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Hungry

#417496 Wed, 12 Sep 07 10:12 AM

Dear Teachers,

Please have a look at the following short letter and make sure the words sound professional and sentence structure, flow, punctuation, mood, and
tense are presented in a manner that makes sense, while looking out for
inconsistencies.
So many thanks in advance.

Best regards,
Hungry

Dear Calvin,

Please handle these waiver cases, as they have been quite old now. I have talked to Mr. Thomson about this. He has said these are not my cases, and will be handled by you.

Thank you

Hungry

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Wanwo

#417553 Wed, 12 Sep 07 01:50 PM

Hungry wrote:
Dear Teachers, 
Please have a look at the following short letter and make sure the words sound professional and sentence structure, flow, punctuation, mood, and
tense are presented in a manner that makes sense, while looking out for
inconsistencies.
So many thanks in advance.

Best regards,
Hungry

Corrected:

Dear Calvin,

Please handle these waiver cases, as they are quite old now. I have talked to Mr. Thomson about this. He has said that these are not my cases, and are to be handled by you.

Thank you