Garmmar Fix & English Sentences

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vincent tee

#529216 Wed, 18 Jun 08 05:04 PM

Hi English Gurus, would appreciate if someone could lend a hand on checking my grammar mistakes and fix my English sentences for the letter below. Thanks

Dear Gary,

Sorry, I have forgotten to put down my personal email for your reference before I left the office. This will be the email that I frequently update: vincent@yahoo.com.sg. You can drop me an email at anytime.

A friendly note to inform that that I am no longer attached with my previous company after this contract has ended due to certain reasons; and currently I am waiting for your respond for making a come back to join my lovely team.

If you lend a hand in negotiation my charges to be pushed up to RM 500 per day, in this case I will assure you to further pursue my BW Certification at my own expense without the need of BAT subsidizing. By doing so, it will bring further benefits of having a strong technical person in your support team to serve the team for betterment and also for the organization.

To accelerate the process, I will proceed to the registration center tomorrow for my company’s registration & will pass to directly Gaya once your side has been settled.

I understand it will take for a while for BAT to process in order to settle my agreement. For all that said, I really want to thank you again for your time & your helping hand. I do appreciate it and I am looking forward to hearing from your good news!

Regards,
Vincent

vincent tee