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King Vu  +  886453 Fri, 04 Sep 09 01:17 PM
Ciao ,
I'm italy student and i need to write a formal letter to my proffesor for asking my thesis, so i tried a write a letter by myself but i'm not sure about what i done.
Your comment will help me a lot and will improve my writing skill.


Dear Professor ABC,

How are you ?
I have just nice holiday summer in Italy. I passed in year 1st and just received scholarship letter some days ago and preparing for studying in year 2.
I have plan to research my thesis in next semester so I am writing to ask you about problems and contents in it. But I have some ideals about it : I want to research about problems: DEF. I am knowing that this problem is new one in my country and a very vital role in my future application for advanced study.
I would be grateful if professor could give me some comments and suggestions.
I look forward to your positive response.

Best regards,
King Vu
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Anonymous, 82 days ago
Hi there,


How about this?  I'm not quite sure what you mean about the 'problems: DEF' part, so have left it as is and highlighted it in red so you know this part could need some more work.  Hope that helps,


Monty.


Dear Professor ABC,

                                 How are you?  I have just returned from a lovely summer holiday in Italy.


I passed my first year at college and just received my scholarship letter some days ago, so am preparing for my studies in year 2.  I have plans to research my thesis during this next semester, so I am writing to ask for your advice and help.  But I have some ideas about it; I want to research about problems: DEF.  I know that this problem is a new one in my country and it plays a vital role in my future application for advanced study.


I would be grateful professor, if you could give me some comments and suggestions.
I look forward to your positive response.

Best regards,


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