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Chesneymonkey  #191487  Wed, 01 Feb 06 04:59 PM

Hello everybody,

I need help with motivation letter for scholarschip for 2 days conference in Italy. If I won´t get it, I would not be allowed to go there, because our lab hasn´t got money for travelling. Could you please check it if it make sense and also if grammar is correct? I am not much experienced in English:-(( I have to send it til the end of this week. Thank you so so much in advanceSmile <img src=" src="/emoticons/emotion-1.gif">

Dear Mrs. ***,

I would like to apply for scholarship in the opportunity  of  the First ESH Euroconference On Tumor Banks And Downstream Applications, March 10-12 in Florence. It is important for me to incorporate an international experience into my doctoral study.

I am now in the second year of my study and I am working on my doctoral thesis in Center of Oncocytogenetics in Prague. My work is based on molecular-cytogenetic methods i.e. to be specific I analyse the presence of bladder cancer cells in  urine samples using centromeric and locus-specific probes for I-FISH, isolate DNA from brain and analyse chromosomal abberations using CGH method. The routine work in our lab consist of analyses of chromosomal aberrations in oncohematological samples. I have already presented results of my work at few conferences in the Czech republic, but I have never visited any conference abroad.

I think this event would broaden my scientific experience, it would give me the opportunity to meet researchers from other countries, discuss problems and new approaches to my work.

Thank you very much for considering my application. I look forward to your response.

Yours sincerely Lucie Houskova


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Clive  #192690  Sat, 04 Feb 06 11:20 PM

Hi Lucie,

You have written a good letter. I've made a few changes, please read carefully.

Good luck with the scholarship, and with your work.

Clive

Dear Mrs. ***,

I would like to apply for a scholarship to give me the opportunity to attend the First ESH Euroconference On Tumor Banks And Downstream Applications, March 10-12 in Florence. It is important for me to incorporate an international experience into my doctoral study.

I am now in the second year of my studies and I am working on my doctoral thesis in the Center of Oncocytogenetics in Prague. My work is based on molecular-cytogenetic methods i.e. to be specific, I analyse the presence of bladder cancer cells in  urine samples using centromeric and locus-specific probes for I-FISH, and I isolate DNA from the brain and analyse chromosomal abberations using a /the CGH method. The routine work in our lab consists of analyses of chromosomal aberrations in oncohematological samples. I have already presented results of my work at fa ew conferences in the Czech republic, but I have never attended any conference abroad.

I think this event would broaden my scientific experience. It would give me the opportunity to meet researchers from other countries and to discuss problems and new approaches to my work.

Thank you very much for considering my application. I look forward to your response.

Yours sincerely

  
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Anonymous  #193705  Tue, 07 Feb 06 12:37 PM

Hi Clive,

thank you very very much for your help:-)) I try to improve  my English everyday, but it is so hard. Especially this formal letters:-(. Thanks again. I hope once I would help somebody as you helped me:-))

Bye.

Lucie

  
Anonymous  #193710  Tue, 07 Feb 06 12:44 PM

Hi Clive,

Thank you very very much for the correction. I try to improve my English everyday, but it is so hard, especiall these formal letters:-(( I  think this Englisforum is the best website, I have ever found. Thanks again.

Bye

Lucy

  
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