ratna  +  50171 Wed, 13 Oct 04 04:26 AM Could you please write a formal letter for me -thanks for accepting one of the faculty in the forum(named Nor Ratna Masrom) - Nor Ratna brought the bank draft (usd 100) as needed in the broucher and email gave to her. - unfortunely the accountant didn't accept the bank draft and she needed her to pay by transferred payment in the account -she brought back the bank draft and we need a formal letter with their letter head saying that the payment should be in transferred money through bank account. -we also have to bare the lost due to currency exchanged and the fees. -we already email few times to person in-charged but no reply -we already called few times with the phone number in the email and web site but the number is not service anymore. -we need it as soon as possible ratna Joined on Wed, Oct 13 2004 New Member 02 Formal Letter, Formal Letters

	anon1  +  50190 Wed, 13 Oct 04 06:45 AM ratna, Please Post:46521. We don't provide letter writing services. We do, however, assist with structure and grammar. Soif you are willing to write a draft letter, we can help you improve it. Thank you. MountainHiker anon1 Joined on Fri, Jul 2 2004 Senior Member 2,049 Grammar, Letter Writing

	ratna  +  50197 Wed, 13 Oct 04 07:21 AM Director ### ### Dear Sir, REGISTRATION PAYMENT We want to thank you for accepting one of our faculty members to attend the Forum ## on September 2004. 2. As you mention in the email and brochure, we issued a USD100 bank draft as a registration payment. Unfortunately, your accountant did not accept it and asked us to transfer money through the account. 3. To fulfill the request, we need a formal letter from you saying that we need to transfer money to the account number to the person named ##. 4. This is because the bank draft was already issued and we have to pay for the lost due to currency exchanged and the account number is a personnel account. 5. We already email few times to the person-in-charged and made few calls with the number given. Again there was no replied and the number is out of coverage. 6. Hope, you will email to ratna@###.com and c.c to azizd@###.com or send / fax letter to the above address as soon as possible. Thank you. ratna Formal Letters, Writing, Letters, Formal, Numbers

	anon1  +  50198 Wed, 13 Oct 04 07:30 AM Hi, It looks good to me with a few comments. 1) You are missing number 1. You have numbers 2 through 6. 2) Dear Sir should be followed by a colon. Dear Sir: 3) Make sure you provide your fax number. Having a letter with six points is a bit unsual. But that is okay. Given that you are dealing with money and confusion, sometimes having explicit clarity is a good thing. Good luck. MountainHiker anon1 Colons

	nona the brit  +  52045 Tue, 26 Oct 04 12:55 AM I would save your questions for the interview. nona the brit Joined on Wed, Sep 22 2004 England Veteran Member 11,713 The name says it all.