Could someone please tell me if there are any grammar mistakes in the answer below. I have put parentheses where I doubt.What other sounds alone can be heard where the poet is standing?
Besides the sound of shaking of the harness bells, the sounds “of easy wind and downy flake” (alone can be heard) where the poet is standing.
Apart from the sound of shaking of the harness bells , the sounds of easy wind and downy flake which are only possible to be heard alone, can be heard where the poet is standing.
If you write in this form you will avoid using paranthesis.
But are there any grammar mistakes in my answer?
Besides the sound of shaking of the harness bells, the sounds “of easy wind and downy flake” alone can be heard where the poet is standing.
I am confused with the insertion of "alone". Is it OK.
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