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The similarities ties between both Chinese and Japanese Americans is that level of assimilation which is equal to both groups. Intermarriage is most obvious in both of these groups. Because of this intermarriage these groups has more assimilated into the American society. Facts show that these increased intermarriage system leads to weaken the native cultural patterns of these groups. However, Chinese Americans have maintained their ethnic values than Japanese, China towns is an examples of newcomers and enclaves as low wage salaries. The Buddhism is common religion for both groups. Like all minorities these groups also have faced several prejudices and discrimination. Whirs as in education, Japanese Americans experienced higher levels of educational achievements. The difference between both of these groups was; Japanese Americans have experienced discrimination during World War II, but have managed to maintain a level of economic success. Chinese Americans, who have adapted to their new country by establishing China towns that continue to give their community more strength and weaknesses, other difference is that Chinese has less assimilated than Japanese Americans.
Anonymous:The similarities between Chinese and Japanese Americans is that the level of assimilation is equal to both groups. Intermarriage is most obvious in both of these groups. Because of intermarriage these groups have assimilated well into the American society. Facts show that these increased intermarriage system leads to weakening the native cultural patterns of these groups. However, Chinese Americans have maintained their ethnic values than Japanese.
I tried my best. You need to watch out for the tense. Please read and check if it still gives the same meaning as I deleted some of the words.
Thanks for correcting my errors. I can understand, read English quite well, but when it comes to writing I am facing some serious challenges. Can you please suggest me where should I improve my grammar.
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