FULL OF SWEETNESS

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Stevenukd  #329371  Wed, 14 Feb 07 07:01 PM

Dear Teachers,

- People are born not to disappear like a anonymous sand. They are born to print on the land, and print in another person's heart. You might be hurt when you love someone passionately, but that's the only method which makes you complete. Don't hide your love and your meekness until you pass away. Always make your life filled with full of sweetness.

- Is this natural?

Thanks very much to Teachers,

 Stevenukd.

  
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Tidus  #329383  Wed, 14 Feb 07 07:33 PM

"full of sweetness" is just an expression that means full of pleasant things, or full of happiness.

"Always make your life filled with full of sweetness." doesn't make sense though.  "Always make your life full of sweetness" or "Always fill your life with sweetness" would be ok.

  
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Grammar Geek  #329479  Thu, 15 Feb 07 01:42 AM

How about "like lines drawn in the sand" rather than "anonymous sand"?

(After you die, it's not like you'll be showing off your love then, is it? Perhaps you can just end the sentence after meekness.)

  
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