General doubt (difficult to specify)

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Sextus  #156465  Tue, 08 Nov 05 04:53 PM

"The Pyrrhonist does not assert that each of the issues about which he suspends judgment is in itself undecidable, but, on the contrary, he continues to investigate the questions for which he has not as yet found any answer."

If I want to take "on the contrary" out, can I say this?:

"The Pyrrhonist does not assert that each of the issues about which he suspends judgment is in itself undecidable, but continues to investigate the questions for which he has not as yet found any answer."

I think that this expresses the same idea.

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Philip  #156503  Tue, 08 Nov 05 06:24 PM
 Sextus wrote:

"The Pyrrhonist does not assert that each of the issues about which he suspends judgment is in itself undecidable, but, on the contrary, he continues to investigate the questions for which he has not as yet found any answer."

If I want to take "on the contrary" out, can I say this?:

"The Pyrrhonist does not assert that each of the issues about which he suspends judgment is in itself undecidable, but continues to investigate the questions for which he has not as yet found any answer."

I think that this expresses the same idea.

Thanks

Sextus

I understand why you don't like 'on the contrary'.  Still, I feel something inserted would be better.  How about 'but rather continues....'?
  
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Sextus  #156525  Tue, 08 Nov 05 07:28 PM

Yeah, it sounds better now. Thanks,

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davkett  #156526  Tue, 08 Nov 05 07:35 PM
I don't really see the appropriateness of 'but'.  I think I'd write,

"The Pyrrhonist does not assert that each of the issues about which he suspends judgment is in itself undecidable; he rather continues to investigate the questions for which he has not as yet found any answer."

Still, lacking immediate context, it's a bit tentative as a suggestion.

 

  
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Sextus  #156528  Tue, 08 Nov 05 07:42 PM

Taking your suggestion into account, perhaps:

"The Pyrrhonist does not assert that each of the issues about which he suspends judgment is in itself undecidable; rather, he continues to investigate the questions for which he has not as yet found any answer."

It's just a suggestion. What do you think? The sense of this sentence is that if the P. believed that the disagreements are in themselves undecidable, they would think that it is pointless to continue his investigation. But he does not believe that, so he may keep on investigating.

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davkett  #156561  Tue, 08 Nov 05 08:49 PM

I like it.

 

  
Sextus  #156570  Tue, 08 Nov 05 09:10 PM

Cool, thanks.

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