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knjiga  +  687504 Tue, 17 Mar 09 12:26 AM
Could you please check the following sentences for grammar mistakes? Did I use articles correctly? Was my choice of words appropriate?

From the outset of our project on transportation it was obvious that new, revolutionary currents of thought were emerging. Indefatigably, some of  us inquired about why we have to do Phase I, why we don’t start researching the topic of our interest right after brainstorming ideas.  Above mentioned and many more quires sent ripples through our learning community, sparking long, impassioned discussions. Doubtless, the value of Phase I was being examined and assessed.

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Knjiga

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MrPedantic  +  689276 Sat, 21 Mar 09 11:02 AM
Hello Knjiga,

You might want to look again at the parts I've emboldened:

knjiga

From the outset of our project on transportation it was obvious that new, revolutionary currents of thought were emerging. Indefatigably, some of  us inquired about why we have to do Phase I, why we don’t start researching the topic of our interest right after brainstorming ideas.  Above mentioned and many more quires sent ripples through our learning community, sparking long, impassioned discussions. Doubtless, the value of Phase I was being examined and assessed.


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MrP
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