Hello Uuzou, and welcome to the fourms. I've written some corrections. It's a good first effort! And I can easily understand most of what you write.
hellow,everyone,i'm new comer. Hello everyone, I'm a newcomer.
i'm from china,a small town. I'm from a small town in China.
my english is very very very bad! My English is very, very bad. (No, it's not - but even if it were, only use two "verys.")
i found this forums when i surf in internet yesterday,my feeling is really good I found this forum when I was surfing the Internet yesterday. ? It gave me a good feeling
so i risk many many dangerous to post this message. So I risk many dangers to post this message.
i want to impove my english,yet.ok.now.i think the above sentence may be have much garmmar mistake. I want to improve my English. Now I think the sentences above may have many grammar mistakes. (You "many" when you can count something - like mistakes.)
oh my god,thought 10 minute’hard work,finally Oh my God! (I'm not sure what you are saying here - something about 10 minutes of hard work.)
Keep coming to the forums and ask questions about English. Good job!