P3t3r1 wrote:

Hello, I am wondering if I could get another quick grammar editing with this short little paragraph. Thanks alot. People who are well-fed and educated are just as self-centered as those who suffer in poverty and lack proper education. The society in The Winner is relatively crude. People live in mud huts, plant their own food, and receive a simple education compared to the West. The Shinning Houses evolves around a different part of the spectrum.  The inhabitants live in a section of the western society that does not “[make] their living by physical work (67)”. They are mostly white-collar workers who that are not too terribly wealthy but fare better than most and have high expectations. Yet people in this middle-class, westernized society are just as selfish as those that live in Buganda.[I think you need to specify the type of society in Buganda - primitive/Third World/impoverished/backward] In Buganda, busloads of relatives came to visit Pius, the elderly lottery winner, not because they want to “congratulate” him on his win but because they want to “[clamour] for his attention (98)” and see the “telegram that announced [his] win (99)”. Everyone is concerned about where the money is going and cares little about Pius.