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Nancy19820  #316057  Tue, 16 Jan 07 08:18 PM

First day of my speech class is started at 5:30p.m. and the remaining class schedule are started at 6:00p.m. I wanted to let you know that I’ll have to leave at 4:00 today and I’ll leave here at 4:30 p.m. for the remaining of class schedule.

  
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Nancy19820  #316180  Wed, 17 Jan 07 03:19 AM
Please help me.
  
Clive  #317071  Fri, 19 Jan 07 03:16 AM

Hi Nancy,

On the first day, my speech class starts at 5:30p.m., and the remaining classes start at 6:00p.m. I wanted to let you know that I’ll have to leave at 4:00 today and at 4:30 p.m. for the remainder of the class schedule.

Best wishes, Clive

  
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