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Guru Please, help me to make the sentence very effectively.
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G.gajendran  #341996  Thu, 22 Mar 07 10:05 AM

Dear Ms.***

 

I hope you will send my Police Clarence certificate. (What I submitted yesterday 21st March-07 to Ms. ***) to J. Mitter (Assistant Manager)

 

 
  
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Lil' Ruby Rose  #341998  Thu, 22 Mar 07 10:09 AM

Dear Ms ***

I submitted information regarding Police Clearance yesterday, 21st March, to Ms ***.  Please would you send my Police Clearance certificate to JM, Assistant Manager.

Thank you for your assistance.

Yours sincerely,
  
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