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Baedaman  +  85325 Thu, 31 Mar 05 09:23 AM
Hi,

could sb please take a look on my application for an internship and my CV? Its originally made for South Africa and now used for Malaysia. For Northern America I think there are other rules?! Im more interested into Southeast Asia or Southafrica so is the formal style ok?

Thanx for your time,
Cya Peter




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Dear Sir or Madam,


RE: Internship at Schott AG


With this letter I want to apply for an internship in your company. It should last at least 20 weeks from August 2005 to February 2006 and be focused on the field of Industrial Engineering.

I am 22 years old and I study at a German University of Applied Science, majoring in Production and Automation Engineering. I just finished my Basic Studies with an avarage grade of 1,68. The internship I apply for will be in the fifth semester of my studies, which will last four years alltogether.

I am mostly interested in taking part in some of the following working fields:

- planing, calculation and construction of production equipments
- planing, control and automation of production flows
- work preparation and quality management

As you can see in my CV I have already gathered considerable practical work experience in some of these and other fields. Furthermore I have gained a wide knowledge in computerized environments through my private interest. Additionally to my studies I work as a volunteer in the laboratory for Material Flows and Robotics of our University. The focus of our project is the simulation of a real transportion system in the simulation environment eM-Plant.

I am confident that I can be an active, open minded and ambitious member of your team, willing to contribute to your company during my internship. In completing an internship in Malaysia I see outstanding chances not only to gain new working skills but also to experience an interesting culture and country. The Southeast-Asian region fascinates me since my first visit two years ago. This year I already have been travelling 5 weeks across Indonesia. My English skills are good, beeing able to communicate fluently also about technical topics.


Hoping that my application sounds interesting to you, I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

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Curriculum Vitae


Educational Background:

Since October 2003: Studies at University of Applied Science, Regensburg
Finished Basic Studies
Subject: Production and Automation Engineering
1993 – 2002: Comprehensive Secondary School, Pfarrkirchen
Main Subjects: English, Geography and Mathematics

Occupational Background:

August and September Internship at Dirwimmer Mechanical Engineering, Eichendorf
2004 Duties: Working in the production of different special machines for automotive industry suppliers

February and March 2004 Internship at Knuerr Environments for Electronics, Arnstorf
Duties: maintenance, basics of PLC/SPC programing on Siemens Control System, rebuilding project of an automated transport system from the manufacturer’s control system into a standardized Siemens system

June and July 2003 Internship at BMW AG, Dingolfing
Duties: introduction program into the fundamentals of metal manufacturing

September 2002 – Civilian Service in a Hospital in Eggenfelden
June 2003 Duties: nursing on a station specialized on apoplectic strokes

May – August 2002

Internship at Lindner AG, Slovakia
Experience abroad in the Slovakian producion of a German company
Duties: independent planning of a new computer network including hard- and software for about 50 employee, assistence in installation

1998 – 2002 Several jobs in school vacations, work experience in metal production, automated welding including maintenance and programming of Nokia robots, maintenance of computer systems, webdesign


Details about my studies:
Avarage grade of Basic Studies: 1.68

Additional subjects and interests:
- Spanish basic program (Unicert)
- Additional program with focus on Economics
- Volunteer in laboratory for Material Flows and Robotics in University, simulation
project of a real system in eM-Plant

Special interests and skills:

Languages:
English, fluent oral and written
(main subject in A-Level)
Czech (native language)
Spanish - basics

Computer Skills:
CAD: Pro Engineer, Solid Edge
MS Word, Excel, Powerpoint and similar
Photoshop, Corel Draw and similar,
GoLive, Dreamweaver (Webdesign)
eM Plant (Simtalk), C, MS Visual Basic 6, Borland Delphi, PLC/SPC

Overall I would characterize my skills as comprehensive, being able to get along with new environments very quickly.

Other interests:
Sports, Backpack Travel (Asia), Cooking
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nona the brit  +  86266 Sun, 03 Apr 05 11:39 AM
Hi, I've made a few changes to your letter, see below, but it was basically ok.


I would like to apply for an internship in your company lasting at least 20 weeks from August 2005 to February 2006. I would like to focus on the field of Industrial Engineering.

I am 22 years old and I study at a German University of Applied Science, majoring in Production and Automation Engineering. I have just finished my Basic Studies with an average grade of 1,68. The internship I apply for will be in the fifth semester of my studies, (which will take four years altogether).

I am mostly interested in taking part in some of the following working fields:

- planning, calculation and construction of production equipments
- planning, control and automation of production flows
- work preparation and quality management

As you can see in my CV, I have already gathered considerable practical work experience in some of these and other fields. Furthermore I have gained a wide knowledge in computerized environments through my private interest. In addition to my studies, I work as a volunteer in the laboratory for Material Flows and Robotics of our University. The focus of our project is the simulation of a real transportion system in the simulation environment eM-Plant.

I am confident that I can be an active, open minded and useful member of your team, willing to contribute to your company during my internship. My English skills are good and I am able to communicate fluently about technical topics.

In completing an internship in Malaysia I see outstanding chances not only to gain new working skills, but also to experience an interesting culture and country. The Southeast-Asian region has fascinated me since my first visit two years ago. This year I have already spent 5 weeks travelling across Indonesia.

Hoping that my application sounds interesting to you, I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

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England
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