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ninaross  +  638987 Sun, 11 Jan 09 06:47 PM
Hello everyone, my name is Nina Ross and I am a recording artist.
I have completed a sponsorship letter but I  need someone to look over it for any errors. If someone could help me, I would be eternally grateful.....
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Clive  +  639010 Sun, 11 Jan 09 07:17 PM
Hi,
OK, post it here and we'll be happy to comment.

Clive
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ninaross  +  639024 Sun, 11 Jan 09 07:23 PM
January 8, 2009

Re: Sponsorship request

To Whom It May Concern:
 

Happy New Year from Talley Upp Records! We are an independent record label and home to Nashville based Hip-Hop artist Nina Ross. Nina has dedicated herself to become a top rated Hip-Hop artist in the South region. And being an independent artist in today's current financial state can be overwhelming. 
 
 Our purpose is to obtain sponsorship in order to continue promotion and cover expenses such as studio time, cds, posters, etc.
 
 Among the growing lists of achievements, Nina has been nominated for Female Mixtape Artist of the year for the 6th Annual Southern Entertainment Awards (March 19-22, 2009). In order to both promote and prepare for the awards show, we are in need of both monetary and in-kind sponsorship.
 
Nina Ross has dedicated herself to being one of the top-rated Hip-Hop female artist in the south region. With songs already in heavy rotation on internet radio across the country, the support you provide would be invested wisely.

 
 Our goal is to raise money along with an opportunity to enable your company to develop a relationship with independent music artist who are interested in your products and/or services.
 
Our sponsorship package includes the following:
 
Platinum Sponsor: $250
 
Gold Sponsor: $100
 
Silver Sponsor: $50
 
Bronze Sponsor: $25
 
 
Thank you for taking this time to review our sponsorship package. Please contact William Ransom at 615-874-0404 or Tony Bailey, 615-480-6944 if you have any questions or if you are interested in becoming a sponsor
 
Respectfully yours.

Clive  +  639029 Sun, 11 Jan 09 07:37 PM
Hi,
Don't forget to add your address.

I think you need to add a lot more information on what benefits the sponsors will receive.
 
Good luck, Clive

January 8, 2009

Re: Sponsorship request

To Whom It May Concern: No, make it personal. Try hard to get a name. If you can't, say 'Dear Sir or Madam'.
 

Happy New Year from Talley Upp Records! We are an independent record label and home to Nashville-based Hip-Hop artist Nina Ross. Nina has dedicated herself to becoming a top rated Hip-Hop artist in the South region. And being an independent artist in today's current financial situation can be overwhelming. 
 
 Our purpose is to obtain sponsorship in order to continue promotion and cover expenses such as studio time, cds, posters,etc.
 
 Amongher growing lists of achievements, Nina has been nominated for Female Mixtape Artist of the year for the 6th Annual Southern Entertainment Awards (March 19-22, 2009). In order to both promote and prepare for the awards show, we are in need of both monetary and in-kind sponsorship.
 
Nina Ross has dedicated herself to being one of the top-rated Hip-Hop female artist in the south region.<<<< You already said this. With her songs already in heavy rotation on internet radio across the country, the support you provide would be invested wisely.

 
 Our goal is to raise money and to offer an opportunity to enable your company to develop a relationship with independent music artists who are interested in your products and/or services.
 
Our sponsorship packages includes the following levels:
 
Platinum Sponsor: $250
 
Gold Sponsor: $100
 
Silver Sponsor: $50
 
Bronze Sponsor: $25
 
 
Thank you for taking this time to review our sponsorship package. Please contact William Ransom at 615-874-0404 or Tony Bailey, 615-480-6944 if you have any questions or if you are interested in becoming a sponsor
 
Respectfully yours.

ninaross, 301 days ago
ok, thanks, I'll work on it and get back to you shortly if thats ok
ninaross  +  639082 Sun, 11 Jan 09 08:19 PM
Re: Sponsorship request
Dear Sir or Madam.
 
Happy New Year from Talley Upp Records! We are an independent record label and home to Nashville-based Hip-Hop artist Nina Ross. Nina has dedicated herself to become a top rated Hip-Hop artist in the South region. And being an independent artist in today's current financial crisis can be overwhelming. 
 
 Our purpose is to obtain sponsorship in order to continue promotion and cover expenses such as studio time, cds, posters.
 
 Among her growing lists of achievements, Nina has been nominated for Female Mixtape Artist of the year for the 6th Annual Southern Entertainment Awards (March 19-22, 2009). In order to both promote and prepare for the awards show, we are in need of both monetary and in-kind sponsorship.
 
With songs already in heavy rotation on internet radio across the country, the support you provide would be invested wisely.
 
 Our goal is to raise money and offer an opportunity to enable your company to develop a relationship with independent music artists who are interested in your products and/or services.
 
Talley Upp Records sponsorship is mutually beneficial. Here are a few reasons why you should consider sponsoring Talley Upp Records.
• Association of your company name, products and services.
• Promotion and product sampling on site.
     • Post-event acknowledgement . 

.

Our sponsorship package includes the following:
 
Platinum Sponsor: $250
 
Gold Sponsor: $100
 
Silver Sponsor: $50
 
Bronze Sponsor: $25
 
 
We offer several levels of sponsorship but no gift is too small! If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact us via e-mail at (Email removed) or by phone at 615-874-0404. Thank you for your time and we hope to hear from you soon!
 
Respectfully yours.
==

ninaross  +  639083 Sun, 11 Jan 09 08:20 PM
Re: Sponsorship request
Dear Sir or Madam.
 
Happy New Year from Talley Upp Records! We are an independent record label and home to Nashville-based Hip-Hop artist Nina Ross. Nina has dedicated herself to become a top rated Hip-Hop artist in the South region. And being an independent artist in today's current financial crisis can be overwhelming. 
 
 Our purpose is to obtain sponsorship in order to continue promotion and cover expenses such as studio time, cds, posters.
 
 Among her growing lists of achievements, Nina has been nominated for Female Mixtape Artist of the year for the 6th Annual Southern Entertainment Awards (March 19-22, 2009). In order to both promote and prepare for the awards show, we are in need of both monetary and in-kind sponsorship.
 
With songs already in heavy rotation on internet radio across the country, the support you provide would be invested wisely.
 
 Our goal is to raise money and offer an opportunity to enable your company to develop a relationship with independent music artists who are interested in your products and/or services.
 
Talley Upp Records sponsorship is mutually beneficial. Here are a few reasons why you should consider sponsoring Talley Upp Records.
• Association of your company name, products and services.
• Promotion and product sampling on site. 
• Post-event acknowledgement . 

Our sponsorship package includes the following:
 
Platinum Sponsor: $250
 
Gold Sponsor: $100
 
Silver Sponsor: $50
 
Bronze Sponsor: $25
 
 
We offer several levels of sponsorship but no gift is too small! If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact us via e-mail at (Email removed) or by phone at 615-874-0404. Thank you for your time and we hope to hear from you soon!
 
Respectfully yours.
==

Clive  +  639087 Sun, 11 Jan 09 08:26 PM
Hi,
It's better.

Our goal is to raise money and offer an opportunity to enable your company to develop a relationship with independent music artists who are interested in your products and/or services.
 
Talley Upp Records sponsorship is mutually beneficial. Here are a few reasons why you should consider sponsoring Talley Upp Records.
• Association of your company name, products and services.
• Promotion and product sampling on site. 
• Post-event acknowledgement .
 

To this part, perhaps you could add a sentence or two to say that you'd be happy to meet with any prospective sponsors to discuss in more detail how these things could be done.

Clive
ninaross, 301 days ago
I'll do that, thanks for your insight.
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