Hi Forevershi,
Thank you for your comment.
Forevershi wrote: |
| hi,thanks very much.i have payed a visit this site at once after your message.it's a good site to learn english. |
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I would have written:
Hi, thanks very much. I paid a visit to your site immediately after I read your message. I think it is a good site to learn English.
Note the 'capital' letter 'H' at the beginning of the first sentence. The personal pronoun 'I' is always written as a capital. Also, note that 'English' is a proper noun and is spelt with a capital 'E".
If you liked my corrections, I am happy to do it for others. Let me know.