitions. I also joined a cricket club named Cricket training programme and played for them. Apart from school life, I also did some internships. I took part in community service; I worked in Shaukat Khanam Hospital and Bait ul Afiah trust. I had witnessed my grandfather die of gangrene and I knew how painful it was. My grandfather could not walk, all he did was to lie on his bed the whole day and the whole night. I wanted to help the old people, make their life as much better as I could because I knew what difficulties old people face. So I did an internship in the NGO "Bait ul Afiah trust." Last but not least, I worked in my father's construction company to see whether I would even like doing this work or not for the rest of my life. I figured out that the working conditions were very harsh, you had to stay under the sun for long hours, constantly walk here and there despite how hot or cold the weather is. So I did not opt for this field. The reason I have chosen UK for my higher education is because UK has been the epitome of Higher education for decades. Universities and institutions in UK provide local and international students with quality education and exposure to the practical world which is unparallel across the world. Above all, this also entitles students with a world class degree which is accepted and reputed across the world.
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1.i have bear own cost I want 30 days vacation
 
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Hi everybody Please help to check grammar: Many Thanks! “It is great to hear that there is a space for him in October. Definitely, I'll give you a call and talk to you directly about the details on Oct xx. But before that, I would like to ask two more questions here. First, may I come around at school some time that is convenience for you next week to have a tour to see about the school environment, for instance the place where the school prepare foods for the kids, and the place school provide them to take naps, etc. Second, just in case if my son after changing to the full day classes, and he is really refuse to and feel discomfortable to fit in that long time schooling, may he shift back to his half-day classes?”
 
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Hi everybody, My son now is attending the half day nursery class. I want to ask the school about my son's application for the full day schooling. How to say it naturally and correctly in English? Pls check my sentences below. Thank you in advance! “Dear principal, I have applied for changing to full day class for my son a month a ago. I would like to know how is the application going now? Is there have any possbility to have the space for my son to get in the class in the forthcoming month? I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you.”
 
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Note: Please help me with this letter and check if my grammar is correct. Thank you. Dear Ma’am: I am writing this letter to request for your consideration to allow my daughter to re-take the portion of her quiz on Reading last Wednesday, September 25, 2013. I believe that the reason why she missed to complete her answer was due to headache and colds that affects her concentration. I have never done this request before but because I know that my daughter deserves a chance to prove that she really knows the answer, I am asking you to please give her another chance. Thank you and I am hoping for your utmost consideration on my request.
 
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