Hi,
Can someone critique the following phrase with respect to the use of "out when," which strikes me a improper: "that people seek out when they need..." It that an adjective and an adverb, or two adverbs in a row, and in either case, proper or improper use of the language?
It's fine. Think of 'seek out' as a two -word (phrasal) verb.
ie parse the sentence as "(that people seek out) (when they need...)"
Best wishes, Clive