Spring  +  171931 Mon, 19 Dec 05 07:38 PM Could you please check if my sentences are grammatically correct and if I used appropriate vocabulary? Your letter woke up numerous memories of the two of us working together. For many hours after reading your letter, a myriad of happy, fun times danced in front of my eyes. Being in this imaginary cinema, helped me forget my present plight. Thank you very much! Hope Spring Joined on Sun, Nov 21 2004 Junior Member 84 Vocabulary

	Danyoo  +  171935 Mon, 19 Dec 05 08:02 PM  Spring wrote: Could you please check if my sentences are grammatically correct and if I used appropriate vocabulary? Your letter woke up numerous memories of the two of us working together. For many hours after reading your letter, a myriad of happy, fun times danced in front of my eyes. Being in this imaginary cinema, helped me forget my present plight. Thank you very much! Hope Hope, actually your letter sounds very good!  Two minor things: 1. Replace 'woke up' with 'brought back.' 2. Delete the comma at '...cinema, helped...' Danyoo Joined on Fri, Nov 11 2005 Chicago, USA Regular Member 558 To err is human, to forgive divine. 잘못을 저지르는 것은 인간이지만 용서할수있는 것은 하늘과 같은것. Vocabulary, Commas