gladiator

   Share on Facebook  
BW2/3  #239203  Fri, 23 Jun 06 05:33 AM

The new gladiator would be a fool if he thought he followed the moral code where his world respected.

He demoralized himself by stealing and killing the others in order to survive.

Are they OK?

Thank you

  
Top 75 Contributor
Joined on Sat, Oct 22 2005
Contributing Member (1,283)
Carpe diem!!
Clive  #239225  Fri, 23 Jun 06 06:49 AM

Hi,

The new gladiator would be a fool if he thought he followed the moral code where his world respected.

Are you talking about now, or the past? The new gladiator would be a fool if he thought he was following the moral code which his world respects.

He demoralized himself by stealing and killing the others in order to survive.

It's grammatical. But do you mean specific others, or unspecific others? 'Demoralize' seems an incongruous and weak word to apply to the feelings of someone who kills people.

Best wishes, Clive

  
Top 10 Contributor
Joined on Thu, Oct 28 2004
Canada
Veteran Member (21,169)
ModeratorTeachers
El tango argentino es un pensamiento triste que se puede bailar (The tango argentino is a sad thought which can be danced) Enrique Santos Discépolo
BW2/3  #239421  Fri, 23 Jun 06 09:37 PM

Thank you Clive,

Why the verb " respects " is present tense?

Would you tell me what you said " but do you mean specific others, or unspecific others?"

  
Clive  #239429  Fri, 23 Jun 06 10:29 PM

Hi,

Why the verb " respects " is present tense? Tell me first, please, if your original sentence was talking about present-day gladiators or gladiators in the past, eg 2000 years ago. ie do you want a present tense sentence, or a past tense sentence?

Would you tell me what you said " but do you mean specific others, or unspecific others?" When you talk about him 'killing the others', do you mean specific others, eg the three people over there in the corner, or just 'others' in an unspecific (ie general) sense?

Best wishes, Clive

  
BW2/3  #239489  Sat, 24 Jun 06 02:02 AM

Thank you Clive,

I mean it is in the past.

Can I say?

The new gladiator would have been a fool if he had thought he was following the moral code where his world respected.

I mean " the three people over there in the corner".

 

 

  
Marius Hancu  #239520  Sat, 24 Jun 06 03:57 AM
where doen't fit here, and Clive has told you that already.

if he had thought he was following
may be replaced by
had he thought
he was following
  
Top 10 Contributor
Joined on Wed, Apr 26 2006
Montreal, Canada
Veteran Member (11,673)
Proficient Speaker
Clive  #239526  Sat, 24 Jun 06 04:25 AM

Hi,

I mean it is in the past.

Can I say? The new gladiator would have been a fool if he had thought he was following the moral code where his world respected.

This is fine: The new gladiator would have been a fool if he had thought he was following the moral code which his world respected.

'Where' doesn't work here. Don't worry, I don't mind telling you again, it's no trouble for me. The main thing is that you need to understand.

The simple past would often be used here instead of the past perfect. 

I mean " the three people over there in the corner". Then you can be specific, say 'killing the others'.

Best wishes yet again, Clive

  
AddThis Feed Button RSS Feed: ESL General English Grammar Questions
© 2008 MediaCET Ltd.
Terms and Conditions & Terms of Service