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Jajar wrote:

Plese check my grammar .I will write it wrong or correct.please check  my work. write a personal e-mail to friend asking if he 0r she would like to go out for lunch with you next Saturday.In your e-mail indicate the kind of food and the restaurant you would like to go to. Dear,BIRD  No comma betweeen Dear and name - comma after name.          Are you fine?I'm fine.Are you free time next Saturday? Would you like to go out for lunch with me then? I like KFC.I remember that you like KFC,too How about KFC at mall?at the Mall/in the Mall Tell Let me know before Saturday. See you.  Insert one space after punctuation. ......................................................................................................... -replies the e-mail accepting the invitation but  you can request or sugguest any changes about the food and places to go. Hi,MOD          I'm fine.I am happy to receive an e-mail from you.I miss you I'd love to go out for lunch with you on Saturday.I like KFC but I've just had KFC with my sister last week.Let's get some icecrem at Swensen.Swensen has a special menu this week.If it's ok for you, I will meet you at Swensen. Mall at 9 am,Saturday.But if you don'tl ike the idea just tell me and we can arrange for our Saturday lunch. See you. ...........................................................................................................

Dear BIRD,
  Are you fine?I'm fine.:-)Long time never see you.Are you free next Saturday?Would you like to go out for lunch with me then?I like KFC.I remember that you like KFC,too.How about KFC at the Mall?Let me know before Saturday.In the end,Hope to see you.And don't forget to take care yourself.:-D
Best regards
MOD

Hi MOD,
  Thanks for the email.I'm fine.I am happy to receive an e-mail from you.I miss you.@^_^@ I'm free. I always go with you.I'd love to go out for lunch with you on Saturday.I like KFC but I've just had KFC with my sister last week.-_-'' Let's get some icecremat Swensen.Swensen has a special menu this week.If it's ok for you,I will meet you at Swensen.See you then.
Kinddest
BIRD

Jajar wrote:

Thanks for help .please check it again     Dear BIRD,   Are you fine?I'm fine.:-)Long time never see you.Are you free next Saturday?Would you like to go out for lunch with me then?I like KFC.I remember that you like KFC,too.How about KFC at the Mall?Let me know before Saturday.In the end,Hope to see you.And don't forget to take care yourself.:-D Best regards MOD   Hi MOD,   Thanks for the email.I'm fine.I am happy to receive an e-mail from you.I miss you.@^_^@ I'm free. I always go with you.I'd love to go out for lunch with you on Saturday.I like KFC but I've just had KFC with my sister last week.-_-'' Let's get some icecremat Swensen.Swensen has a special menu this week.If it's ok for you,I will meet you at Swensen.See you then. Kinddest BIRD