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New2grammar  #538754  Wed, 09 Jul 08 02:43 PM
We must not focus on achieving the final goal in one big step. Instead, we should strive to achieve smaller goals leading to the end goal.

Is the above understandable?
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Avangi  #538772  Wed, 09 Jul 08 04:05 PM
It's clearly understandable, but lacks elegance.
  
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New2grammar  #538776  Wed, 09 Jul 08 04:12 PM
Any suggestions for improvements?
  
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