Hello Teachers, could someone please kindly ammend my grammar and restructure those words which I've wrongly applied. Thanks.
Hi Hansi,
The attached is my updated resume.
The reason why this letter was written is because I wish that you could kindly give me a helping hand to bring forth the interview between both of us to have further knowing about my skills set and knowing who I am in person.
I’m currently working at Intel Cyberjaya and since Intel is a good firm to work for and hold good reputation of an employee, I would like you to know why I’m changing my present job. The circumstances I’m facing:
Firstly, I’m a contractor at Intel and will be having a slim chance to be converted to a permanent position as Intel head count had freeze. Meaning there is a possibility they might not be hiring anymore permanent employees. Therefore it is utterly insecure for my forthcoming future as my contract period is approaching to an end. Secondly, I would like to turn my dream into a reality because Singapore is the place where I wanted to live & work since young. I hope you will help me on this opportunity.
The current [People Development & Training] team that I’m in, it consists of Project Manager, Instructional Designers and the Developers. – I might be a little short of ISD’s skills set as development is my present position; however certainly no doubt that it could be mastered instantly as I’m playing part of the Instructional Designer role at Intel , assisting the IDs and am working closely with them.
I’ve the enthusiasm & passion for success – also I believe am able to handle the job as per your requirements and lead your company to success. Personally, I'm a self-motivated individual and constantly boost up my esteem/value by reading self help books from inspiring motivational gurus, for example: Anthony Robbins, Dale Carnegie, Stephen Convey, etc.
If you could make the interview happen, I would like you to view some of the examples of e-learning & training materials that I’ve developed. Salary is totally negotiable. Please consider my opportunity to work with you.
Thank You