The web site mangled my last post!!! I try again.
I also had experiences like
hers ( must be possessive case of the pronoun "she", not the
adjective, her) too. When During my first
days in United States myfamily and I
lived in at San Diego (we
live in a city, county; we live at an address such as 100 Main Street) for two
months. While we lived (or were living) there on that place my grand
uncle, who
lives in Stockton, called
us and invited us to move into his place. It took two or three
weeks for my mom to decided to move into Stockton. When After my mom made plans
to go, she told to my grand
auntie that we all were going to
move the next nest week. When
my grand auntie heard that, she was
so mad at us that and she
didn't talk to us for three days. Finally the day is came and
we all packed all our stuff and
got to ready
for our new life in the new place. On that day we woke up so early
and I'm glad that my grand auntie took us to the bus terminal. She was nice and
cared for (or took
care of) us.
I know knew she was mad at
us because she didn't don't want us
to leave her alone. She bought some snacks for us to eat while when we were on the
bus. In the bus there were lots people, and most of
them were elderly is the elders. I felt tired when
traveling because it took eight hours sitting on the bus; it made me bored and
tired. When we arrived in Stockton
my family and I lived at my
grand uncle's. He was the one who called my mom and
ask her to move here. We stayed at
his house for two months and then we moved
again. I really hate moving because it is tiring tired to move from to one
place and to
another place that
terrible. But
now I'm glad that my mom doesn't have intentions attention to move
again. When I hear the world "Move" I feel felt tired
and hate it. When moving you needs to buy
new things for your new house and need to decorate and clean them. You
also need to make new friends and learn
about the neighborhood too. I think that
situation is hard for young people like me because we need to deal with our new
life and the things around us. If mom would ask (modal
form is better) asks me to
move to another place, I would
say no to her. I love the place I lived right
now and I know someday I will move again.