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Delmobile  #527930  Mon, 16 Jun 08 05:24 AM
I mean starting out an essay in one tense and switching to another, sometimes in the same paragraph. It's fine in a colorful story about tossing your grandma's cornstarch in a dumpster, but not in a formal analysis of, oh, Russian propaganda techniques during the second World War. 
  
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New2grammar  #527931  Mon, 16 Jun 08 05:26 AM
OK. Thanks, Delmobile.
  
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Avangi  #527932  Mon, 16 Jun 08 05:32 AM
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By the way, Is your last post for me? "be sure to shred the paperwork"
Actually, that one was for GG.  In LA, illegal dumping is a huge problem, since it's very expensive to dispose of stuff.  If you have junk to get rid of which won't fit in the residential containers the city provides  -   or qualify for "large item pickup"   -   you can spend $200 to have it hauled privately.  So people often leave it on a quiet stretch of road, or do what GG did.  Businesses often keep their rented bins locked.  The police have been known to go through illegally dumped trash to find incriminating evidence (to identify the owner.)

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New2grammar  #527936  Mon, 16 Jun 08 05:46 AM
Thanks for the sharing, Avangi. That's interesting.
  
Grammar Geek  #528115  Mon, 16 Jun 08 01:46 PM

I'm not too worried about the owneres of the Piggly Wiggly in Marked Tree, Arkansas, coming after me 15 years after the deed was done.

(All you have to do is say "Piggly Wiggly" to my sister and she starts laughing to this day, though.)

  
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Avangi  #528199  Mon, 16 Jun 08 04:20 PM
I was kidding.
  
Grammar Geek  #528325  Mon, 16 Jun 08 09:08 PM

I 'spected as much.

  
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