Hi ,
Can anybody check my grammar in the following paragraph. Thanks

The similarities ties between both Chinese and Japanese Americans is that level of assimilation which is equal to both groups. Intermarriage is most obvious in both of these groups. Because of this intermarriage these groups has more assimilated into the American society. Facts show that these increased intermarriage system leads to weaken the native cultural patterns of these groups. However, Chinese Americans have maintained their ethnic values than Japanese, China towns is an examples of newcomers and enclaves as low wage salaries. The Buddhism is common religion for both groups. Like all minorities these groups also have faced several prejudices and discrimination. Whirs as in education, Japanese Americans experienced higher levels of educational achievements. The difference between both of these groups was; Japanese Americans have experienced discrimination during World War II, but have managed to maintain a level of economic success. Chinese Americans, who have adapted to their new country by establishing China towns that continue to give their community more strength and weaknesses, other difference is that Chinese has less assimilated than Japanese Americans.

Thanks
Lata

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The similarities between Chinese and Japanese Americans is that the level of assimilation is equal to both groups. Intermarriage is most obvious in both of these groups. Because of intermarriage these groups have assimilated well into the American society. Facts show that these increased intermarriage system leads to weakening the native cultural patterns of these groups. However, Chinese Americans have maintained their ethnic values than Japanese. town is an example of newcomers and enclaves a low wage salaries. Buddhism is a common religion for both the groups. Like all minorities these groups have faced several prejudices and discrimination. However in education, Japanese Americans experience higher educational achievements. The difference between these groups was; Japanese Americans had experienced discrimination during World War II, but had managed to maintain a level of economic success. Chinese Americans, who have adapted to their new country by establishing towns continue to give their community more strength and weakness. The other difference is that the Chinese are less assimilated than Japanese Americans.

I tried my best. You need to watch out for the tense. Please read and check if it still gives the same meaning as I deleted some of the words.
Late: You need to work some more on the logical content. First you say that Chinese and Japanese have the same level of assimilation. Then at the end you say the oppositie - that Chinese are less well assimilated than Japanese.
latam

The similarityies ties between both Chinese and Japanese Americans is that the degree level of assimilation which is equal in to both groups. Intermarriage is most prevalent obvious in both of these groups. Because of this intermarriage, these groups have has more assimilated more (easily?) into the American society than people of other nationalities.. Facts show that these increased intermarriage system leads to weakening their native cultural patterns of these groups. However, Chinese Americans have maintained their ethnic values more than Japanese Americans , Newcomers who typically earn lower wages live in enclaves called "China towns." is an examples of newcomers and enclaves as low wage salaries. The Buddhism is a common religion for both groups. Like all minorities, these groups also have faced several prejudices and discrimination. Whirs(?) as in education, Japanese Americans experienced higher levels of educational achievements. The difference between both of these groups was that; Japanese Americans have experienced discrimination during World War II,. In spite of this, they but have managed to maintain a level of economic success.
Chinese Americans, who have adapted to their new country by establishing China towns that continue to give their community more strength and weaknesses, other difference is that Chinese has less assimilated than Japanese Americans. (Please re-write this last sentence, There is no verb in the main clause.)
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Hi
Thanks for correcting my errors. I can understand, read English quite well, but when it comes to writing I am facing some serious challenges. Can you please suggest me where should I improve my grammar.

Thanks
Lata
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