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Mister Micawber  +  698332 Fri, 17 Apr 09 03:21 AM
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I can't think of any; it is a standard phrase.  Business English is particularly full of set phrases; if you try to replace them, the effect is often odd and unbusinesslike.

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Mr. Tom  +  699191 Sun, 19 Apr 09 09:16 PM
One more question, MM.

 

How do you find "subsequent to your email regarding the AC repair...", ?

 

Do you find the structure non-native or unnatural?

 

Thanks in advance,

 

Tom

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Mister Micawber  +  699230 Sun, 19 Apr 09 11:32 PM
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I find it a little uncommon.  It is just a long-winded way of saying 'after your email'.  There is no causal relationship between the receipt of the email and any subsequent action.

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Mr. Tom  +  699350 Mon, 20 Apr 09 07:58 AM
I'm grateful, MM (...and also a bit hesitant!)


In fact, in my last post, I meant to  write "Further to" and ended up writing "subsequent to"-- I'd already asked a question about it. So my LAST question is: do you find the following sentence correct and natural-- especially the use of further to?


 Further to my email regarding the AC repair, please be informed that all repair work will commence on July 15. ”
 


Tom


PS: We sometimes start emails with "Dear all"--is it OK?


 

Mr. Tom  +  699351 Mon, 20 Apr 09 08:02 AM
I really don't know how my sentence has been crossed out--and how I can edit it! I didn't do it on purspose; could you please edit it?

 

Tom

Mister Micawber  +  699355 Mon, 20 Apr 09 08:10 AM
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Your sentence was struck out because you did not leave a space either before or after your double-dashes.  You must leave at least one space.


Further to = to add more information/discussion to our earlier conversation, or to follow up on it ('following' in the sense of addition)

Pursuant to = acting upon ('following' in the sense of result)


'Dear all' is rather casual, but there seems to be no good, friendly alternative for office memos.

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