 Quangtrungvtv wrote: |
| Day by day, I learn english very hard , I find every method and everyone could help me learn . I go to night class everyday expect sunday evening . I joint English forum and find many friend help me . I always try my best to learn english but I had some difficult are : the fisrt conditional, second conditional, third conditional, and passive form , If some in English forum explane those , I am very thanks. And remember check all sentences I wrote here. Thanks my friends. |
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Hi Quangtrungvtv,
Here is what I see and my comment:
Some phrases you used either don’t serve the purpose you have intended, or they are not properly used. There are obvious capitalization, punctuations and spelling errors. Here is how I would rewrite the paragraph to smooth out the tone and the rough edges:
Everyday, I try to learn and study English very hard. I have tried every method and people are very kind in helping me to learn. I attend night class every evening except Sunday. I frequently visit English forums and find many volunteers to help me. I am eager to learn but I have many difficulties to overcome. For examples, conditional usage and passive usage are some of the areas I need help on.
I am very thankful if anyone at the forum can explain the differences and please correct my sentences.
Thank you, my friends .